I Opened the Immortal Gate in the Song Dynasty of Tianlong

The concept of destiny feels very awkward in a low-level martial arts world.

This world consciousness system really drags down a good book to a low-to-mid grade. Even the Heavenly Dao of the Primordial World doesn't scheme like this world consciousness.

Not bad, not bad. Actually, there are many areas that can be explored with chakra and the Divine Tree. I've read many novels about the Divine Tree chakra, and they all focus on skills, ninjutsu, and power. What they possess is all from the original work.

This twist of fate really lowered the quality of the book.

The author's imagination is okay, but their math and common sense are severely lacking. Tell me, a sphere with a diameter of 100 li (approximately 50 kilometers) divided into 3 parts, each part being 10,000 zhang (approximately 50 meters)? That's still a mountain? That's absurd.

The concept is great, very imaginative, but I didn't particularly like the writing style. The constant comparisons and belittling of the Otsutsuki clan were rather pointless. The point is to make others see that you're stronger than the Otsutsuki, but the author didn't really make the protagonist seem stronger than the Otsutsuki. And all that disdain for the Otsutsuki was rather tedious.

It was quite sophisticated at first, but it gradually became tiresome, and the protagonist seemed to be overdoing it. It's all just a bunch of scathing remarks, and a one-minute manipulation.

I've noticed that many people believe the protagonist is biased towards the Otsutsuki clan, which is clearly a misconception. First, the Otsutsuki are bandits who forcibly plunder the planet's energy using the Divine Tree to destroy the world. The protagonist uses the Divine Tree for sustainable development, allowing the Divine Tree and nature to progress together.

The male protagonist's current abilities are enough to clean up the earth, and with some effort, destroying a planet isn't out of the question. Hopefully, he can replace the planetary consciousness. That planetary consciousness always seems to be working against the protagonist, yet it's not very powerful; it's quite annoying.

The initial concept of the Heavenly Will was problematic, but the idea of ​​creating a new martial arts path later on is quite interesting. The question now is, what do you want to write about later? Continue to refine the martial arts system, and then have the protagonist forge a new path?