The Most Competitive Base Chief of the Apocalypse

Procrastination, one idea becomes N chapters

I wonder if the author will see this comment. "Space Little Farm Girl" is a novel I read several years ago and have remembered for many years; it's the best farming novel I've ever read, bar none! It's just that this is the only one with such a great setting, plot, and lighthearted, humorous writing style. I've reread it again...

This is so tedious and full of unnecessary talk. They've been arguing for ages about whether or not to return a bracelet.

I think that a balance of tension and relaxation, of fast and slow, is what makes it important. If the rhythm is all the same, it feels like you don't know what you're trying to express, and it just feels like there's too much rambling.

I spent a few days writing a follow-up comment on the article, and I'd like to share my own thoughts. My first impression of this article was that the author has a very strong personal style, distinct from the mainstream, including their language habits and narrative style.

Could you please tell me which chapter features the annulment of the engagement? I'd love to read it then; I'm really looking forward to the scene. The writing is too rambling and drawn-out; it's over 40 chapters and we still haven't gotten to the point of stockpiling supplies. I'm starting to get tired of reading it.

First one~

This is an extremely verbose novel; it doesn't feel like a book, but more like rambling thoughts. You only need to glance at each page.

I've been reading a lot of post-apocalyptic novels lately, and this one is one of the few I read all the way to the end. The writing isn't always smooth, but I still really liked it. Keep up the good work, author!

Is this a zombie vs. A human? Or a human vs. A human?