I Create a Dark Age of Gaming and Entertainment in a Different World

Mario and The Legend of Zelda are both great games. The author uses these two homophones in the novel to play in another world. Is it a bit unclear what Lao Ren means? If Isekai can develop these two games, to be honest Isekai's self-developed games are higher than what you described in the novel. 3A and Lao Ren are not on the same track. After reading so many game novels, some people always think that 3a is awesome and Lao Ren is not. I hope this is my illusion.

Look here, I am Shennong! First, let me give an overall review. This book is enjoyable, but not completely enjoyable. The author himself also said that it is a very enjoyable book, but the theme of making games in a fantasy world is still very distinctive, and it is generally written. Although there are many problems, you can read it if you can bear it. First of all, this comment is only for readers and not for the author. Problem 1: The protagonist is powerless. It's almost like a Japanese Asashi incompetent male protagonist (laughs), because the author likes fight-style and re0-style protagonists, and is very determined to write an ordinary male protagonist. As for the growth in strength, the author said that it will happen in the future, and in short, the future is promising. Question 2: The author wanted to write a group drama. Although he did not label it a group drama, he did spend a lot of space describing the characters other than the protagonist and the heroine. I personally don't mind it. After all, it doesn't matter if I forget everything after watching it, as long as I know that there is such a person. Question 3: The current plot about game production and the actual plot are almost 1:1. It can only be said that the author is very firm on this and has no intention of giving up. But it doesn't matter. It is recommended to skip them all. After all, the plot can be connected after skipping chapters, so there will be no obstacles in reading. Question 4: The worldview of this book heavily references the book Culture Invasion. I don't mind it myself, but if you are a die-hard fan of Wen Invasion's book, I'd better emphasize it here. But to be honest, the difference between the two books is quite big. After all, Wen Invasion's book is a pure novel, and the male protagonist of this book is very different from the Wen Invasion male protagonist in all aspects. The author has basically mentioned these problems in this book in his acceptance speech, but you can't ask a new reader who just clicked on this book to skip the first chapter and go straight to the acceptance speech, right? Anyway, here it is for the convenience of new readers. And the author said that he wants to change the tags. It is recommended to add a daily tag. It is best to emphasize the style of the book in the introduction. Again, it's just for the convenience of new readers. It's not directed at the author. Please don't ban me.

If you can't write about emotions well, you don't have to write them down. Otherwise, it will be a defense. If you write well, not many people will praise you. This is a fact...

Well, it's not me. The emotion collection system is not a horror game production system. Obviously online games are the most suitable for collecting emotions and the easiest to spread and popularize. Why do you have to make a niche horror game? Although I understand your idea of ​​​​writing a horror game, you can definitely make an online game first to ensure your point base, and then start making horror games to earn points quickly. There is also more room for points. You are a bit restricting the development of the protagonist.

Are you kidding? Do you know how many game design concepts are in Zelda? With this thing, the game design can still be barren, right?

Are there any other books about cultural invasion of different worlds? This one is good, but not enough to read.

Here are some suggestions for you. Novice writers should not create their own shields and break their own shields. For example, in Western Fantasy, you can directly modify the urban cameras and so on, so that they are not so abrupt. There is also the hometown dialect. If this hometown dialect cannot be repeated in the following text, then this sentence has no meaning. If it wants to appear, it must appear repeatedly.

It is recommended to delete the part about working in a restaurant. There is no point in forcing a conflict just for the sake of conflict. The second time I saw this kind of chapter, I immediately deleted it. I'll just say a few words to see if you can still read it before.

Those who really don't like working part-time. It's not about the part-time job itself, but a group of outsiders who intervene in the life style between the protagonist and his relatives. They don't care about the past between the two people, don't think about each other's difficulties, and are no longer even habitual preconceptions. Instead, they speculate and judge others with malice. They don't give the male protagonist more opportunities because they like the female protagonist. They don't want to understand. Instead, they scold the male protagonist for themselves. The female protagonist just watches. My first feeling is, where did the son-in-law come from? Have you watched too much TikTok? The heroine has loyalty, but probably not much. Many of the current fan fictions talk about looking down on the male protagonists, but they themselves are not that high. The arc of growth is even expressed in terms of secondary, and the chain is used to beautify the high-minded and low-handed. Really, please grow more.

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The battle plot in the last two chapters is not very good. During the battle, the protagonist is useless and just keeps complaining about Yanyi. In the first part, he said that the system is useless and has no intelligence and cannot understand the words. Later, he inexplicably sees that he bought something that can help again, and then it is stuck here and stops, leaving the reader to feel uncomfortable for the whole day. To be honest, since the protagonist can't fight, you might as well just write about fighting. Why do you have to write a lot about the protagonist having a bad mouth? He seemed to be in a hurry, but in fact he was incompetent and furious. There were also various non-combat introductions mixed in. It seemed that the battle was not that urgent. It seems that I have seen something, but I also seem to have seen nothing. The plot has almost not advanced and is still stuck at the critical point that seems to be resolved. It just leaves an uncomfortable impression. I even doubt whether today's two chapters can end this plot.

The system's ability to steal real items 😅 is pretty silly. Are you sure you don't want to change it? If you have to say that there are pitfalls and the protagonist's background is related to this, I feel that even if it is the Son of God himself, using his own items, the level and other things are still very low-key, and he just steals without any reaction, then this system is really not as good as a pure copy. The viewing experience has dropped quite seriously. I originally liked watching the interaction between real-life plots and literary plots, but after being exposed to this, I suddenly lost interest 😥

Come on, the switch alone has sold more than 100 million units, how can PS5 and Xbox compare? This is a religious product from Nintendo. Nintendo only makes software and sells products. Alas, its performance is so poor and it relies entirely on games to sell it. You can definitely compare with them 😰

It's not that I don't like the realistic part, but this realistic part is increasingly lacking the flavor of another world, and it's a typical plagiarism duel... I might as well write more about games.

Isn't it a bit confusing? Before the early game plot is over, it is suddenly inserted into the daily routine. After the daily routine is over, it is inserted back into the game. And I don't know why it looks a bit weird. I often make mistakes and forget the plot.

Writing about games and stuff was pretty good in the past, but when it came time to film the drama "Dark Shadows", things started to get messy. I felt that the character descriptions were messy, and I felt that the protagonist didn't play any role, as if he was paddling. Generally speaking, isn't it the protagonist who takes the lead in filming this kind of drama? It was not enjoyable to watch, and I felt that there was no need to make Beauty and the Beast as the first movie like Isekai. In fact, I was thinking that the first movie could be a horror movie, Dead Silence.

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Brother, can I still see updates in my lifetime?

Why is there a free chapter with a fee, if it is free ((