If I Add Money to Become a Layman, I Can Cultivate Immortality

I recently re-watched Chang'an's Twelve Hours and found that as ordinary people, whether they are soldiers of the Eighth Regiment or ordinary citizens, or even small officials of the eighth or ninth grade who are already big shots to ordinary people, there is no way to solve the unexpected situation in the plot. What I mean by breaking the situation is how ordinary people can get out of trouble. After thinking about it for a long time, there is no solution. Whether it is the celebrity Jiao Sui who wears a goldfish bag and drinks with the rich and powerful Or the owner of the barber shop The owner of the hotel The family of the household clerk who meets the emperor by chance Or the soldiers on guard who are on guard will die if they get it.

Beauty

Ding Baiying

You are just making fun of the layman with extra money. However, even if a liar later clears his name, it cannot clear away the fait accompli that he killed his junior brother. You are born with limitations when writing this novel. The Holy Mother is illogical, black-hearted and disgusting. You might as well write about Xiao Gui, the flag bearer in Chang'an's Twelve Hours.

Ding Baiying

You actually want to be a royal guard, you have a lot of brains, right?

Add money to lay people

It looks fine from the front. The part about Azi in The Eight Parts of Demi-Gods made me want to vomit. Azi, who grew up in the Xingxiu sect, had no concept of right and wrong at all, and did not treat people as human beings. When I was a child, watching TV series, I felt that she was more hateful than all the villains. Other villains know that what they do is evil and wrong. But Anzi and Azi's acting style made it completely unfeeling that they were doing something wrong. If I had the strength of the protagonist, I would kill her the first thing I do when I meet her.

I've watched almost half of it, but I still can't see where I am cultivating immortality 😅😅😅

Is this book just a plot or something else? There has to be a main line.

Hey, I really can't bear to add that face as the protagonist... It would be too greasy if I didn't bring it in. I might as well choose Shen Lian.

If you have any good suggestions, such as which wonderful worlds to travel through, you can leave a message here. This book mainly focuses on traveling through some classic film and television worlds.

The first world is beautiful, but later on he becomes a pervert and wants to be stabbed wherever he goes.

Replace the lay person who adds money with a person who talks a lot, and there's nothing else

It was fine in the beginning, but when it comes to the Tianlong chapter, I'll probably have to ghostwrite it.

The author, the Jurchen people are a fishing and hunting people, Jurchen means fishing and hunting, you give the entire Jurchen nomadic people. The White Mountains and Black Waters are not prairie, so they cannot be nomadic. Moreover, Murong Yan of Xianbei was just a separatist force and was quickly destroyed. How could he take over the Central Plains?

It is very important to follow up on new books. Feijian hereby urges all book friends to follow up on reading, because now the recommendations of new books are based on reading the latest chapters. Greetings to the layman who adds money! Mrs. Ma: I heard that you pursue a lot of studies? I don't want to be a bit player, I want to be the heroine. Ding Xiu: 200 taels. Mrs. Ma: Here you go... One chapter later: Mrs. Ma: Hey, hey, men are all liars... Ding Xiu picked his teeth: Madam, your money is obviously not enough, you need more money! ! !

Traveling through all the worlds, there are many girls. Unfortunately, the author just likes some second-hand goods. In the first world, he starts with prostitutes. In the second world, he plays with the women Duan Zhengchun has played with again. I am really speechless =_=

The one about Mrs. Ma having sex in Sydney is really tempting. Is Li Qingluo there? A friend wants to see it.

I was immediately confused by Tian Long Ba Bu. They added random settings.

Wuxia and Xianxia have fallen into a vicious circle of upgrading - fighting monsters - upgrading again - fighting monsters again. Why do people practice martial arts? From a high point of view, he is a great chivalrous person who serves the country and the people. At the lowest level, it is for power, fame, money and women. Not to fight monsters. Is it always martial arts and skills that defeat people? It would be better to hold a martial arts Olympics. What is the most powerful thing in Jianghu? It's conspiracy, it's poison and gunpowder, it's the hero's shortness of breath, it's the love between his son and his daughter. The current protagonist is simply more of a model drama than a model drama. Gao Weizheng, who is so slick, doesn't even have normal emotions, let alone a sex life.

Aren't you a cultivator? Why did you go to the nine-story demon tower again? Hurry up and pack up your resources and go to the next world.

The second half of "Xiuchundao" was written too sparingly, and it didn't speed up the plot. What you wrote is just a detailed outline, it doesn't even count as a story. Don't speed up just to travel through the world. To give a practical example, Infinite Streaming, some worlds are brilliantly written, and the author specifically chooses that world as the background theme for his next book, which actually makes the author successful. Don't let anyone say that your writing is too long, so just uploading the detailed outline is really putting the cart before the horse. Because the way you write at the beginning is very detailed, not fast and flowing, don't change the style halfway. This is a big taboo. I have been reading books for more than ten years, and every time I changed my writing style halfway through, I always fell out of favor. The reason is very simple. If you can understand the opening, you have accepted your opening style. If you change it halfway, who will you change it to?

The introduction is interesting, but the main text is average.

The further you read, the more addictive it becomes. You just write casually, perfunctory readers, and buying chapters is a waste of money. You have no intention at all in writing.

It's really enough for a chicken to waste so much pen and ink.

. . . Come on

Author, you can do it. I jumped on the street and wrote a copy of the Demonic Way. You also rushed to write a copy of the Demonic Way. Hahaha, I want to subscribe to see how your copy of the Demonic Way goes.

As the title suggests, it seems that you are thinking about a new book?

This book is written like a toy. It is a waste of such a good character like Ding Xiu. The content of each volume is limited to about 10 chapters. What can be written about it? Those who feel sorry for themselves subscribe...