In Marvel, but I'm Bloodharbor Ripper

The protagonist's Pike is the incarnation of force and regularly kills evildoers. This is different from those system template incarnations (I personally don't like system templates). Let's talk about the advantages first. So far, there is no excessive licking or blackening. Whether it's the attitude towards SHIELD or towards Tony and the others. But the shortcomings are character issues and pacing issues. Personally, I think the pace is a bit fast, first of all, Reality Stone. The water ghost itself already has the strength of the Hulk. Plus reality gems. The combat power jump is a bit too fast (in my opinion). Also, the water ghost talks a bit too much every time he's in Amomum villosum. Pike himself in the original work is a terrifying figure who talks little but kills invisible people. But when I was killing Kingpin and others, I personally felt that I talked a bit too much. All in all, it's pretty good so far. If the rhythm and combat power are well controlled, it won't be a big problem. Come on

Don't read it, newcomers. This book is not finished. The updated content is just random writing to get perfect attendance. It's gone since chapter 83. I'm convinced.

First of all, I must admit that the Ancient One Master is a very powerful Supreme Mage. What I wrote in more than ten chapters did mean to forcibly downgrade the character, and it became a bit of a poisonous point. I solemnly apologize here, but because the plot involved is too long, it is difficult to correct it... I did not grasp this degree well, and I apologize again. Next, I want to discuss the strength of the Ancient One Master with the audience. Although the comments are all saying that the Ancient One Master is organized, and behind it is an abstract god like eternity (of course, some of the words were too intense and have been deleted by me). Yes, Ancient One is indeed true, but in the movie she is just a mage who has lived for more than 600 years and needs to rely on dark energy to continue her life. She does not mention eternity, so some readers here confuse the two. But are these readers wrong? Of course there is nothing wrong, because the expressiveness of the movie is real, and the expressiveness of the comics is also real. It seems to me that it is normal to have such a reaction. Therefore, in my opinion, although I don't know how determined the Ancient One in the movie is to protect the earth, if there is a more powerful power of dark energy in front of her, will she really not touch it because of protecting the earth? Furthermore, I think the Ancient One has never seen the Reality Stone. According to the timeline, the Ancient One was born three hundred years after Odin's father sealed the Reality Stone. Of course, it is not certain that the Ancient One told her about the Infinity Stones when she met Eternity in her fugue. All of this is possible. Having said all of this, I am actually just trying to build up my armor. As this is my first book, I really thought about the plot seriously. Of course, there will be many poisonous points that I am not aware of. I would like to thank the readers for their plot discussions and typo corrections. These poisonous points should be regarded as lessons. If my next book is still a Marvel fan, I will definitely not follow the same old path again. Thank you readers for supporting my book, I hope it can give children more tolerance and consideration (bow).

It feels like there is no outline. The first few chapters were quite interesting. Pike's revenge matched well with the Punisher and Daredevil. At least it was a small chapter, adding the basic character of the protagonist and Pike's character. But I didn't expect that it would disappear immediately after that. When I met the Ancient One in Chapter 14, I felt like I couldn't write half a million words, or even two hundred thousand. Pike feels like he is just a character. Except for a few lines at the beginning, later on it feels like his actions are completely divorced from Pike's abilities and personality. The power of the Reality Stone is the main one. The appearance of the Ancient One and Thor brothers and the plot are very random. The name of the protagonist is also very random, just like I wrote it after watching the movie. I wrote while watching. The LOL part was not written well, and the Marvel part is also very random. The author is sure to continue the plot while changing both the Ancient One and Loki. There are too many characters involved in the Ancient One alone. Now that she has no worries, will the plot line of the Marvel movie change? Just like Ethan, he forcibly killed only some people and then died according to the original plot. Do you think they would call for backup if they were attacked? Since you wrote that Pike started killing people, why are there still people left alive? Where did the remaining people come from? It was not clearly stated. There is no deep exploration of the voice in Parker's head, or the impact of LOL's power, or the author's own magically modified settings of Parker, such as the spirit of vengeance in his head. Similarly, there is also the Punisher section. If we write about the power of revenge, whether it is a magical transformation that allows the Punisher to obtain the power of revenge to resurrect his family, or like saving Stark later, giving the Punisher a plot to enter a strange experience, and then saying "It's over", will it be more profound and reasonable? The same is true for the Stark section. There are no similar settings in the later part. It is not clear whether the principle of the list is the same as the original work or the magic modification (are you letting readers who don't know make up their own minds?) In the back, the plot is like diarrhea, as light as running water. It shouldn't be a transformation. It would be better to just let the protagonist become Parker and then control one person. There is also a trap where Osborn and Spider-Man are buried. No one is seen in more than ten chapters, which is too random

Pay attention to the party and enter with caution. There is basically no trace of the synopsis, and the description of the characters is a typical lack of motivation. The motivations of the supporting characters come from the original work, and the protagonist adopts Pike's setting. Since Pike itself can only be said to be used to exaggerate the darkness of Piraeus, the inner part is more similar to urban ghost stories. Without the background of its own era, it will seem unclear, so the motivation of the protagonist is even more rigid. The improvement of Goldfinger... How should I put it? Goldfinger lacks a core concept, has no core such as "freedom", "goodwill" and "obsession". It does not localize settings other than combat power, so it is only a "tool for the protagonist to gain the ability to show off". In other words, it cannot catalyze the growth of the protagonist's arc. If we only use cool writing as a criterion, we can only say that we must first remove the brain.

The pace is too fast, I feel like I won't be able to write for long

Top-notch author writes casually about Hun Quanqin. Don't read, don't subscribe, just leave.

The writing is okay, but there are various small reading points. Especially when the protagonist takes a plane to Afghanistan, wouldn't it be better to use skills to go there? After taking the plane, Snake Shield may investigate you and force your relationship.

I signed a contract today, so let's talk about the new book issue. The new book period is from the signing of the contract to the time it is put on the shelves. You can only update it twice a day to ensure that you can eat up the exposure of the new book list. Otherwise, there will be no traffic. Moreover, weekly reading is also the key to whether it can be recommended. I hope everyone will try not to keep the book. Even if you do, please turn to the last page. The updates will accumulate and explode after it is put on the shelf. New readers and new books, please support!

I haven't started reading it yet, but just looking at the title, isn't a nursing home worth a bunch of gold coins? Can you give me an assist then?