Start with the Nine Yang Magic Skill and Marry Zhou Zhiruo

I'm in a novel that I haven't licked enough in real life. Damn it, the more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes.

Everything else is fine. It is unreasonable for the protagonist to defeat Zhang Wuji, who is completely physical, and even after his skills have improved again, he can still be beaten by Zhang Sanfeng. If he is so strong, there is no way that the original work would be attacked by Zhao Min's men. If he is so strong, he will not let Zhang Cuishan be forced to death. And with Zhang Sanfeng's character, the best he could do was to destroy Song Qingshu's martial arts and imprison him. What's more, he still had the great cause of resisting the Yuan Dynasty, so it was even less possible for him to take the initiative to kill him. The picture of Mitutoyo in the book is pure nonsense made by the author to add a certain death plot for the protagonist. It has no logic.

For example, choose 1 for Jiuyang, choose 2 for Qishang Fist, this is a multiple choice question, you... . Choose 1 Jiuyang, choose 2 Green Hat King, is this a multiple-choice question? ? There's no problem with my psychology, so who else's choice 2? .

There is a part of the plot that I can't figure out. Why does the protagonist have to break the King Kong Demon Circle? You're not Zhang Wuji who wants to save his father, and you don't want the dragon-slaying knife. Why are you going to break Xie Xun out of prison? Are you still fighting for a thankless thing?

Is Zhang Wuji's talent so exaggerated? Isn't it because of the additional attributes brought by the Nine-Yang Divine Art after he perfected it that he learned the technique quickly? Moreover, it is said that the Nine-Yang Divine Art was created by the wine-fighting monk transformed from Xu Zhu of the Eight Parts of Heaven and Dragon by borrowing Wang Chongyang's Nine-Yin Manual and adding the Eight Desolate and Liuhe Self-Exalting Art?

It was good at the beginning, but when it comes to the storm, the protagonist is like a SB, always being influenced by emotions, and thinking that he is righteous.

Song Qingshu should be the leader of the third generation of Wudang, right? His father trained him to be the next generation leader. In this case, Song Qingshu's qualifications should be at least above average. One day of the 100-day training card is worth ten days. One hundred days is equivalent to at least two and a half years of training, right? As a result, he gained the internal power of the Nine Sun Magic Skills for a year, which shows that Song Qingshu's qualifications are at least inferior. How can he become the leader of Wudang with such qualifications? Don't talk about the Nine Yang Magic Power that can be as powerful as ordinary internal power in ten years in one year. Does that mean it's called peerless magic power? If the internal strength grows at the same rate, and one year is equivalent to ten years of normal internal strength, this is called peerless magic. You have to practice Nine Yang Magic for ten years to gain one year of internal strength. What is the use of your Nine Yang Magic that one year is equivalent to ten years of normal internal strength?

It abuses the mainstream, the main character is mentally ill, and the plot is toxic. The more I watch it, the more annoyed I become.

Chapter three poisoned me to death. A hundred-day ten-fold training card is equal to one year

In this book, I exercised my ability to resist drugs intensively. . . I have read fifty chapters and am now resigning. I hope all book friends will know this.

It's very poisonous. I feel like the characters were replaced halfway through. Starting from about 30 chapters, the literary youth suddenly became more and more poisonous. The protagonist's IQ dropped. The heroine was obviously doing very well in practicing martial arts to survive in order to survive. Then suddenly the heroine became pregnant and the protagonist's IQ dropped. First, the injured and pregnant wife was allowed to fight and was taken advantage of by the enemy, and then it was the classic "big and small". The writing style changed so much that I doubted the substitution.

The author likes to play awkward, and his writing style is particularly immature.

It seems that there is no point in dancing. Just dance and say goodbye. You can't even do it if you waste time.

Doesn't the main plot go through the death plot? Why don't you just hide your name anonymously? This ghost can find you.

The protagonist inherits the character's name and also directly inherits the character's shameless and dog-licking attributes? What a perfect match, brought to life by a shamelessly nasty pug. .

Will Shaolin Temple and Zhang Wuji both suffer? ? ? You are talking too much. People have already achieved great success in the Nine-Yang Divine Art, the Great Shift of the Universe, and Tai Chi. How about you achieve great success in the Nine-Yang Divine Art? To cripple people? ? ? If you have the Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms plus the Nine-Yang Divine Art, I will accept it. Bullshit is too much nonsense

This plot is indeed a forced feeding of poison

It's poisonous, it's torture for the sake of torture, it would be a pity not to write romance,

Rubbish, vomited all over, so disgusting, brainless and arrogant

The starting point is that now anyone can write a book

There is such a comparable male protagonist in the world 🙂

One chapter of the article, half of it is psychological description, speechless

I said before that I am not a tormentor, but I really don't see the joy in what I wrote later. I suggest you read more about how to write a good article to feel good... I hope it will change next time.

It would be a pity for this author not to write about female channels

Good guy, this time-traveling node is invincible. I traveled there specially to take over. It's amazing 👍 I admire it 🙏

If you say here that the protagonist is not good, it actually means that the author's creative ability is not good.

It's not like martial arts where martial arts are prohibited and people act haphazardly, but more like a plot killing full of calculations. To see the calculation, it is better to travel back in time to the Warring States Period to go to Pang Juan, Sun Bin, and Tian Ji to race horses...

At first I could watch it without using my brain Later I lost my brain and couldn't stand it anymore I just saw Luo Qingyun's identity revealed and I really couldn't stand it anymore. Looking at you, I might as well find a romance novel

It turns out that the author has stopped updating. After reading the comments, there are so many people criticizing the author. No wonder the author doesn't update. I think the author's writing is quite good. I read it for several days and saw the position where the update was discontinued. I was still unsatisfied. Life is full of regrets

It should be written as a cool novel. I remember that there are a few martial arts-themed novels where the protagonist sees the injustice in the world and just sweeps all the way to get through it. It is also very interesting. For example, in the first story of Yitian Slaying the Dragon, if the protagonist is a family member who was killed by Xie Xun, then the protagonist Even an ordinary disciple of the Huashan sect. The protagonist wants to kill Xie Xun, and then Zhang Wuji wants to protect him. Then the conflict comes, and then they fight all the way. Zhang Wuji Shaolin Mingjiao Wudang Emei, after fighting them all, the story is over. Don't have women, women will only affect the speed of drawing the sword.