A Fantasy Version of Douluo Dalu

After reading so many Douluo fans, the author's settings are the most complete, and most of the settings are very consistent with a real world. A lot of opinions were written into my heart, and I also filled in a lot of holes in the original work to rationalize it. At this point, the author is careful. Some readers are impatient. Just ignore them and read the book to see the whole world. On this point, I support the author! I hope the author can write it for a longer time, so that it is not a routine book, and it is not the kind of book where the subsequent plot can be seen at a glance.

The Douluo worldview is a purely fantasy worldview of belief in gods. There is no knowledge of meridians, acupuncture points, yin and yang, heaven and earth, and humanistic thinking. You must know that the martial arts lineage is prone to ruthless people! Every few thousand years, a ruthless person who can cut the sky with a sword, conquer half of the sky, and shatter the void will emerge. Every hundred years, a ruthless person will emerge who is number one in the world, a martial arts myth. To be honest, if Douluo were in the world of martial arts, the legend of dragon slaying could be compiled into poetry within a thousand years, as a child would know. In three thousand years, the sword will open the gate of heaven, and in ten thousand years, the immortal family will seize all opportunities in the divine world.

Unorthodox fan fiction, Douluo background world view, written a hundred years before the birth of the third brother, it can be regarded as a prequel. I have read most of it now, and except for the fact that the growth of the protagonist feels a little slow, there is nothing wrong with it in terms of logical conception, sentences, paragraphs, and plot settings. After the protagonist awakens in the early stage and obtains the best mutant martial soul, he also obtains an unreliable system, which significantly promotes the plot of the story and the sense of rhythm is also significantly enhanced. It can be seen that the author is very thoughtful. If he continues to work on his bold ideas, he should be able to become a fairy tale. Come on, Aoli!

Slip. There are just too many peripherals. I can't stand it anymore. And the protagonist doesn't even have a plan to become a god. For example, treasures such as whale gum jelly grass and ice and fire dragon king soul bones. Wuhun is also too perverted. All the ten ancient divine swords are here. Too flashy. It would be better to inherit the throne of Shura God behind the Seven Killing Sword Ultimate Gold. Fitting and reasonable. Ten divine swords is too outrageous. One handful is enough to reach the sky. To use an analogy. Just like how a plane like Douluo could raise a Daluo Golden Immortal. No matter how fancy and peripheral the changes are, it is extremely unreasonable. Not Douluo at all😅

I was drawn in after reading the introduction. After reading more than a dozen chapters, something seemed more and more wrong. Then I read through the comment section. Most of them said it was too watery. There were too many settings and it was too confusing to remember. The protagonist had no role. He was only nine years old after more than 200 chapters. The martial arts training was too exaggerated. The system was too sudden and so on. People who read this book are attracted by your introduction, and they are all reading about the growth and rise of the protagonist and his family. I read comments in your more than 400 chapters that the protagonist only appears in less than 50 chapters. You keep introducing the settings and background, and there are 40 or 50 chapters in one battle. The plot is dragging. The setting should serve the plot rather than using the plot to reveal the setting. Today's society is impetuous and fast-paced. I am already very tired from work. I want to read a novel to relax after get off work. You have so many characters, so many settings, and the expressions are so confusing. Fortunately, old bookworms can see the back. For those who are used to reading cool novels, no one will be able to read it. To sum up, the author doesn't understand secondary creation or fan fiction. He has the intention to use this as the basic framework and modify it to create an original fantasy novel, and then improve his writing style. The results are still good, but the author has taken the wrong path. (This is just a personal opinion. These frameworks of the author are still very good, but it is a pity that they should not be used in Douluo, and the writing style is not mature enough.)

I watched it for 5 days from beginning to end, but it wasn't too detailed, so I'm going to go back and watch it again. All the settings in this book are all on what I like, including family training, weakened group portraits, and the setting of Douluo Wuhun. Because the article was written about Douluo a hundred years ago, it is basically out of the scope of the original protagonist group. However, judging from the author's layout, he basically wants to write about the protagonist group, and then it will be a battle between the protagonist's juniors. The whole book is very rigorous, with many foreshadowings, but there is basically filling in at the end. It is very interesting and can even be read again and again. It is a fine book. Strongly recommended🤓🤓🤓

The author's book is actually not suitable for publishing on paid software. The author's writing is brilliant and thoughtful. I believe the author wanted to write a classic online article, but the author's starting point was wrong. It may be that Qidian is not an attractive fantasy novel, and many introductory novels are difficult to explain in one sentence. Readers of Qidian do not like novels with ambushes and foreshadowing. Moreover, even if the novel is charged after 100 chapters, in fact, the author has suffered a big loss by introducing the background setting in the beginning. A more complete Douluo background was written in just one hundred chapters and hundreds of thousands of words, so that the protagonist did not occupy one-tenth of the novel's space, making people feel less immersed in it. The space for the protagonist in the later paid chapters is also pitifully small. It is completely set up with a lot of background, and where is the protagonist? Many readers will not pursue the perfection of the background, but the reasonableness of the background and the sense of participation of the protagonist. For example, Wuhun is a Knife and another Ultimate Ice Wuhun written by Douluo Wenyoubu are more popular than the author's novels. The background introduction is not well set. It does not explain anything. It only cheats on the original plot and recruits girls along the way to open a harem. If it were not both a new book and slow to update, otherwise I would have continued to subscribe if there were no problems. It is meant to attract readers and give them a sense of involvement, and the author's book is more like a book written for himself, filling in holes so that the protagonist has no sense of involvement and the reader has no sense of involvement. To put it bluntly, the reader is here to read the protagonist, and the rest is reasonable. For example, Gu Zhenren and Da Ai Immortal Lord, its setting background may not be as complete as the author's and may not be introduced as much by the author. Even the Legend of Human Ancestor may be just compiled when it is used. The background introduction of the Ten Immortals and Demon Lords is completed and there is not much introduction. It is very It would have been a matter of one or two more chapters, and Gu Yue Fang Yuan did not recall the reincarnation past when he was the leader. The plot is not better than your author's novel and can withstand scrutiny, but it is because the protagonist Gu Yue Fang Yuan, the devil, is charming enough that readers can identify with it. The author uses the protagonist's perspective and experience to describe the Douluo in the author's heart, rather than relegating the protagonist to a corner.

The author's supplement to Douluo's world view is the best I have ever seen in a fic. However, in this case, the author insists on writing a young Siming who does not belong to Douluo in a self-indulgent manner. It is very dramatic, and the emotional drama is too abstract. Moreover, it is said to be a single female protagonist, but Bo Saixi has a liking for the protagonist inexplicably.

There are a lot of characters, a lot of opinions, and a lot of explanations. It makes my head hurt. When I read the names of various characters, I have to check who the person in front is. I also have to pick out the male and female protagonists among these piles of text. Oh, the female protagonist currently has a transparent background. Ban, although I follow the male protagonist every day, and I guess I will in the future, I just wanted to see a different Douluo and an original single female protagonist for the novelty of the book's setting, but I ended up getting buried in these piles of papers. Alas, the author's writing skills are really good, and the words are very beautiful, but it is really verbose. . Look, I'm confused. .

Let me answer a few of your questions. First, regarding the previous issue of too many settings. My original idea was to embody the elite education of a well-known family, divided into two aspects: civil and military. The aspect of martial arts is the five inheritances of the Chen family, the best family in the world - mind, body, eyes, mind, and skills. That is, Zhongzheng Sword Qi Technique, Sword Shadow Body, Star Sword Eyes, Seven Kills Qi Condensation Technique, and Seven Sword Control Techniques. In addition, there are three years of medicinal bathing starting at the age of three to strengthen the body and practice basic martial arts. The literary aspect is a lot of cognitive education. The Chen family is a famous family. The families in this article all have inheritance. From the age of 6 to 12, when they are laying the foundation, they all study in their own junior school. There is no need to go out to study. Cognitive education reflects the knowledge of the soul master system, soul master training paths (i. E. Classification, seven in total), historical secrets, personal connections, vassal power, economic strength, cultural inheritance, family influence, and even family back-up. During this period, I often rationalized the inaccuracies in the original work and crazily filled in the holes. Many people regard the cognitive education of the protagonist as a setting. They skip it because they don't like it, and then say that there is no protagonist. The core of "Dou Yi" is love. Therefore, there is a big villain Wuhun Palace, several development places Nottingham, Shrek, Killing City, Poseidon Island, several alliances Sanshangzong, two royal families, and the Blacksmith Association. Others, no more, the circle is very small, so the total number of soul masters is not high, one hundred thousand. The main body of this book is development, the development of aristocratic families, sophistication of people, intrigues, love and hatred, so the circle must be large enough. There are a large number of forces and neutral organizations, including the villain Crimson Church, the Three Imperial Families of the Tie Guan Alliance, the Twelve Families of the Allied Forces Great Soul Fighting Field, and the competing interests Wuhun Palace. Therefore, there are 8 super powers, 60 top powers, and hundreds of first-class powers. So, a Douluo Jianghu appeared. In the article, Douluo Continent covers an area of ​​55 million square kilometers, the same as Eurasia, and has a population of 1.5 Billion, which is not much. At a ratio of one thousandth, there are 1.5 Million soul masters. Due to the dimensionality increase of the world, it has now grown to 2.2 Billion or 2 million. At a ratio of 0.1‰, There are more than 200 titled Douluo. Because it is an aristocratic family, it is a family article and a group portrait article. There are dozens of people in four generations, a large number of branches (33 branches), and follower families (the Zhaowu 13th surname of the inner nine families, the outer four families, and dozens of other middle and lower families), and group portraits appear. So far, light has appeared in the names of thousands of people. Except for Chapters 30 and 40 of Liuguangpo's Wolf-Slaying War, which are group portraits, the other thousands of chapters are from the perspective of the protagonist. Second, there is the issue of the protagonist's young age. I don't know why everyone must follow the time points of leaving home at 12 years old and becoming an adult at 18 years old. Is it okay to go out at the age of 9? Tang San is free-range, in junior college from 6 to 12 years old, there is nothing to write about. But in this book, the protagonist belongs to the best family in the world, so there is too much to write about. The protagonist experienced a war that exterminated his family at the age of 6, traveled to the mainland and experienced two wars at the age of 9, became the family's economic and management minister at the age of 10, in charge of the family's economic development, and officially became the young master of the Chen family at the age of 13. He has grown to 1.7 Meters tall, is a level 57 soul king, and has soul saint combat power. With a developing protagonist group and thousands of soul masters under his command, why do we have to worry about the nominal age? During this period, the protagonist's knowledge and mental age of the previous life showed a thorough wisdom, even evil, from the perspective of Douluo Continental people. Moreover, becoming an adult at the age of 18 is in the Blue Star Celestial Dynasty, but Douluo Continent is a medieval setting. Can't it be done earlier? Tang San became a god at the age of 25. I have written so many chapters, and the protagonist is young, which means he has a lot of experience. Third, there is the problem of system cheats. The goal of this book, just like the title, is to overthrow the divine world, at least to resist the 2,000 gods headed by the five god kings. Even if the protagonist becomes a god, conspiracy theory can't do it. As long as the opponent's IQ is online, I can't do it no matter what. So, become an immortal. So, we need a golden finger, a cultivating-style lottery machine, the origin of which will be introduced later. In the current lottery, except for the heroine Shao Siming Xiaoyi, the rest are all exercises, martial arts, and items. They are all things used by martial arts and cultivators.