Junior Sister, She Made the World of Immortality Cry.

I want to ask, is there a cp? If so, it must not be the master. I don't like the master-disciple relationship. Personally, I think the master has trained me since childhood and is the role of father or mother. Otherwise, why is the master's father the father's father?

It's very beautiful! I like the heroine's character. Hope there is no cp

I browsed through it and found that the previous article was very good, so I accepted it. I hope you have CP and can handle the emotional line well. The better-looking articles recently are all without CP, which makes me feel that they are not good enough.

Dear cuties, I have seen many comments asking whether this book has a male protagonist. The author is here to give a unified reply~ Regarding the question of a male protagonist asked by the cuties, the author actually does not know how to respond in detail, because everyone has different emotional lines and defines male and female protagonists differently. Here's an analysis: First of all, the author's book is about a heroine who is a fairy, not a romance fairy, so the main theme of the book is to become stronger through cultivation. Moreover, there is a big world background here. Secondly, this article will have emotional lines. The protagonist and supporting characters will have family, friendship and love. If we only use "love" as emotion, this word of love would be too thin~ Final summary: If you want to see the heroine without emotion, then the heroine of this article is not it. She has feelings and can be emotional, so she has intersection with the world. If you want to see the heroine talk about sweet love and revolve around love, then the heroine in this article is not it. In her world, love cannot be everything to her. She has her own friends and relatives, ideals, goals, and bottom lines... Well, that's about it~ The author thanks the cuties for their love and support! Love you! Everyone's rumors and suggestions are also welcome~

I can do it with or without CP, but it cannot be master-disciple CP.

If it is a master and apprentice, then the heroine is definitely the master's tool to perfect the ruthless Tao technique.

The problem with the heroine's skills I have seen that the heroine has built a foundation, but I still don't know what magic moves she knows. There is only one foundation-building skill she just got, Lunzhuanjue, and there is no introduction to what is special about this skill. It seems that it is just a name and nothing else is clear. There is no explanation about the direction of training. It is really just that the upgrade is very fast, and everything else is blank.

The master is so useless. Elder Guannan can target his direct disciples everywhere without enough evidence by relying on a fortune-telling technique. The entire sect looks on with cold eyes and claims to be a major sect in the world of immortality. It is really disappointing Female From now on, you can find resources, practice by yourself, and fight by yourself. Don't reconcile with that superior master through a "misunderstanding" between master and disciple. If that happens, it will be really frustrating

It's almost 400,000 words. Are you sure if there is a CP? It's really uncomfortable to be so hesitant...

I abandon the article whenever I see a male protagonist.

Are you a new author? I feel like I wrote it too fast and the content just skipped over! The progress is too fast!

I come to female videos just for romance, so I must have CP.

It feels like I am forcibly writing Gu Qingchen and the heroine together.

Update quickly. I will cry if I run out of books.

It would be nice to have a male protagonist. I hope it is not the master but the male protagonist. After all, he is really not good with the female protagonist in the early stage, and his character is not good in the early stage. Ruthlessly, there is an advantage in recruiting disciples in the early stage.

It's very interesting. I like the heroine design very much. This is the most beautiful fairy tale I have ever read, and it is one of the best among fairy tales.

After reading the trial chapter, I don't have any desire to continue reading! How should I put it, the writing and plot can't even be called a novice novel, but it is quite thin, and there are many contradictions or minor problems! For example, the heroine has outstanding talents but also has shortcomings. She is obviously in poor health. People around her who know about it sigh in the article, but the heroine doesn't care. She doesn't subconsciously make up for it in her acquired practice, but in fact it doesn't have any impact! It's like the author deliberately created a false signal with a flaw in the ointment! It's like "that beauty is beautiful, but her hair is a bit long to her waist"! Secondly, the author seems to be very bad at describing fighting scenes. In other words, as a novel about strong female cultivation, there is no concept and application of "skills" at all. As a result, the heroine's training is to meditate and absorb spiritual energy. She upgrades quickly. She calls it spiritual training but does not write much about practicing magic. The plot is thin and lacks details. The fighting scenes are just a few dry sentences. They are not as good as ordinary martial arts novels, so they are not worth watching! Of course, the heroine's outstanding soul power, inexplicable evil aura, the intervention of the Tianji monk during the apprenticeship, the cold and ruthless master in disguise, etc., Also laid many hooks for the plot! Maybe the setting of the story is good, but the writing and imagination are lacking, which makes people inexplicably lack a lot of expectations!

It's not bad at all compared to those more popular articles, but why is it so less popular?

I feel like there is a bit of logic here, right? In Chapter 13, Hua Yinzhen said that her mother gave her a pill to achieve breakthrough in Qi practice. I remember that when Hua Yinzhen and the heroine were in the Enlightenment Institute, Hua Yinzhen was still illiterate, right? As a result, after two years, the heroine was in the advanced stage of Qi training, and the Huayinzhen was able to practice faster than the heroine? ? So if that's the case, why is she still jealous of the heroine? Especially the description of her inner activities in the dining hall, all about her jealousy of the heroine's talent...

It's time to write again!

I haven't watched it for a while, why is it ending?

No cp, no master-disciple relationship, it's quite interesting. Watch it all to the finale.

It's too dry. The author doesn't know how to write about training and fighting. It's not interesting at all. The fighting ring competition can only be described in a few dry sentences. After reading the whole article, there is nothing interesting except knowing that the heroine will be upgraded soon. I'm so disappointed. This writing is not a novice. Why is it not well written?