The Mysterious Resurrected Card Maker

Nowadays, several fan novels are written as soft rice kings. This one not only eats soft rice but also chews on the old 😁 Awesome

The event card "Let Zhang Dong Come Over" costs 5 cards to force people or ghosts to Zhang Zhang Dong.

Look left and right. . When I look at this introduction, I feel like the protagonist is just a guy who can be knocked down with one shot?

The ghost bride in my mind

Crazy pressure to fight, awesome, what can a human-headed ghost write?

Still don't change. Last time I told you not to do too much when you do it. The last time you dealt with a ghost-controller, it was still the same this time with Fang Shiming. Do you think Yang Jian would have so many surprises when he dealt with the ghost-controller? There is never a time when there is no accident! After raising it for so many days, it's still the same routine.

The kill, dodge, and flawless settings are all pretty good, but I started to get sick of it from the beginning. Whatever I use, I have to give cards to the opponent. What attracts me to this book right now is not the card maker, but the ghost father's family relationship rules. You really don't have much to read in this card making.

I told him not to cause trouble when fighting the Ghost Controller, but he refused to listen. Every time he started fighting, he encountered supernatural incidents. You can BB with a walk-on for a long time and then get involved and interrupted by supernatural events. If you don't write like this, it's like you don't know how to write.

Author, I said last time that your plot was weak, maybe my way of expressing it was wrong. The last time you were introduced to a supernatural land, you seemed a bit tasteless, that is to say, do not ink. (The no ink here means do not ink when you can crush it. Not everyone can do it!) Especially when facing the ghost controller, look at Xiao Yang in the original. Although he is submissive in supernatural events, but when facing the ghost controller, especially when he knows that he can control the opponent, he will definitely strike hard. You are now The protagonist is very awesome, but if he doesn't show off his saints in front of others, it's like walking at night in brocade clothes. As long as he decides to take action, he will use thunderous means to quickly solve it. Don't say that it's very exciting to only use the bride without his own supernatural powers. To be honest, it's very tasteless, and Qin Old people generally don't interfere in the affairs of juniors. Author, your description of supernatural events is not enough, and writing about people is inferior. This will not work. We have to have taste. If not, just imitate the original work and write about ghosts and gods, and write about people, but not super ghosts. I am just typing on my mobile phone. I am exhausted.

Do you know why so few people have watched it? The name and introduction make people have no desire to watch it. It gives people the feeling of a passionate young man in the middle school. There is no idea of ​​​​wanting to watch it (I haven't watched it, just based on my feeling)

One thing to say, the writing has been terrible recently. What kind of item is so cool that it can create two captain-level direct and exaggerated fixed-point generation.

The Qidian Suspense Channel has really suffered a lot from the mysterious resurgence. There are only a few books with good results, but they are all fanfics of this type.

For example: Liar (guess it): Take out a card and say the name of any card. If no one questions it, you can use the card corresponding to the name at no cost... Zhang Dong (calling the old man): Take out five cards as reward, open a card channel, call the old man to wave his hand and carry out targeted attacks on the target.

Also, when you fight, don't think about suppressing the protagonist. If you don't use your full strength every time, you can do it yourself.

My name is Si Ye, I traveled to the mysterious resurrection, but I am not afraid at all, because I control the thigh ghost👻. On the top of the ghosts, proud of the world, there will be a sky with us! Ghost dad, save me!!!

Why is it getting worse as I write... I feel like I'm not as good as the previous Illustrator

Recently, the secondary feeling has disappeared, and it's a bit watery. It's not that the plot is watery, but that the way you deal with the protagonist is a bit tasteless, especially when you are dealing with a sidekick. You know that the opponent deliberately lures you to the bait, but you still go there. It is interesting for the protagonist to take the initiative to explore. This not only makes the protagonist look brainless, but also the positioning of the combat power is unclear. Be careful.

What attracts me most about this book is the family relationship, which is really unexpected. I hope the author can arrange the plot well and not continue such a good development.

The writing was actually okay, except that I didn't feel the protagonist's fear. . . It's like wearing a skin. .

The current protagonist, the card maker, has extremely weak attributes, and it is easy for people to misunderstand the content of the book. Better to change the name

My new book "The Almighty Card Maker: Starting from Zhong Kui", all the weird things, important characters, cards, and materials will be illustrated I have completed the work without any unfinished work, and my character guarantees that you can enter the game with confidence. The following is a brief introduction to the work: [Mythology, history and folklore, academy flow, secret copy, illustrator] Mo Bai traveled through the card world and became a new trainee card maker. Here, everything that forms collective memory can be used to make cards and play extraordinary and wonderful roles. Popular culture, celebrities, social occupations, hot events... History, myths, folklore, legends, all can be used to create cards. Among them, cards made from historical myths and folklore have great power! Unfortunately, due to the invasion of monsters, this world has suffered a civilization fault, and historical myths and folklore have long been lost. However, Mo Bai, who is familiar with these, can use them to make cards as he likes! Encountering red and white demons at the beginning, in order to save his life, he decisively made the divine summoning card [Zhong Kui], and since then he has embarked on the path of an all-around card master: A summoning card that no one else can create even if they try to break their brains? [Huang Feihong], [Guan Yu], [Black/White Impermanence]... I can choose any historical heroic spirit or mythological god! Equipment card? [Embroidered spring knife], [Zhangba snake spear], [Golden cudgel]... Swords, guns, axes and pickaxes, there is no best, only better! Vehicle card? Friends, have you heard of [Wood Cow and Flooding Horse] and [Kunpeng] which cannot be stewed in one pot? Venue card? After passing this [Naihe Bridge], your card will forget you as the card owner, I am so awesome! Trap card? I activate the [Spring Festival] effect, and all cards on the field must be returned to the card owner for reunion! A few years later, Mo Bai Muran looked back and found that he was already at the top of the card master!

A middle-aged boy with a rubbish combat power and eunuch Wen

I've read several fanfics, but I love writing about the mummy bride 😴