He's a Wizard, Not an Evil God

The last book was great in the early stage, mediocre in the middle stage, and collapsed in the later stage. However, I can really feel that the author has made a lot of breakthroughs after writing the previous book. Please plan the outline of this book carefully. If the whole book can maintain the level of the tower, there is a real chance that it will be on the list.

It looks good, the writing is very good, and I feel that the field control ability has actually improved compared to the previous book. It's just that the subject of Invincible Flow is really difficult to write about... At present, I'm starting to write about this type of wizard only, and it's hard to find other alternatives. It's a pity that it's not popular... Ahhhhhhh, it's painful not to have a good book on the list. There really aren't many good-looking articles that I can read in Qidian recently.

I have to keep an eye on this book. Maybe one day it will become free and I can finish it in one go.

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You write so well, why are your grades so bad?

The refreshing frost character is not in place, and the protagonist is not strong enough as a god. Moreover, a certain passerby appears many times in the article, looking at the protagonist arrogantly many times. To be honest, book friends are tired of the "expired" pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine, and you have used it so many times, obviously you are not keeping up with the trend. To be honest, as an online article writer, writing style comes first, and it is also important to keep up with the trend. It's okay to read more other novels and it will improve

It feels like that kind of quest line in ancient online novels. In the middle of the plot, a new quest suddenly enters, and then the new quest is launched without any explanation, and the half of the original quest is ignored? For example, this is what happens when people in a small town are kidnapped by that cultist. Then he did the same thing when he was inspecting his three disciples for the librarian. The progression of the plot is very confusing

The charm of Cthulhu lies in the unknown and unknowable. It is both a mechanical monster and a numerical monster, making it extremely difficult to defeat. The author has an invincible flow, but he has broken the foundation and achieved half the result with twice the effort. It is a pity. It would definitely be better if he changed his writing method

The beginning is not well written, and the background and main lines are not clearly explained, leaving people confused.

The protagonist is very rich and very poor. You are rich enough to spend money to buy apprentice wizard qualifications, but you are so poor that you are like an iron rooster.

This is not an orthodox wizard novel. It is boring. After reading the previous chapter, I felt that the protagonist is already invincible. There is no feeling. Wizard novels should gradually improve their strength through research and development of witchcraft, develop unique systems, etc. The next step is to catch gods, catch demons, research and so on. This is interesting. You don't have any desire to read on.

In view of the weak introduction, What kind of wizard is this wizard, a wizard who gets out of here? Or a magician? What does the protagonist do?

To tell you a joke, this is the best book on anti-theft I have ever seen.

Liangcao, reading it feels like watching "Wizard Detective". There are really not many online articles these days that can combine guns, swords and magic. The balance between storytelling and jokes is well grasped.

It smells like a Harry Potter fanfic. This book is so different from the Death Wizard's Notes. I thought the author had changed his name.

I came here on a limited-exempt basis and just started reading the second volume. It's very well-written. The results are so low. It's unexpected. It's strange. Is this metaphysics?

It is supported by subscription after the limited exemption. The plot is very exciting and the writing is very good. Even in the chapters where the protagonist is not present, the pressure and influence brought by the protagonist are fully reflected. One thing is that the characterization is very successful and the plot is very compact. However, I think the reason for the unsatisfactory results is: the sense of substitution. A work with excellent results, regardless of its writing style and structure, must have a strong sense of involvement and satisfaction among its target readers. The sense of immersion in this book is also good, but this is due to the author's good writing style, which is a bit like an excellent traditional literary style.

Score 7/10, worth reading if you like the style Problems 1. It is different from traditional Cthulhu articles. Cthulhu is mainly an unknowable mystery. Generally speaking, one of the protagonist and other characters must not be able to grasp the actual situation. But in this article, the weakness is mainly reflected in the strength of the protagonist, but to be honest, if it is written like this, it will become Long Aotian. It doesn't matter if it is replaced by other gods. Second, the outline is a bit rough. Taking the little girl as an example, as the first introduction in the article, there is a lot of writing but it is useless to the plot. The little girl's only role is to let the male protagonist pretend twice, and it doesn't matter if she and her family are deleted from the story. The so-called enterprise has no use except to provide funds for the cult. The internal strife within the family is mentioned repeatedly and is not continued in the article. Advantages The horror atmosphere is well created, and the storyline is given room to develop by delaying the protagonist's appearance. At the same time, the details of other character descriptions are also excellent. Extras The story has a fast pace, the resolution of the incident and the collection of information are completed within a few chapters, and the excitement is relatively intensive. But there is almost no foreshadowing, and it does not give readers the feeling that this thing should be like this. For example, the first three incidents, whether it is worms, adoption homes, or rat plagues, are very deliberate. There is a feeling that they must appear here for the next plot.

I have been reading this book for three months, so I should be considered an old bookworm and qualified to comment on this book. Each character is very full-bodied, the economic system is very rigorous, and it does not overwhelm the combat power. The fighting scenes are as immersive as they are. The most important thing is that the plot is interlocking. The protagonist uses absolute IQ to crush the enemy. There is no on-the-spot breakthrough and no short-term plot. I really don't know how the author wrote such a masterpiece. It can be called a fantasy version of the epic. In reality, even an ordinary supporting actor has an IQ far higher than Hawking and comparable to Zhuge Liang.

Big cheers for the author!

That's right, it's getting interesting. Why is the main consciousness really so stupid?

Already fully ordered. The writing is very good. I hope the next one will be longer.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

Newbie reporting, can anyone give an answer?

Hey, it's doubled, 1 vote for it, cheers for the author