Talking About Dongli in Kuzhou

The writing is interesting, but most of the people writing about Pili are from Yandu.

I bet I won't be able to write 100 chapters. One update a day is basically a rush.

It was quite interesting in the early stage, but as the protagonist played word games and forced his way into action, it seemed that the author was writing this part to have a better time, but in my personal opinion, it was a B-level failure. Later, as the protagonist becomes more and more involved, the plot becomes more and more boring. After all, the essence of Long Aotian Invincible is that the protagonist is the center. The protagonist is absolutely correct and strong, and there are no taboos based on his strength. It's a pity that the protagonist's correctness comes from watching TV dramas through time travel, and his invincibility comes from cheats. Neither of them has anything to do with the protagonist himself. Moreover, the author's own writing skills are insufficient, and his characterization is not good either. These points prevent B grid from being established. The direct consequence of not having a B box is that sometimes you will think that the protagonist is a clown based on his words and deeds... In fact, the early setting is really good. The protagonist is only invincible in the inn, and the guests will not take action unless they break the rules. Moreover, the protagonist's strength does not need to be too high after leaving the inn. He can completely rely on information gaps and outsmarting to stir up trouble. In this way, as long as there are no problems with the plot of Gambit after leaving the inn, the character's B-level will be established, and the fact that his strength depends entirely on cheats will not be too eye-catching. I also want to complain about something. The story told by the protagonist about Zhe Tian is actually based on the original work. The author has no idea what storytelling is like...

The updates are up to me and not up to the sky, and the conversation and laughter stop updating in Ling Yandu. Write, there are countless numbers in the world; Gu, I will not survive if I am defeated. —Yefen

Storytelling exposes the literary system, an alternative to Long Aotian. This kind of writing is very embarrassing. If you expose some destiny in the world in various ways, it will be very poisonous.

How can I put it? I've almost seen it. Let me share my opinion. The protagonist uses the system to cheat and improve his ability to the top of the table, and then stands on the commanding heights of the time traveler (screenwriter) to dominate. In the name of being a hero and reversing tragedy, I forcibly carry out dimensionality reduction attacks on a group of characters. I don't know if this can be called refreshing, but I personally feel that this protagonist is too arrogant and has no plans for his own strength and future (if nothing else, at least you have an ideal, or you can cultivate Confucianism to change the reality of dire straits, dire straits, and human life is worse than that of a dog) , or practicing Taoism and studying the great ways, or creating a dynasty to conquer the world, or being a free and easy person in the world, etc.), But if something happens along the way, just blame it on the system. You are only as good as the system. I can only say that you are like a child using a cheat device to play games. He has no skills and looks powerful. It is creepy when you think about it. The first person on the table is like this? Shit stirrer? The more classic one is that when you meet Lao Qi, you start to be reasonable, shrink your eggs, and start to punch hard when you meet other villains. I like to read cool novels, but I think this kind of protagonist is similar to Tang San. He has no inhibitions when he has power, and he becomes timid when he encounters hard problems. It looks very bad. I saw another comment that was quite interesting. The main character is a loser who blames everything on the system. The author made this decision because he couldn't make the story come true. I agree with that. It's not that the system is not good. On the one hand, it took shortcuts. On the other hand, you need to strengthen the characters and the plot. Anyway, I really can't stand it anymore. It's not easy to be a Pili fan, so just watch and cherish it.

Yefen, you have to stand up! Don't forget the bet you and I made in the group. As long as you can still update after I have completed three months of perfect attendance, I will write for Love Power for another three months. You can't lose.

It would be unwise to give up the line of the World Monument. This is an opportunity that can save a lot of unhappiness. It also brings out many behind-the-scenes forces in advance. Wouldn't it be nice to have a big fight? Although it is indeed difficult to write.

The main character is really a jerk

The martial arts division is really finished. Even with 500 votes, I can be ranked in the top ten.