From Ordinary Immortal to the Quest for Eternal Life

Attacking elixirs is nonsense, talismans have more advantages than these

It's hard to agree with everyone, I think it doesn't look good if it's too big! The young man thinks that the best way to fully activate the hook is to make breathing stronger! I said you don't need to read and fall asleep, you can have everything! He's been having such a hard time talking about life, why can't he just read a book? I'm speechless,

I don't have any confidence in new authors now. It's either a studio or AI or plagiarism. I just want to ask the author, can you give me some confidence? Don't be like others who cut it off at 45 or ten w or eunuchs!

New authors are publishing new books, and ordinary people are publishing original works. If you have any suggestions and opinions, please leave them below.

Can pig's feet be written differently? I'm always surprised

The start is okay, concise and not verbose, the thinking is clear, and the writing style is also good.

I also took the elixir and talisman to attack...

🙂The title of this book is weird. It's better to become an immortal than to become an immortal.

The protagonist has such a powerful golden finger, can't the protagonist be allowed to rebel against his innate nature?

I'm not going to talk about the article, I'm just going to talk about reading it! First of all, I personally don't like to catch up on reading, because it's easy to stop reading halfway through! A few chapters updated every day are simply not enough to read. When you see a complete novel, you won't read it anymore, and you will stop reading it as time goes by! I read it again when I ran out of books to read, but then I couldn't get into the plot because I almost forgot the ins and outs! I watched it again because I had seen it before, so it didn't make much sense! It is understandable that the author wants to pursue reading, recommendation, and subscription. However, if a new author does not have a fixed fan base and his works are not very good, it is better to pursue these things than to finish a book honestly first, accumulate some fans, and then seek to pursue these things for the next book! I have a book, Fengxian's. The first one I read was his Hongzhu. Now his Yuan Tianzun is almost 3 million words. I haven't read a chapter, but I have ordered all the latest chapters because he proved himself in the last book. I don't think I am the only one like this! You are a new author, you don't have a complete book, and you can't rush to update like those tentacle monsters on the combat power list. Why not finish a book honestly and correct some problems based on feedback. You may not make a lot of money now, but this thing doesn't mean you won't be charged after you finish writing. If you write well, people will still subscribe in the future! Mortals are not like this from the beginning. If you don't have a good attitude, you won't be able to achieve anything by writing! If it doesn't work out, just go to work!