He Is Really Bullying God!

Some opinions This is a story about the protagonist Qiao Yuan becoming an Ascendant, joining the Ember Organization, and getting in touch with various mysterious forces Advantages 1 The world view is rich in structure, integrating online games, magic, cyberpunk, foundation, Cthulhu and other elements. The world view is huge and has enough room for imagination 2 The characters are distinctive. Many supporting characters such as Yan Baobao, Tiger and Gu Xiyue have distinctive characteristics, at least as far as I can think of it 3 The combat power system is novel and the path to sublimation Miraculous modulation and other settings have added a unique combat power system (although the Lord of Mystery has been integrated) Disadvantages 1 The rationality of the plot needs to be strengthened. Some plot turns are abrupt and need more reasonable foreshadowing (the protagonist breaks into the enemy's base camp?) 2 The character description can be more in-depth. Although the character has a distinct personality, it is not three-dimensional enough. For example, when thinking of Yan Baobao, she will think of her liking to eat lollipops. When thinking of tigers, she will think of beautiful girl animation. There is nothing else to say. (Of course, the plot has not yet unfolded, which is understandable) 3 The language is not fluent enough. Some paragraphs are stiff and difficult to understand. I often have to read it several times and there are some typos 4. There are many popular jokes in the article, some of which can make people smile, while others are poorly integrated (maybe it is an advantage for some readers?) In summary, this book is not bad, you can read it, at least you can look forward to the future

From the author's perspective, there are a few things I really want to say. I don't mean to criticize or criticize, just a few suggestions. I came here from the comments in the book review section of other books. There is indeed no explicit rule against this when recommending books, but generally speaking, you contact the author first, and then recommend each other's chapters after others agree. Because promoting a book is essentially to divert readers from others. The new book period is fine, and diverting some attention is only an indirect division of income. If it is put on the shelves, it is a direct division of other people's money. Directly diverting traffic is tantamount to offending others. Some people think it doesn't matter and that's okay, but I'm afraid that some people will be dissatisfied and go to the official group or Long Kong to scold you. A bad reputation does have an impact on attracting popularity, especially for new authors who have not yet solidified a fan base. Moreover, people may report you deliberately. In the current environment, no book can withstand investigation, and reports are often accurate. Therefore, it is safer to contact the author and ask for chapter recommendation, and it is best not to offend others. And the target of the referral is not very suitable. I actually came from the review section of a Pokémon fanfic. It is best to find books of the same type, category, or with similar tags and core themes to attract traffic. Otherwise, readers of books that are completely different from each other are often reluctant to read them. They are likely to leave after reading something novel, which is equivalent to making little profit and offending people out of thin air. There are too few benefits to doing this and it is strongly not recommended. Finally, the recommendation sentence is not appropriate. I don't know whether the accounts used to attract traffic are friends or your own accounts. It's best to change it. First of all, it is better not to follow the crowd but to be innovative. Because if you sew so many things, you are following the trend. Good books have characters that are not familiar and the plot is not cliched. It would be really bad to attract readers who don't follow the crowd. Others may not like to read books that have a strong sense of déjà vu. Secondly, the gimmick of having a voiceover by a loli author is attractive enough. I also emphasize that it is not easy for girls to write books and they may encounter malicious punches from men. I am not provoking confrontation, but I am describing the objective situation. More things are worse than less things. It is safer to remove the part that makes it difficult for girls to write books. I think you must be a new author, both in terms of your writing style and the fact that you attach so much importance to book reviews and read every review, you do seem like a newcomer. If you pass the internal sign, it means that the book must have merit. Be bold and work hard to write. Don't look forward and backward. Come on! 👍

Brothers and sisters, if you like it, just read it. There are more than 200,000 words. Don't read it. New books really can't stand up to you. If you read books, I will have no results. Without results, there will be no recommendations. It's an endless loop. I have been writing for more than a month and only 20 people are reading it. Please click on the latest chapters every day. Reading is really important for new books. Please. —— As a new book, others have 35 chapters with a maximum of 70,000 words, but I have 11,000 words at most, with an average of 3,000+ words per chapter and 6,000+ words per day. I don't say how hard I work, at least I am writing seriously. —— Every day I conceive of plots and perfect settings. Each plot strives to be non-conventional and yet bring excitement to readers, but it doesn't seem to work. Some readers said that my book has the shadow of fairy grass. I am very happy, but only a few people read it, and I feel uncomfortable. —— My requirements are really not high, just enough for more than 100 people to watch it and a recommendation. It's difficult, so difficult. —— Then, the advertisement is not made by me. I am very busy every day, and the book club group rarely bubbles up. I have not deleted almost 98% of the comments, but I will delete some malicious and shady ones directly.

I saw it from other novel reviews, and then I came here 🤔

Brothers, good brothers, can you move your fingers and help me click on the two chapters I update every day (at ten in the morning and five in the evening), click on the latest chapter every day, and scroll to the end. If I gather 100 follow-up students, I can put it on the shelf and get perfect attendance. Please, brother, please help me.

After reading Chapter 26 in one go, the main character gave me the biggest impression that he was a reckless man? The operation of daring to rush straight to the enemy stronghold at the first level is very fascinating, but if you want to call it pure recklessness, the subsequent interaction with Yan Baobao seems to be taking a relaxed tone Let's not talk about the explosive artifact and the witch boss's active seduction at the beginning. It may be a foreshadowing, but does the protagonist believe in the hammer and the witch so much? The protagonist didn't even try to test the power of the hammer and just used it. The witch also jumped on it directly. What if the witch wanted to do something evil to him? At the beginning, it can be seen that the author wants to attract readers with the three golden chapters, but to be honest, I really can't remember these settings after reading them. The pace is too fast and many details that should be written are not written. But after all, it is only 26 chapters. I hope the author can polish the following chapters. The setting of this book is very high. I look forward to reading a wonderful novel.

Hey, hey, one of the people who recommended the book seems to be named Ao Manman 😰

I was attracted by the lolita sound, and when I took a look, I realized that it was too young, and the donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this~

The most important question: Author, do you have an outline, details and background setting?

I came from military novels. Is she really a female author? I don't believe it

What a humble author, I have seen it in other books. Come and support

I just picked up a book and clicked on it. I took a quick look at it without reading the content and just said... How did I get here?

From the author's point of view... You are better than me, it's hard for me to sign a contract now, come on!

I would like to give the author a suggestion. You can create a small team to increase the stickiness of book fans. Since there are few fans of this book, of course, the response may be mediocre, but you still have to give it a try.

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Order it all before you check it out, can you add more details