Building Games in Another World During the Dark Age of Entertainment

Mario and The Legend of Zelda are both incredible games. The author using homophones for these two titles in the otherworldly setting of the novel seems to misunderstand Nintendo's intentions. If the otherworld could develop these two games, frankly, its self-developed games would be far superior to what you describe in the novel.

Look here, I am Shennong! To give an overall review, this book is enjoyable, but not entirely so. The author himself says it's not a "feel-good" novel, but the theme of making games in a fantasy world is quite unique and is well-developed. Although there are quite a few issues, it's worth reading if you can tolerate them.

If you can't write about emotions well, you don't have to; otherwise, it's part of your thesis defense. Even if you write it well, not many people will praise you—that's a fact…

Um, I'm not trying to be argumentative, but this is an emotion collection system, not a horror game creation system. Online games are clearly the most suitable and easiest way to collect emotions and spread them widely. Why insist on making a niche horror game?

Are you kidding me? Do you even know how many game design concepts are in Zelda? With this stuff, how can game design be lacking?

Are there any other books similar to "Cultural Invasion in Another World"? This one is good, but not enough.

Here are a few suggestions: Beginner writers shouldn't create their own arguments only to have them countered by creating their own defenses. For example, in a Western fantasy story, if a camera is used in the city, you can directly modify it; this will make it less abrupt. Also, regarding the phrase in one's hometown dialect, if it doesn't appear repeatedly later in the story, then the phrase is meaningless. It needs to appear repeatedly to be meaningful.

I really don't like working. It's not about the work itself, but about a group of outsiders meddling in the lives of the protagonist and his family, disregarding their past, ignoring their difficulties, and going beyond habitual prejudice to maliciously speculate and judge them.

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I suggest deleting the part about working at the restaurant; it's pointless and forces conflict. I'd delete any chapters like this a second time; I'm only commenting because you seemed to be able to read the earlier parts.