Ji Han Da Sima

It's good in the early stages, but it gets more and more boring later on, and overall it's just average. Advantages: 1. The writing style is good, and the writing has the ancient style needed for historical writing, and the writing is smooth; 2. It is based on official history, which is also clear in the Three Kingdoms literature, and the description combined with maps and historical materials is also a kind of popular science; 3. The protagonist's character is also good in the style of a Confucian general, with a lustful but not romantic character. Disadvantages: 1. The plot is not straightforward enough. First, the protagonist is a secret servant to the two masters. Later, the protagonist can actually start his own business. Second, the protagonist Liu Bei's power has always been at odds with Jingzhou. He has always been in a weak and submissive state. It is not straightforward enough and makes it boring to watch. 2. The characterization of the characters is still stereotyped, and it feels a bit like a running story. The charm of the Three Kingdoms lies in the fact that heroes and beauties appeared in this period. Each character has a different and unique attraction. I think the author's writing skills are not enough here. 3. In the end, I felt that the intelligence of some characters was greatly reduced, and there was almost no complex description of human nature. This was very straightforward in Liu Biao, the brother-in-law, etc., Which made me laugh. It is better for the author to make human nature more complex and changeable, so that the characters are more vivid, the plot is more interesting, and the creation is not limited to official history. Above.

The writing is like spring flowers, and the thoughts are like springs. Unparalleled in Hannan, prose in the world. As soon as a donkey crows in sorrow, it will be a funeral farewell for eternity.

When the beacon fire of Wuzhangyuan burns out the history The young man with ideal heart is white-haired Thousands of people, in the past, he traveled far for you and never returned When you meet the dragon, follow the dragon, now there is a scorching sun that shines brightly, leading to peace May you never forget the name of the country, which is Han! Pillow on the Milky Way, Invite the Beidou Hallow Room Drawing Kyushu Meeting bosom friends Drinking in peace The mighty river wind full of sleeves Heroic guest, stepping on the flames of the troubled times Traveling to a foreign country, finally living up to the family and the mountain Farewell to the world, farewell to Qingshi Don't forget the name of the country is Han Chang'an is far away, the mountains and rivers are old The dream of youth is not over If you will be destined Leaving it behind Resuming the Spring and Autumn Period of the Han Dynasty The road is long, a few journeys to the Central Plains Strong words, lonely ministers guarding important passes Wandering the Shu Road, tracing the Jianghan Feng Youxin, the scholar has no sleep Heroic guest, walking in the beacon smoke of troubled times Traveling in foreign lands, finally living up to the family and the mountain Farewell in the world, farewell in history Don't forget the name of the country is Han

I just read a novel exactly like this one! The key is that they have 20 more chapters than you! Now I can't figure out which of you copied which. I want to believe you, after all, I have read it all the way from the last book. Otherwise, you can update Chapter 21 tomorrow and I'll see if that works~

①According to the experience of the Southern Dynasties, the north should build the Huainan defense line with Zhongli and Shouyang as the core, and then use Jianye as the center and Hefei as the sub-center to operate the imperial army. Although the imperial army system of the Tang Dynasty had many problems, it was a good strategy to integrate internal forces, be effective in the short term and have development potential in the long term ② In the late Eastern Han Dynasty, the gap between the north and the south Extremely, if you want to strengthen the strength of the South in a short period of time, you must absorb northern refugees. I suggest learning from the Southern Song Dynasty to reclaim polders. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, there were a large number of swamps near Nanjing, which was a perfect place to develop polders. You can learn from the Eastern Jin Dynasty to divide the large counties. This way, the power of Jiangdong's wealthy families will not be invaded in the short term, and it will be easy to attack them in the long term. ③According to historical experience, there are almost no aristocratic families among the many wealthy families in Jiangdong. This will also be the key target of Liu Bei's suppression in the future. Even the wandering aristocratic families in the north in the late Western Jin Dynasty can crush them to death. I don't believe that the protagonist can't find any reason to do so.

Let's evaluate this book objectively. The idea of ​​taking Jiangdong is very good, and the writing is also very good at the beginning. In the protagonist section of Chapter 30, Huo Jun reaches the climax at the banquet and agrees to conquer Jiangdong. The writing is very brilliant, and he really has the style of a political strategist. But then things take a turn for the worse. Of course when people read the Three Kingdoms, they want to see the interaction with Liu Bei, Zhuge Liang, Cao Cao, etc. As a result, the protagonist is in Jiangxia and fights with a bunch of unpopular characters (these people may not be unpopular in the first place, but the writing is not top-notch). It is very intellectually slow and makes people feel that the rhythm is dragging. The war scenes were written with little feeling. The writing is intended to pursue an ancient style, but the author doesn't have the ink, so many places are specious. There is no need to watch anything else. Watch Romance of the Three Kingdoms more, even if it is a TV series, and learn how the people in it speak. There are also some professional historical knowledge issues. Maybe because I was born as a history major, I am a little picky, but it is really a problem. This book seems to be rootless and very empty. Up to now, Liu Bei does not have a stable territory, his military strength has not increased, and his civil servants and generals have not increased one by one. A lot of pen and ink are used to describe how wretched and difficult people like Kuai Caihuang are. To be fair, it is impossible for readers to not feel uncomfortable reading this every day. No matter how reasonable this kind of plot is, is it good to watch? The rhythm is really poorly controlled.

If it is true that the Han Dynasty is three times prosperous, then based on the situation in ancient times, it is equivalent to saying that the destiny of the Han Dynasty is in the Han Dynasty. If it is like this and it can be revived again, it is really possible for the Han Dynasty to continue for a long time.

I just read a few chapters and made the Cao fans in the comment section laugh. The theme of the recent Cao fan group building work is to complain to the Mi family with hypocrisy and indignation? In several Shu Han novels, I have seen a group of Cao fans repeating in a fancy way, "Big Ear is the one who feels sorry for the Mi family", "What happened to selling Guan Yu to Jingzhou? The Mi family is the biggest contributor", "The Mi family is the richest man, so they must have great abilities, the Big Ear thieves deliberately suppressed them and did not reuse them!", "An The rank of General of Han and the post of Governor of Nanjun are simply not worthy of the talents and contributions of the Mi brothers!" According to Cao Fan, not to mention that Zhuge Liang's position of power should be given to Mi Zhu, and Guan Yu, the former general and governor of Jingzhou, should be given to Mi Fang. Is it possible that the lord and king of Hanzhong will have to be given to the Mi family? But what's funny is, has Cao Fan forgotten that there is something called a boomerang in this world? Does Cao Fan know about the Chen Liuwei family? The bereaved dog of your family, Ajiejie, fled to Yanzhou. It was the angel investor Wei family who gave money to help Ajieji raise troops to fight against Dong. In the Battle of Bianshui, Ajiegie chased after him without thinking, but Xu Rong pushed him to the ground and rubbed him. The head of the Wei family, Wei Ziqing, They helped each other and died on the spot—— According to Cao Fan's standard of hypocritically aggrieved by the Mi family, Ahajiegie should not only recognize Wei Zi as his father, but should at least give Wei Zi's son Wei Zhen the same rights and status as Xun Yu and Xiahou Dun. Isn't that too much? No, no, no, Cao Fan, who is just and just, will not deny justice to Wei Zhen, right? There is also the Taishan Bao family. The head of the family, Bao Xin, was a truly powerful faction in the alliance in the early days of the Dong Dynasty. He spared no effort to defeat your family, Ajiegie, and also strongly supported Ajiegie's mindless pursuit. As a result, a large number of soldiers and horses were lost, and his younger brother Bao Tao was also killed on the spot. Later, there was no owner in Yanzhou, and Bao Xin led the officials and people of the whole state to support Amojiejie as the leader. Soon he followed Amaojiegie in the crusade against the Yellow Turbans. Due to Amaojiegie's brainless command, the army was violently beaten by the Yellow Turbans, but Bao Xin saved him desperately. It took a lot of lives and even death without a whole body to let Ajieji save a dog's life—— Continuing to follow Cao Fan's standard of hypocritically complaining about the Mi family, is it not too much for your Ajiegie to call Brother Bao Xin grandpa and second grandpa? Ah Miaojie must have treated Bao Xin's sons very well. He must have made Bao Xun and Bao Shao the political or military second-in-command, right? No, no, no, the just and just Cao fans will not fail to uphold justice for the Bao family, right?

This book looks pretty good at first, but the author always likes literary youth, and he gets into trouble when you least expect it. Before the Battle of Hefei, the protagonist was world-famous and a famous general in the world, but he almost lost his fortune. Later, Cao Cao promised the protagonist to make him King of Huainan in order to drive a wedge between the protagonist and Liu Bei. He said that the protagonist was a time traveler and that he was familiar with various examples of incidents in history. On the other hand, the protagonist played with the golden seal for another night; Guan Yu was preparing to attack Xiangfan, and Liu Bei asked the protagonist for his opinion. The protagonist, who was designed to predict the enemy, refused to express his opinion because he did not understand and could not say more... Anyway, it always made me jump on the edge of giving up and pursuing.

Can anyone tell me how you got past this poisonous spot? . . , The book in the belly of the fish in front is poisonous enough. . I didn't expect that there would be something more poisonous later. . . I really can't hold on to publishing the chapter

The protagonist is a Jingzhou native, and in the end he was granted a fiefdom in North Korea. Although he was granted the title of king, there is still a hint of overt promotion and covert demotion.

When I first read this book, I felt that it was okay. Some of the words and documents are quite rigorous. It is a good reading. When I saw Huo Jun plotting for Liu Bei to seize Jiangdong's foundation, my eyes lit up. It's a good entry point. , Taking advantage of Sun Quan's unsteady foothold, he teamed up with Liu Biao to seize Jiangdong, until Zhou Yu was defeated by Huo Jun and went into the sea of fire with the navy, the Battle of Chrysostom perfectly replaced Chibi and shocked the Central Plains, all are good, but anyone who has seen the Battle of Hefei without modification will understand. It was so big that I was so angry when I read it that I even wrote a continuation of it 😅 The Battle of Xiangfan. I haven't read it since. Today I read dozens of chapters in one go. There is a paragraph in the book where Liu Bei asked Huo Jun what he thought about Guan Yu's fight against Xiangfan. Huo Jun He didn't say anything because he didn't understand. Huo Jun, who had always predicted the enemy beforehand and had far-sighted plans, didn't express his opinion. 😥 Time: Rainy season. Location: Xiangfan. The battle was in Xiangfan. There was no Cao Ren in Jin. What could Guan Yu do? The Seventh Army must be flooded, so you won't express your opinion at this time? There is also the problem of horses. How could Cao Cao let the horses go to Xiliang? General Shenwei Tian's foundation is in Xiliang. Can he let the tiger go back to the mountain? With Cao Cao's suspicious character, it is impossible for his five good generals to command too many troops. Did I not read the book carefully? There is also a core issue: the title of the book is Ji Han Da Sima, not the Zhong Xing Biography of Ji Han. Huo Jun participated in too little in the later period. Book friends said that it would be better if Liu Bei was removed from the line and Huo Dudu took over the military power. I think so. I think I should write about the process of self-cultivation, that is, write some rather than just jump to the war in one stroke. However, I am still a passerby. Bystanders, the group portraits are too group. No matter how the group portraits are grouped together, they all have intersections with the protagonist. It doesn't matter whether you fight the war with or without the protagonist. The first attraction is that helping Liu Bei go to Jiangdong completely changed his destiny and direction. Going to Xichuan to fight Hanzhong and Xiangfan were all step-by-step, and he was still a protagonist who had no sense of participation at all. This book was not that interesting while reading. So good, the opposition between the northern and southern forces of the two sides was actually completely broken when Cao Cao died. They were defeated for many years and lost their troops. It was okay when Cao Cao was around. Cao Cao started to float when he lost the support of the people. Now it is a two-front battle, whether it is fighting Chang'an or conquering Pi. As long as the enemy is defeated along the way, the center of Cao Wei will be even more unstable, and it will only win more and more as it fights. Today I was inspired when I saw a single chapter posted by the author. From Geng Xin's "Cao Thief Doesn't Know the Author's House Traveling World" more than ten years ago to now, there are not many good Three Kingdoms novels written now, because they are all ruined and there is nothing to write about. This book is still very good, ignoring some unreasonable parts. The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize it if you don't like it. Good cheers, author!

I always feel that the author is going to clean up the mess again, so I'll let it go first

I still feel uncomfortable about the ending of the shrouded body in horse leather. The protagonist made great contributions to Ji Han all his life, but he died so hastily. Even his wife and children did not see him for the last time. They say that the protagonist's death is the highest honor for a military commander. However, I think there is a kind of peace that is determined by the general and is not allowed. The feeling of a general seeing peace (actually not very appropriate) I originally thought that the protagonist should be able to enjoy his old age with his family in the peaceful and prosperous era that he personally laid and created. Is it so difficult for a general who has been running for half his life to unify the world to take a closer look at the gradual prosperity of the country he has built?

This author writes the protagonist as if there is no one at all. Author, just write it like this. Anyway, when the protagonist comes out, you can subscribe.

In addition to flattering the protagonist, and also encouraging future generations to boast, it is really disgusting. Sanxing Yanhan, Liu Yu actually broke into Chang'an? Wouldn't that mean he lived for a total of 200 years? What has you developed that makes you stronger than the Jin Dynasty? Then there is no Wu Huan Hua? So Liu Yu's co-authorship is even more useless? It hasn't even been two hundred years, but after four times of Han Dynasty, there is still Li Shimin? Li Shimin's background is in the Guanlong family and the history of the Six Towns. Without Xianbei, would there still be Li Shimin? Then after so many years of development, there are actually Song, Yuan, and Zhu Yuanzhang. It's so lonely. Is your butterfly effect changed back? The four-pronged Yanhan Dynasty was actually unable to achieve a thousand-year empire and a single lineage for eternity. I should say that we just have more backbone and blood than the Japanese, right? The key is that this chapter is just to brag about the protagonist. It completely fails to recognize the contribution and achievements of the country and the people. It is just bragging about you. It's really pretending. Fortunately I didn't order all of this book, it was a waste of money

I came from Zhongzu, but to be honest, I didn't feel good at the beginning, and the sentences were a bit unsound. Didn't I have a strong foundation in classical Chinese before? Why have you regressed... Secondly, I can't understand your logic of defecting to Liu Bei. Liu Bei is indeed a good lord, but as a time traveler, either he is kind to you, and you can repay the favor and join him, or you yourself are hopeless and unappreciated, so you can join him while Liu Bei is still in his prime. You haven't written these two points of the problem. You have relied on connections to join the army, and you can be regarded by Liu Biao and Liu Qi as joining the army or as a general. You can promote a large-scale war in the south by yourself. You come up with strategies and fight wars. Then what is your reason and logic for joining Liu Bei? Anyway, it looks a bit confusing, so just keep reading and take a look. After all, the previous one is really good, hey...

The author writes according to your ideas. Why can Boss Cao's younger brother die, but Boss Liu's younger brother cannot? In war, there will be immortals

No, you were not convinced when readers scolded you for changing the plot of Zhang Liao's episode, and you were holding your breath. Now that it's over, you don't have to worry about reading and subscribing. It's started again, right? 😄

Three situation maps

Huo Jun was supposed to flood Hefei, like a frog in warm water. Generals Zhang and Li did not want to sit back and wait for death. They repeatedly attacked the camp without success. Huo Jun expected Zhang and Li to attack the camp at night. In order to completely eliminate Zhang and Li, he told General Zhao and Huang to build the camp based on the river banquet. The Chinese army hid in the two armies and used themselves as bait to set up pocket formations and wait for the enemy to take the bait. Zhang and Li thought that Zhao Yun's more elite Huo Jun should hide in Zhao Yun's tribe, so they decided to divide their troops into two groups. Zhang Liao's cavalry attacked Zhao Yun, and Li Dian's infantry attacked Huang Zhong to attack Huo Jun together. However, they did not realize that Huang Zhong's tribe was indeed inferior to Zhao Yun's tribe and collapsed too quickly. In order to avoid too much damage to the army, they had no choice but to send Huang Zhong to gather his headquarters and attack Li Dian. Seeing that Zhang Liao was exhausted from fighting for a long time, Huo Jun decided to raise a banner as planned to lure Zhang Liao forward. Zhao Yun prepared to flank, but Zhang Liao took the bait and led dozens of guards to go straight to Huo Jun. Huo Jun was well prepared.         ，，，，30 ，， Thousands of arrows were fired at the guards, Zhang Liao's bodyguards kept blocking arrows, killing and injuring them all. The distance between the two kept getting closer. Huo Jun was panicking. Huang Zhong should have faced him head-on, but Zhao Yun made a surprise attack from the side. God's calculations were not as good as God's, and there was no one left under his command. Huo Jun decided to go into battle himself. Although Zhang Liao fought in front of Huo Jun, he failed. He was also hit by several arrows, and the sword in his hand had long been lost. He drew his sword and ran towards Huo Jun. Zhang Liao was as brave as a tiger with one breath. Huo Jun blocked his shoulder with a sword from left to right. He was in danger. He suddenly heard Huo Jun shouting that General Zilong came to help me. Zhang Liao turned around in panic, but his throat was blocked by Huo Jun's sword. Zhang Liao died in the battle. Huo Jun looked at Zhang Liao's body without saying a word for a long time, and ordered Zhang Liao to be buried well. Li Dian was beheaded by Huang Zhong, and Hefei was decided. Huo Jun watched the doctor bandage the wound in the camp. He recalled that he had a smooth journey, and he was ahead of the enemy every time. This time he was almost killed by Zhang Liao, and he began to reflect constantly. This sword wound also reminded himself that arrogance is not advisable in this life. A lion fights a rabbit with all its strength.

Is Shennong here? Since the protagonist is Da Sima, I would like to know how good he is at fighting? The most annoying thing is that the author blows up an ordinary strategy into a shocking one. The protagonist's fighting skills are described as average, but it is blown up that Han Xin is still alive. Therefore, if it is a protagonist who mainly performs meritorious deeds on the battlefield, and the author cannot write a variety of cunning strategies and command like a god, then it will be unreadable. ——Oh, no need, I saw in the catalog "Kill Zhou Yu Na Er Qiao", this book probably does not meet my three views. I don't object to the protagonist having beauties, but the identity of Er Qiao is there. It's not like there were no beauties in ancient times. If I have to have Er Qiao, isn't it just to enjoy the feeling of cuckolding Sun Ce and Zhou Yu?

Now enter the confrontation between the north and the south and begin to rest and recuperate. About domestic affairs, daily life, and farming. Do you have any good suggestions? You can tell me

A rather plain book, it began to develop in the middle period of the Three Kingdoms. The first part was okay, but from the middle onwards it was really dragging and boring. You could basically skip it from line to line without affecting your enjoyment of the plot. The characterization is not great, and the plot doesn't have many ups and downs. And at the end of the day, an internet fictional historical novel was written as a group drama in the middle period. I really want to compare it with a masterpiece like The Romance of the Three Kingdoms.

"Han Ji·Huo ​​Jun Family": Quan was defeated in many battles, and only Wu Hui could survive. ... Quan's younger brother, Yu, stationed his troops at Jingkou to defend Jun. In order to prevent our troops from attacking Jingkou, Yu set up many beacons along the river from Niuzhu to Beigu, making it difficult to attack them. The army was angry, but Jun was still celebrating like yesterday. ... The emperor asked about Zhuge Liang, and Liang smiled and said: Bu Ji has the appearance of a shy flower, and Huo Hou is young, so why not be greedy for pleasure? When the emperor was angry, Liang Nai told the truth and used it as a plan. He turned happy and helped Jun carry out his strategy. ... Jun Ming loves his wife, so he secretly sends troops to attack the beacon towers along the river, and is about to do it. In order to prevent the Sun family from spying on him, he is even more greedy and happy. Bu Ji advises Jun: "You are a young hero, how can you dethrone your father because of my concubine? If you still do this, I would rather die." Jun Nai told the truth, and from then on he loved her even more. Throughout his life, Bu Ji's honor and favor did not diminish. If you look closely, you will find that she is both beautiful and virtuous. ... When Jun broke through the entrance of the capital, the whole world was shocked. He was young and not burdened by fame, but he was the only one who used military force because of his own defilement. People at that time obeyed the words of Wang Can and Wu Zi. "Han Ji·Zhuge Liang Family": The emperor was very angry when he heard that Jun had stopped his troops and was greedy for pleasure. Zhao Liang asked him about it. Liang said it was human nature and the emperor was very angry. Liang smiled and said: "The marching troops are like antelopes hanging their horns. Sun Wu's resurrection is just like this. Why don't you know?" The emperor was overjoyed and asked again. Liang persuaded the emperor to help him, and promoted Jun's filth. When Wu Hui heard about it, they all laughed at Jun's false reputation. When the entrance to Jing was broken, Wu Hui was frightened. Appendix of "Han Chronicles: Biography of Sun Jian and Sun Ce" Sun Quan: Quan's younger brother Yu stationed at Jingkou and held Jun's troops. Fearing Jun's attack, they set up beacon towers along the river and raised fire as a signal when they saw Mongolia. Yu thought he had a plan and boasted that although the heavenly soldiers were in trouble at Jingkou. When Jun broke through the entrance of the capital, there was no signal from the beacon tower. Yu surrendered in fear and bowed to Jun, saying: General, could it be that the divine soldiers descended from heaven?

The sphere of influence of the Hanchang Kingdom.

Does the author dare to take the challenge of writing about the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms 😏

"Han Ji·Zhongzu Benji": The emperor and Quan were in a stalemate for ten months in Yishan. The emperor had a lot of power and allowed thieves to do it. The emperor strictly enforced military discipline. Quan bullied the people of Yue. The emperor loved and cared for him like his son, and the people of Yue were grateful to the emperor for his kindness. At that time, Huo Jun crossed the river to defeat the Marquis of Xia, and Quan's troops were frightened. Quan asked Zhou Yu for advice, but Yu did not dare to persist for a long time. Quan responded to Yu's plan and asked for a battle, and joined forces to decide the emperor. Sun Changsha, an old general in the Ministry of Quan, was grateful to Sun Changsha and his descendants for their kindness, and fought to the death, making it difficult for our army to win. There were Yue people, You Qian, who gathered more than a thousand people and attacked Quan's rear army. Quan's army was completely defeated. The emperor then took full control of Danyang and entered Youjiangzuo. You Qian was a native of the Yue people. He had been given the authority to let thieves plunder them and hunted the emperor's horses for food. The emperor valued the people more than animals and did not consider them sinful. He felt their hardship and gave food to his family. Therefore, the people of Yue all regard the emperor as their holy master and will not hesitate to die. Alas! Since ancient times, how many people, except the emperor, have regarded the people as their most important people and are so kind and virtuous?

Let's talk about which king should be called 1. King of Wuhan 2. King of Hanyang 3. King of Hanchang 4. King of Hanxing 5. King of Chu 6. King of Hanzhong 7. King of Zhongshan 8. King of Shu 9. King of Jiangyang 10. King of kings

As the old saying goes: The general trend of the world is that if it has been divided for a long time, it must be united, and if it has been united for a long time, it must be divided! Being a farmer in the morning and ascending to the Emperor's Hall in the evening. The general has no seeds at all, and a man should strive for self-improvement. Protagonist: King Gao in the late Han Dynasty ➕ Erfeng character design ➕ Northern Zhou route 🙂🙂 Let's take a look at the strongest carbon-based creature at the turn of the second and third centuries, the ceiling of combat power in the world, the leader of Asia, the talker of the Eastern Hemisphere, controlling the world's soldiers and horses, the posture of dragon and phoenix, The Great Han Taiwei, Situ, Prime Minister, General, Shangshu Ling, Zhongshu Ling, Yongzhou Mu, Bingzhou General Manager, Left and Right General Wuhou, Left and Right Twelve Guards Generals, Tang King of Shangzhu Kingdom, Tiance General, Tiankhan, the heroic emperor Shenwu Gao, how to end the troubled times of the late Han Dynasty! The Shenwu Emperor Zhang Yu has an outstanding appearance, his divine eyes are like lightning, and a candle can shine thousands of miles away, so he can be called a god; he is deep and reserved, knows people well and uses them well, and has great military exploits, so he can be called a martial artist. Born in a frontier fortress, he has the wisdom and courage to bring peace to the world, bring a happy ending to the troubled times of the late Han Dynasty, and recreate the Zhengshuo of China!