The Sunny and Cheerful Boy of Death

It's okay. I can see that the author has a lot of foreshadowing, but I don't know if I can take it back later. As for writing, original writing is not that good, and fan fiction is indeed a little bad. I hope the payment will not be so bad.

You didn't put any thought into the name of your protagonist. The ancestor of the Sifengin family - Sifengin Senni, The previous head - Sifengin Yorichi, The current head - Sifengin Yushiro, Obviously people give names based on numbers and time. The protagonist is called Sifengin Yilong? At first glance, it's a fake!

I'm really convinced. The writing is so silky, you are the one who was born to eat this bowl of rice! I'm really not jealous of you kid making money, no, I have to stuff money into it for you (I'm so speechless!) Look at this and add some finesse to it.

It feels a bit strange. What is the main line of this book? Reform Soul Society? The protagonist participated in every event, but I don't know what the purpose of the participation was. The impression I got from reading the whole story was that the protagonist turned away like a passerby and forgot about it. The protagonist's image was not successfully created, and there were too many Riddler plots.

AI painting - Si Fengyuan Yilong To be honest, the depiction of the shinigami in terms of the collarbone is okay

The author's courage is commendable, he actually dared to write about the god of death, which is very commendable...! I remember that my grades on writing about Death were really poor, no matter how good you were at writing it.

I have read more than 100 chapters and have no idea what the main plot of this book is. What is the main character's purpose? Is it for the Spirit King? To collect a harem? To stop Aizen? Even if it's just a vague idea of ​​becoming stronger, it's okay. Some plots seem reasonable, but they don't stand up to scrutiny at all.

It feels like Sunshine Boy is crazily trying to win favor with girls for Ichigo, and because Shiromao is an old father who only comes home twice a year because of his accident on the road trip, Sunshine Boy's real name should be Kuroki Ichiryu 😁

It's not a foreshadowing at all. It's a foreshadowing that readers tend to overlook when reading it. It's only when the secret is revealed later that they think about it. This book is simply written by The Riddler. It's just telling you that a story happened here, but I won't tell you.

The advantages are that it is very imaginative, even if you read a lot of Bleach fans, you will not be bored. The disadvantages are that the threshold is relatively high, and people who don't know enough about Bleach will be confused. There are many plots about the Riddler, and the author has laid some foreshadowings that are easy to understand. The character design of the protagonist is also average, and the plot develops too fast. It is a full-level account that has been developed for many years. All kinds of back-up protagonists have been arranged, and they are waiting for the enemies to appear and then concoct them one by one. It is easy to not write anything in the mid-term. After all, the Death map is not big, unless a new map is opened, but there is no foreshadowing in this regard in the early stage. The audience is too small, and the subject matter is not popular enough and the above restrictions make it easy to

Where is the sunshine and cheerfulness? Looking at it makes me want to sleep

The Bee family is a subordinate noble of the Sifengyuan family. Even the position of captain of the second division is guarded by the Sifengyuan family. As long as the Sifengyuan family is capable of succeeding as the captain, the Bee family will have to abdicate in favor of others. This is the power of the five nobles. Room 46 is a dog raised by a big noble. Even if the Sifengyuan branch is divided, Room 46 would not dare to touch it. Rukia was entangled with Baymax that time. Otherwise, with the power of the Kuchiki family, one of the five nobles, Rukia would not be executed even if she killed all the 46 families.

I was almost dissuaded by the name. The background has been greatly changed. The current world can be regarded as a unified dynasty (it is speculated that it was founded by the protagonist, and there is a high probability that he is the ancestor of the Quincy). One family is the child of the protagonist. The mother is not dead. They reunite with the family for two days on August 15th every year. They are considered to be in jail. The Quincy's power and the Shinigami's power within Ichito's body are different from the original work. On the surface, the protagonist was rescued by Aizen from the Hueco Mundo Expedition a hundred years ago. He established a prosecutorial team and encouraged the rebellious elements in the original work to Room 46, as if they were lackeys. In fact, he was waiting for them to be taken over by Aizen. Looking forward to the follow-up

Really write your name upside down 🙂

The subject matter is good, and I still like this kind of boss who is behind the scenes. The problem is that the main plot of the protagonist is not clear, and there is no villain to be fooled by the protagonist, and there is no decent guy to be fooled. After a battle, the protagonist rushes to steal the spotlight, and then the meaning is not clear. All in all, I didn't see anything exciting.

The author of The Riddler, are you messing with my mentality? This is not it. I was confused when I read it. Where the protagonist is from, is he aboriginal, what does he want to do, and whether there are plug-ins. He even didn't explain whether the heroines have any. The whole story of The Riddler is based on guessing. I am really convinced.

Water is so outrageous that the plots of several episodes in the animation can be written into more than 70 chapters. If the water settings and repeated dialogues are deleted, the book will be reduced by 70%.

Looking forward to it, I still remember how happy I was when I watched Dongdong Da's "Dimension Forum". I hope it will be a good story this time.

Did I miss something? What does the protagonist want to do? Why did you watch it for a long time just to offend everyone and then get involved in the plot?

Starting from the book of Yan Lingshi, he started cutting again and again. As expected, he was addicted to cutting.

I feel like the author's ranking of each person's strength is a bit nonsense. According to Tieba, it is anime > comics > novels. Because now the author of animation is fully involved in modifying the script and using it to supplement the settings. According to the arrangement of Tieba. The current strength ranking is: Ariha>Ichinoto>Aizen>Monk>Yamamoto Yamamoto lost too many positions in the latest anime. A thousand years ago, when he beat Ariha, he closed his eyes and the deputy captain Hagar made a sneak attack. The following are some of their strength levels. I chose two of them. There may be different opinions on the bottom ones, but the top ones are basically unchanged. Of course, the anime is not finished yet. If it is true as they said that the author is involved in the anime and is adding settings, then there may be changes in some of the people behind it.

Hasn't it been updated in a year?

Annotate your own personal settings after the chapters.... If you don't know how to tell a story, just send an outline

The author's skill is not good enough, resulting in an awkward plot, mixed characters, and superficial writing. He always wants to express deep content, but is constrained by his skill, making it seem pretentious.