The Poison Doctor Among the Stars

The female-to-male ratio is too low; apart from the female lead, it's all men. I can't stand watching it.

Stop using "deeply"—don't you have any other adjectives? The guardians are two young men; the law doesn't exist, the social security system doesn't exist either. The female lead has a fake human quality; she doesn't feel real, and there's hardly any emotional fluctuation.

There's a lot of unnecessary dialogue, and the prequel plot drags on too much. The language and character development feel somewhat incongruous.

In the early stages, it's less about a poison doctor and more about the daily agricultural capital life of a weak, reborn cultivator.

The first three chapters seem pretty good so far, I'll keep reading! 🥳🥳🥳🥳

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