Hong Kong Variety Show: Becoming a Fairy from a Dead Date

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The world view of a dead contract is completely unsuitable for cultivation. The protagonist of this world is undoubtedly a zombie. Giving a bite to a general is better than anything else. The second-generation zombie is equivalent to a half-immortal and half-god in the world of a dead contract. It makes no sense and is immune to all physical and magical damage (except for the "Dragon God"). It comes with it. Needless to say, all kinds of magical powers and powers are basically gods from the setting. The human king Fuxi, the Holy Mother of Yaochi, Nuwa, generals and other Pangu tribesmen. This world is essentially similar to Western fantasy, which is very different from traditional immortals. Whether it is inner alchemy theory or modern cultivation, it is very inconsistent with this world.

At present, the plot in the dungeon is okay, but the original world is a bit too big and mixed. It would be better to simplify it or remove irrelevant parts. Even if there is a patch with confusing dates, it will occasionally be a bit confusing, and the dead date world will be a bit delayed (at least I feel that the main line is a bit vague)

It has been fished out and the contract has been signed. I hope book friends will know it. PS: Please read more when you have time, thx.

The zombies of Pangu remain unchanged after traveling through the deadlock. Cultivation of Taoism and immortality is controlled by fate. It's totally worthless. If you change someone's life at will, fate will find out.

The combat power of the world of Deadline is unbelievable, and the circle of Hong Kong ghosts is too small. Someone like Wang Nuwa has come out to destroy the world. It is difficult for ordinary people to upgrade even if they fail. This kind of chaotic combat power is particularly difficult to write. I am not optimistic that this book will have a good ending 😁

In fact, just show Nuwa the video of the 1998 flood relief.

It's hard to evaluate the combat effectiveness of a deadlock! There are monks, there are underworlds, there are Ksitigarbha, there are Guanyin, Pangu clan, and the zombies of Pangu clan are basically the first-generation zombie king generals, the Holy Mother of Yaochi, and the human king Fuxi.

As a TV series, Zombie is undoubtedly very successful. The theme setting can be called a suture monster, and it is also very interesting to sew. The screenwriter's brain is like a ring around his neck. Modern fashion + supernatural + fusion adaptation of Chinese and Western mythology + bloody love. After that, the only analogy I can think of is the magic phone.

Would someone like Ma Xiaoling share a man with another woman?

What kind of dream is this about preparing to live through Zongyue 1 as an ordinary person? You don't regard Domoto Shizuyamamoto, Mirai Yamamoto Kazuo, Gomei San or anything like that in 1 as human beings, right? Please give me an accurate letter when writing like this. When you finish writing this paragraph, I will skip to read the rest.

After reading about twenty chapters, I feel that the biggest problem is that there is no detailed description. I personally like this subject matter and plot. However, from the beginning to the end, it is just dialogue and plot, without details. The more I read, the more boring it becomes. There is always a feeling that the author is rushing to go to the toilet after finishing the article. The problem lies in the author's writing skills, without any side description. If you want to improve, you can only read more📖, or find an AI to learn from it. To be honest, I feel that this book is boring and it is a pity to abandon it.

I think I've seen something similar to the beginning, forget it.

Is there something wrong with this book? It feels like it lacks detailed description of the characters, and the interactions are all driven by dialogue. The individual characters that appear are also driven by dialogue. It is not just about watching the original plot and pretending to be the protagonist. You can appropriately describe the expressions or inner states and actions of the characters during the dialogue. This allows for more calligraphy and makes it look more informative. Of course, not every character on the scene should be described in this way, at least the main and supporting characters can be described in this way, right? Better than dry. After reading Chapter 29, I had no impression of the characters in the book at all. If there is no problem, treat me as nonsense. . . . 🤐🤐🤐🤐

I dare say that the author no longer knows how to write, the quality is declining, and the writing has begun to become pornographic. He started to write about the heroine every three days. I have omitted 10,000 words here.

The writing is very good, but I can't sign it. I suggest changing the title of the book.

What's so hard about writing about deadlocks is that no one in astronomy dares to touch deadlocks, and every book collapses. You even write about this thing specifically, and everyone will immediately rule it out for you when they see the title of the book!

It is not appropriate to place deadlocks in Hong Kong. It is not a matter of combat power, but how to reset the time of deadlocks several times? The combat power of Zhengdou is said to be high and mighty, but it is actually named Pengci, the great god of mythology.

It's a bit confusing, there are so many chapters in one dream.

If you don't even include pictures and leave negative comments, do you expect readers to provide pictures for you?

Wan Qiwen

I was poisoned in the first chapter~ Being able to practice depends on luck~

To be honest, if you want to write a fanfic like Dead Date, most of the people you can attract are those who have watched the show. If you want a second setting to cover the long-range setting, it is basically a bedrock. There is no other way. For example, the power system, Pangu is the strongest, lets the king and generals take a bite, which is n times stronger than what you have worked hard to cultivate for tens of thousands of years. This is beyond doubt. The original design is like this. If you cover it with a magic modification, basically no one will buy it. The bedding is normal. Also, Ma Xiaoling doesn't like the big pie face. You might as well cut Hu Ma Jingle, Our Lady of Yaochi, Chang'e, Mingyue and so on. I may also watch Ma Xiaoling and Wang Zhenzhen, the heroines of more than 20 years ago. I'm so tired.

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In Hong Kong dramas, try not to write about gangster gangster movies, just write about supernatural horror.

Who is A Le? Isn't the general played by Brother Da?

More updates are the way to go

Why did there suddenly become so many paid chapters? I originally wanted to save up to 100 to subscribe or go to QQ, but I kept voting for recommendations before I signed a contract, and even signed a contract to give monthly tickets. Why has everything changed suddenly? Can I change the free version I watched before and need to subscribe?

I can't stand this part of the dream, I don't know why 🤔