I Was Supposed to Be Dreaming, So Why Did Reality Become a Shura Field?

The main character smoked and left. Don't say things like "I'll just leave" without mentioning it here. I dedicated a chapter specifically to saying this.

I've been a long-time hater of this author, so here's a brief review of the book. First, to be honest, the early part of the previous book, "Reading the Save," which was up to my liking, was very much in line with my taste. The delicate emotions and the sense of disillusionment were simply captivating.

You couldn't write something like this without being a bit of a madman.

Here's a suggestion: if the protagonist is going to build a harem, they shouldn't be hypocritical, wanting to build a harem while simultaneously worrying about societal opinions and thus procrastinating.

Here's a unified response, including to the author: Even though they have a new, healthy body and no longer have the physical addiction, they're still starting to smoke again because of the psychological addiction 😅 LOL. And I want to warn those who think "cigarettes are medicine for adults": if you didn't get addicted when you were young, you won't suddenly say "Oh, I'm so worried, let me have a…

Given Orange Bro's style, I don't really agree with the label not being healing 😤

I left. I watched it on and off several times, picking it up and putting it down again. I just couldn't bear to watch anymore. The simulator is completely pointless now, and there's still no concrete information about the woman; it's all a long, tangled mess of unresolved issues. The stomachache-related literature brought back memories of 10 years ago. The protagonist's choices are also...

To be fair, there's nothing wrong with smoking in real life, but in the world of novels, it's normal for tough guys in gangster or war-themed stories to smoke; it's all the same thing. Why does this author have to explain at the beginning? Is the male protagonist some kind of heavy smoker who smokes a whole pack of cigarettes a day? It's so off-putting.

I subscribed specifically for this, and the protagonist smoking isn't unusual, but the way he smokes it feels so out of place. It feels jarring and contrived, like it was written intentionally but didn't contribute anything to the protagonist's character development. It just feels like they're trying to filter out readers every now and then. Okay, buddy, I admit you succeeded.

Long review, opened by the author I hadn't read it for a while and didn't expect it to be finished. I still think that "Love Reading" is the one that truly resonates with me and is a masterpiece among masterpieces. I couldn't get into it at first, but after a long time, I discovered "Love Reading" again and checked the comments section.