I’m on the National Team, So It’s Only Natural I’m in Showbiz

Nowadays, entertainment novels are all about systems, and everything that is reasonable and unreasonable is pushed to the system. The protagonist has multiple jobs and is able to do all decathlons. All of this makes me tired. Same After reading the previous books of Jianxian, he is very strict about music and entertainment novels (he went to CNKI to check a lot of papers for the novel). He is not the kind of ignorant pretentious person. This kind of pretentious person has a sense of high-end, neither brainless nor ignorant. He is good at popular science and will let you learn other things. I believe this will be an amazing book🤭🤭

The failure of the author's transformation is such a sad thing, why do I want to laugh so much 🤭

When the author writes about professional terms, it is best to give examples. After all, I don't even understand basic music theory 😜.

The biggest problem of the author is that the characters are too flat, and the plot is the same. I can understand most of the problems of a novice writer. I have also written novels, and it has been more than ten years since I read novels. I make some immature suggestions, and you can see how to change them, but many things are precipitation and accumulation, just like you cannot ask a young man of 16 or 17 to write about the joys and sorrows of life. Many times it is not that he does not know, but that he cannot do it. I can understand these. I will not talk nonsense anymore. Let's talk about the problems. The first is the flattening of the characters. There is no psychological description or profile description for all the people, and the logical relationship between people is also very rigid. For many things, the language is weak and the writing is pale. He needs examples to prove it. Although most online novels are short stories, some detailed descriptions related to characters can better reflect a person's personality. For example, what a person's room is like, what kind of clothes he wears, and what little actions he likes to do can help people understand a person better. Besides, there are very few descriptions of other people except Pig's Feet. The whole text gives people a feeling of being irrelevant. For example, there is no emotional connection between Pig's Feet and the heroine. When the hero sings, he looks at the heroine affectionately. I just feel awkward and there is no emotion at all. Then all the CP derivatives established based on this point collapsed. Secondly, the logic of the writing is also very strange. The novel must have foreshadowing and continuity. Everything you write should be useful. If you want to write something, you must design a story line of your own. Archeology and rap are very weak, as if you write wherever you think, and suddenly jump out. The mood is incoherent and very fragmented. The last thing is personal thought. Just like music also expresses emotions, novels also express the author's emotions. So face yourself, what kind of world do you want to write about, what kind of person do you want to write about, and what kind of life you live. What you write is a world and living people. Think more about what choices he will make and what he will think. I think the author's writing power will be greatly improved. I like the author's opening chapter very much. He is a gentle and gentle man, but the subsequent plot development, writing logic, and character images are quite problematic. Of course, this does not mean that there are problems. I still like this book very much. I hope I can take some time to think about these things and bring in the pig's feet. Of course, these are my personal superficial understandings. I hope the author will get better as he writes more.

Looking at the introduction, you can tell that it's the same routine as a full-time artist. He wants to write about everything, and then he pretends to be cool. Isn't it good to specialize in one? Do you really want to earn royalties? It would be faster to rob a bank

You really offend the capital, and you will become the second wave in every minute.

LSY

I bought the book yesterday and saw an update today. To be honest, in so many years since I started, this is the first time I have seen a book that presents zz and music, or even more than just music, in such an easy-to-understand manner. It's fun to read without thinking, but some chapters are even more fun to read with your brain When I saw Runzhi's paragraph, it happened to be playing on the speaker The proud young man felt even more excited all of a sudden But I don't know if it was blocked before or something. Why do I feel that there are so few book friends, and there are so few comments. I am not happy if I don't have a book without shady netizens, but the comments of shady netizens are indeed easy to explode, and it is not easy. If you like it, come on, give me a monthly ticket, and hope for more!

The national team's strengths lie in folk music, symphony, etc. If you ask them to play rock, rap or pop, that's nonsense.

Isn't sexual motivation the number one driving force in the idol industry? What kind of Idol is it if it's not sexy? The first purpose of Idol's singing and dancing is to stimulate sexual desire, not to express it. Art requires aesthetics, and nature is frigid... You might as well be the King of Pop. Do you understand that this is the wrong version of the product?