I Develop Comprehensively in Hong Kong

Except for the addition of an additional protagonist, the rest of the content is similar to the movie, except that the male protagonist is changed.

Tang Xiaoyuan? Author, your protagonist's name is very childish! !

It's a mess, one plot is completed and one plot is completed, it looks too messy with so many inserts.

The protagonist is just like a fool. He has used all the martial arts he learned. The power as strong as shown in the movie is completely invisible in his hands.

I've only read a few chapters, and the author's writing is awesome. There is a new protagonist in a movie, and there is no change at all because of the adventure he had in the past. I know the plot of the movie and the characters. Even a surprised performance. Uncle Jiu taught him the Tao and Dharma unconditionally as a successor. Uncle Jiu found out that after he learned the Taoist Heart Sutra in seconds, he asked whether he had learned anything else. As a result, he was unwilling to say anything about the fact that he had learned peerless martial arts and had decades of inner strength. I haven't watched it since, but I read the reviews and heard that the protagonist couldn't beat the male bodyguard of the Japanese evil master in the movie. It's so simple. . . Is the starting point for writing novels so low? The novels synthesized by IA are probably better than him! There are still recommendations?

Oh, congratulations on being humble, come on young man~

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It's really messy. The protagonist has been holding the palm of Tathagata for 50 years and has been able to fight through the sewers. Even Billy has to go through so much trouble to watch the protagonist pretend to be cool and become a borderline obsessive. If one incident doesn't end, another one will start.

The biggest problem is that the writing of the Tathagata Palm is too low. Even if you are only at the level of kung fu, you are already an ancestor in Tianlong. As a result, you have to fight cats and dogs for a long time. In addition, with the Seven Spin Slash, why do you need to learn the Taizu Changquan? The Seven Spin Slash is originally a palm technique.

The idea is quite good, but the writing is not very good. You should travel to the world of Hong Kong and Taiwan, and then get the Palm of the Tathagata, and make a bet with Tiancan to get his God, or else travel to the world view of the Palm of the Tathagata. The movie version of the movie version of "The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Sword", the movie version of "The Eight Dragons", learn from the Palace of Rebirth of the North Ming Dynasty.

The subject matter is very good, but the author's thinking is not very clear, and he makes the protagonist a little bit stupider than normal people. Since he is short of money, he can't find a way to get the gold when he enters the cave. The plot is also intentionally subtly clever. He clearly knows that he is an exorcist policeman and knows that it is the world of gods and ghosts, but he doesn't know how to hug it. Also, the plot of the movie is too repetitive. Except for the protagonist following along, the plot is basically unchanged. You can change the dialogue! Speechless

I think it would be good to start with the original plot and bring out some characters and stories.

The beginning was okay, but when I traveled to the world of Tianlong, I felt completely changed. There is also the Tathagata Divine Palm, which should not be the Zhiyang Kung Fu, and the Tiancan Divine Kick is the Zhiyin Kung Fu.

I just want to ask, do you want the gold?

What a mess😰😰

You said it yourself. Tathagata Divine Palm integrates internal strength, external strength, lightness skill, body protection and infuriating energy into one body. You also said that you have no boxing and kicking skills. Do you use fisting and kicking skills? You can just hit Tathagata Divine Palm with a big blow. I don't believe that a group of people can't beat Qiao Feng. They can withstand the Tathagata Divine Palm.

It needs to be refined. The flowing water does not look like flowing water. It looks like things are mixed together.