The Unruly Ones of the Qin Dynasty

Having read up to chapter 20, there are a few glaring plot points that really bother me. 1. Overuse of memes; I really couldn't hold back when I saw the godfather. 2. Let Ying Zheng enlist in the army. After returning to Qin, Ying Zheng was preparing to ascend the throne. After ascending the throne, he was busy consolidating power and studying. How could he have time to enlist?

Keep up the good work, author! I love your harem fanfiction the most. It's imaginative, ambitious, and you manage to balance beauty and career. To be honest, I love reading harem fanfiction, but I always get criticized for saying that.

This book shouldn't contain too many knock-off words. In previous works, there were too many knock-off words in a single chapter. The author often uses knock-offs to pad the word count. I hope the author can reduce their perverse tastes, such as turning some men into women or making some people into "muscle Barbie."

If you're going to write about impotence in a story where the protagonist is a eunuch, either don't write about women at all, or write fewer of them. Eunuch authors often create a bunch of women for ambiguous relationships, but none of them actually have sex. And if you keep refusing to acknowledge impotence, then at least write less of it; it's disgusting.

Seeing the author's inappropriate remarks about the Mohists, I couldn't help but speak out. This author believes the Mohist philosophy is flawed; they argue that we shouldn't relentlessly prevent war, but rather actively promote the unification of the world. They believe this is true universal love, the true love for all humanity. How absurd! You actually believe war can be eliminated?

Is this another fanfiction that licks the boots of the Qin Dynasty? Have you seen any with a different formula?

What kind of writing is this? It's rubbish.

There are too many modern elements, which significantly lowers one's expectations for this book! The appeal of Qin's Moon fanfiction lies in the author's unique writing style, but this book is crammed with so many modern elements—is the author afraid readers won't encounter enough of these things in real life? The more you include, the more tedious it becomes, seriously!

Some thoughts on generators and Qin's Time's black technology Natural magnets cannot be used to generate electricity directly. You need a strong magnet. You can coat copper wire with tree lacquer to make enamel-coated copper wire, then wrap it around a cast iron block, and then let it be struck by lightning to obtain a strong magnet. Based on this, you can make a basic generator.

Is this book a Qin's Moon fanfic or a crossover martial arts fanfic?