The Muscular Immortal of the Mysterious World

I've read novels like this, and I've only been able to either get halfway through or get stuck in the end. However, from the scenery of seclusion in the mountains and the assassination and betrayal of the two mentally retarded sisters, although it's a bit short, it's still written with some feeling.

Those who say it's ugly have probably never seen Jidao Tianmo. Who would watch a protagonist who practices physical training and looks like a sissy?

The muscles are pulsating, the blood is steaming, and with a roar, all life in a radius of a hundred feet is cut off. He glares at the enemy with a splitting gaze, like an ancient ferocious beast. Even if he passes by, pedestrians will shy away. This is what muscles are like.

Author, your book is unlikely to be a masterpiece, but it is well written. Because I think you are very stable, not impatient, and don't have high ambitions and make a lot of pitfalls and add a lot of nonsense. So it is relatively simple, and the text naturally lacks a lot of color. There are only fifty chapters so far. If you are not careful, you will probably ruin it. There are also some readers (those who come to read cool articles or have no brains) who are more Muggle and give some imbecile suggestions, saying that the one should be killed, or that the language you wrote is too heavy on killing. My advice is, if you don't listen, don't do evil things and don't engage in salvation. Live in the present, know yourself whether you are good or bad, and don't make nonsense of it in the novel. Or not?

Bones are the fundamental support for the body. What is the logic of adding muscles but not bones?

I wanted to read a cool article, but ended up being disgusted.

After reading a few chapters, I always felt that the protagonist was weird. When I thought about it carefully, there was no difference between the protagonist and a mouse.

He writes like a stupid guy and is cowardly

The protagonist initially wanted to find a way to learn martial arts and practice Taoism. After getting the news, he dug up the cultivators' graves but didn't clean them up. The second time, in the cracks in the valley, he got the inheritance from the immortal cultivator (probably a lifetime of memories) and various treasures, etc. In the end, he took two snake eyes... Afraid of danger. What's the risk... But you already know whose incarnation place this is, and you also know her life, etc. As expected, within a few days, the Immortal Ascension Order was taken, and the crack inheritance was wiped out The three-thousand-year inheritance was unknown, and the protagonist discovered that it had been stolen in a few days. I can only say that the portrayal of the protagonist is silly and the plot is a bit deliberate

Read part of it and evaluate it. The protagonist has hangups, but it's actually easy to take off. But the author wrote dozens of chapters, all of which are about the protagonist getting the treasure left by the master of cultivating immortals. But the protagonist doesn't know any of them. Then I attended the auction and finally realized that the two cultivators left behind big treasures. Then I went back to the first place and prepared to dig up things that I had not taken away before, and then someone dug me up. Then he went to a second place and was dug up again. This is the plot of the first forty or fifty chapters. In fact, these treasures may not be of much use to the protagonist. Just find a skill and add some points to make it stronger.

It doesn't look good, and it doesn't feel good at all. The key is not to write down the advantages of muscle flow. Selling dog meat with sheep's heads, the writing is a bit sloppy! ! ! ! ! The above is purely personal opinion

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Let's re-open a book. It's too ugly.

The protagonist is so stupid, even stupider than Lu Sheng😅

The cover is so ugly😅

This novel is so annoying that it makes me irritated.

Speechless, I look around and feel that the protagonist is a reckless man, others are fed by God, and you eat what others have left. You will be happy if you have to go through the hands once, and you can cultivate immortality if you want to, and you have to have a fellow Xianwu cultivator. There is no limit to cheats and you just have to wait for a month. There is no price, (equivalent exchange)? ! You want to go to heaven!

If you write well, you can enter the factory.

I came here for a cool article, but the title of the book does not match the content at all.

According to the most ordinary thinking, normal people cannot do the protagonist's series of stupid behaviors, let alone a time traveler. The protagonist is identified as a big fool, over 🤓