Douluo Jueshi: Who Let Him Join Shrek!

My evaluation is: it perfectly inherits the dregs of the Third Young Master of the Tang Family, and its writing style is not as good as that of the Third Young Master of the Tang Family. Pretend to be low-level, conceited and trustworthy. Old bookworm, run away quickly, this article is not worth reading even if it is a novel.

It's really speechless because of the constant addition of minor poisons. The author was indeed domesticated by Shrek, and the emotional writing is stiff and boring. Every time the protagonist does something slightly important, accidents always happen. TNN has done it four times, and the protagonist's combat power and cultivation level are suppressed. The two plot twists also make people feel very "forced" (one is that the protagonist fails to compete in the Soul Master Competition, and the other is that the protagonist's cultivation level is forcibly stuck at level 69). Another thing that is very speechless is that the protagonist actually absorbed a head soul bone that is tens of thousands of years old. (You are a fan, even if you are not better than Huo Yuhao, you must be about the same as him. No matter how awesome you are in the tens of thousands of years, you can't compare to hundreds of thousands of years. You are really the most awesome protagonist among peerless fans in my opinion). So even if the protagonist is clearly a time traveler but is no different from a native, is it possible that the author is also a native? (Don't talk about the sea of ​​spirits being eroded by the spirit of the evil soul master. This stupid plot was not written by the author. An evil soul master who is one level higher than the protagonist has not been eliminated for several months. In the end, he had to absorb soul bones). I also saw other people's comments on QQ Reading saying that the protagonist was stuck at level 69 for three years. When he broke through, not only did he not enter Contra, but he also lost all the training plug-ins. He went to the far north and was beaten. Forget about Tianmeng Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor was also given to Huo Yuhao. The co-author also liked to be a nanny. Fortunately, I didn't see that much later. Anyway, my head hurts from being poisoned now. It seems that the author felt uncomfortable seeing more readers for this book.

Shen Nong's poison test is over. I haven't skipped this book since the first chapter. The protagonist is an aboriginal who has traveled through time. I haven't read the original work. The author is also a no brainer. Super Martial Spirit Heart of Gold. According to common sense, the addition of the heart-like martial spirit to the body. I think it should be second only to the Ultimate Power (or comparable to the Ultimate Power) in this book. The protagonist, the level 38 Golden Heart Soul Master, according to the author's writing, has physical fitness comparable to that of the Soul Sect. What is this concept? Basically, as long as you have a beast spirit, your physical strength at this level is comparable to that of a soul sect. What is the heart of gold? Not to mention the Soul King. You just said that it is normal to be comparable to the Soul Emperor. The original work also clearly stated that Huo Yuhao's class was the class with the most geniuses and the most outstanding talents. But in that case there were only four soul masters. Apart from this, there are no great soul masters above level 28. But what are you writing here? As far as the top four and three groups I have seen so far, apart from this time-travelling native, there are at least two soul masters, three 29th-level great soul masters, and no less than 20 great soul masters above level 25. What's more, there is still one group of the semi-finals that has not been exposed. Count Ma Xiaotao. What is this concept? In the original version of Ma Xiaotao and Dai Yueheng, Ma Xiaotao was at most a Soul Master, and Dai Yueheng looked like he was level 28 or 29. Ling Luochen in the original work seems to be 17 or 18 years old, one year younger than them, and then a level 55 soul king. But now you write it as the same age, so her talent in the co-author's book has been raised to level 26 in 7 years? Minus the three levels of absorbing soul rings, that's level 23? Are you kidding me that I got promoted to level 23 in 7 years? Even if you write it as level 26, I won't criticize you like this. To sum up, Shen Nong's relatives have died with one single step.

Shen Nong has tried the poison. The author's writing is not very good, and the plot is not very good. He also likes to delete posts. He said that he was happy but unhappy. He insisted on going to Shrek. I ran away anyway.

You like to work part-time, and you also like to do free labor. You are here to learn and become stronger. What good will it do for you to become stronger if you spend three years working on an assembly line?

It feels like the author was domesticated by Shrek before writing the book, so it makes sense for him to write a domesticated protagonist.

In the future, I will directly inherit two god positions. This author is trying hard to persuade you to quit. The first God of War of Dai Mubai is a second-level god, and the second Sun God is also a second-level god. With the talent of the protagonist you described, who can stand to have two second-level gods?

All the machine resources were given to Huo Yuhao as a nanny 😒

This book is probably a single heroine. The protagonist only inherits a second-level war god and cannot take people to the divine world. Zhang Lexuan because Dai Mubai wants the protagonist to inherit his own war god, Zhang Lexuan tries to find a way to get a god for Zhang Lexuan. So it should be single, and what if I said that the author, your protagonist is so talented, just give him a second-level god. Other fan fiction authors should at least inherit the first-level gods or create their own gods or something, but your good protagonist is nothing.

I can understand you even if you want to whitewash Xuanzi, but I can't understand if you want to whitewash Zhou Yi.

Hurry up and download the book, the plot is too slow, I keep filling in, and I have already subscribed to it with dozens of chapters. .

Post a post and talk about it. First of all, the timeline of this book is set seven years before Huo Yuhao entered Shrek. In other words, the setting seven years ago was written by me. With me as the protagonist, there will definitely be a difference in the soul power level of the characters, and even other geniuses will emerge. This can be seen as a chain reaction of the protagonist coming here. Second, I wanted to write Shrek's line, so I set the protagonist's city in a remote place in the far north. I knew that Shrek didn't know about the Ontology Sect, because Shrek's reputation is greater than that of the Ontology Sect. I don't understand why some people are entangled in joining the Ontology Sect. Third, I can accept criticism, but please read it carefully before criticizing. That Shen Nong insisted on saying that Ling Luochen and Dai Yueheng were not from the same class. The two people I checked on the Internet were both nineteen years old when they met Huo Yuhao. Why not set it as one class?

A member of the Tianhun Empire, and he is still the original martial soul. If you don't go to the original sect, why should you go to Shrek?

It can only be said that Shennong tasted a hundred herbs. After reading six chapters, you should really run away.

How can I keep staring at other girls after dinner, saying that I will wait for you to finish eating, clear my table and leave. There is no hatred or resentment. It is so inhumane. It is hard to imagine how good the subsequent articles will be.

Now that I have finished reading it, let me just say it The taste is really close to the original work, a bit like Super Huo Yuhao. I can't say whether it is a shortcoming, but at least I have finished reading it As a cool article, it is still a plus point to open the game without a system. In comparison, ding, get the new life gift pack, get twin martial arts and so on. , The protagonist's Book of Elves is better It's good not to rob Xiao Huo's resources. Compared with rushing to grab Xiao Huo's opportunity and then leaving out some points to give Xiao Huo a good air, this book doesn't look down on Xiao Huo's opportunity at all, and it is obviously more comfortable to read It can also be divided into primary and secondary. It only writes what the protagonist sees, and does not focus on Xiao Huo's senses. Moreover, it is very novel to have a battle of wits and courage with Tang Buddha before the protagonist is born. If you are tired of watching that, just watch Tang Buddha pretending to be a hypocrite The above is considered an advantage. In the latest chapters, the protagonist has become more and more funny. I have always had a good time fighting before, and posting with the senior sister. Then switch between doing some practical things But these chapters are obviously going to expand towards the Shura field. I don't recommend it. I suggest you directly let the protagonist know that Ma/Ling would rather die than become gods together. After the protagonist knows it, accept it and quickly end this so-called emotional drama.

It's well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

Very good. I like to keep fighting.

If there are too many female protagonists, don't watch it, it's not good to watch.

He ran away. I heard on Douyin that he is a second-level god.

It doesn't match the previous one, and it copies a lot of the original work.

Write a single heroine with multiple heroines and a mermaid

Can anyone tell me if it will be a single heroine or multiple heroines? Even though he never said it, the author kept making dramas between Ma Xiaotao and Lin Nuo.

It's just like watching the mortals and seeing the pill formation to overcome the heavenly tribulation, and the Doupo fellows seeing that the Po Zong Dan has Dan Lei, which is the peak of the seventh level.

Dear author, please finish it as soon as possible!

Chapter 270: Star Luo Competition, Chapter 580: Sun and Moon Competition

Please update more. I don't know whether to add more updates as mentioned before 😡