Genshin Impact: Start in the Sea of ​​Sand and Reach the Throne of God

The author wrote something, but not much. There are more than eighty chapters, and the writing is vague and confusing, and I like to export values. Can the author figure out his own position? What you write is popular fan fiction, not youth literature and philosophy. You have to write about your own values. It's not that you can't write, but you can't cover more than half of a chapter with psychological activities and various private matters. Your writing style seems interesting only in the first few chapters, but after more than 80 chapters, it is all like this, that is, it is very watery. I often write a lot of unnecessary things, and often write a sentence or a chapter several times. Change it quickly, write more about the plot and less about your private values, otherwise you won't be able to see the unity of Xumi even after writing a hundred chapters.

The book money is a bit tight and can't support me to continue unnecessary spending, so I just run away. As of Chapter 274 of the text volume: Writing style: Just average. This book does not rely on writing and excellent description to support the scene. It's more about the straightforward psychological description. Plot: There is more than enough heart but not enough power. I admit the author's intentions. He worked very hard to supplement the settings, and tried every means to bridge the loopholes in the plot of Genshin Impact from the character's psychology to actively changing conditions. However, this kind of thing becomes particularly ridiculous when the level gradually deepens to a high level close to the essence of the world. The author wants to guess the future development and the vague motivations of the character's position, but at the same time he does not dare to overturn the existing thin and pitiful material. In the end, he will just repeat the same nonsense, and the plot will not progress at all towards the end. This is the fate of those who write about Genshin Impact, just like the prophecy of heaven. The author, like Fukalos, seems to have solved the prophecy, but in fact he is just relying on "the pen in the author's hand" to survive. Character image: It is better than the plot of Genshin Impact on the basis of bridging the motivations, but due to the insistence on patching, it leads to excessive conspiracy theories, and like the screenwriters of Genshin Impact, they dare not make big sacrifices. To sum up, it is almost the same as the plot of Genshin Impact. Recommended reading:? No, I don't recommend it for newbies to read. Meng Xin can read his last book first. At least the last book can be read even if a strong man cuts off his wrist. Then you can read most of the chapters of this book (before Chapter 274) to make up for the regret that the Grass God "became a god that belongs to me" in the previous book, but that's all.

Don't care about other people's opinions. I am an old bookworm who has been following you for a long time. I will be very adaptable to your water method. There will be a climax after a dozen pictures. If I can continue to write millions of words like this, I will still pursue it. Although it is the same as others said, a sponge is 2/3 water, 1/3 dry information, and one more thing, hurry up and make up for any leaks!

Author: You say yours and I write mine, but I just don't listen! Hey!

As said in the comment area, this book is too subjective, and 80% of one chapter may contain private information. The author fell into a misunderstanding that a newcomer would have, even though he had already written a book. Everyone likes to talk about principles, but not everyone likes to listen to them, especially superficial principles. Talking too much will only make people feel like they are keeping a running account. Occasionally a sentence will be the finishing touch. From a plot perspective, it's hard to understand the main character's motivations. As an adult, especially when he knew that this was just a game world, he quickly accepted the concept of desert, and even said that he would fight for it? In a place like the desert, there is a lack of labor and basic food cannot be guaranteed. Simply relying on some so-called alchemical products cannot change the status quo. As a scholar with few people in the desert, this status has great potential. If the desert cannot live without you, it will give you a corresponding status. Although they are connected by blood, reality will always make them succumb. I thought about it for a long time, and I really don't understand how a protagonist who is a desert citizen can make a comeback. We can only passively wait for the Grass God to be released and forcefully promote the integration of the rainforest and desert.

When I come to read Genshin Impact fanfics, I have no interest in what the protagonist thinks or any other spiritual civilization. I just want to see what he does. From the first chapter onwards, the pretense of sophisticated nonsense makes my brain hurt. Please understand, this is just a fanfic.

After talking about the big principles for 40 chapters, you defeated a tribe. I don't think you can unify the desert even if you write another 1,000 chapters.

I don't know why there are so many novels about Genshin Impact. Genshin Impact is not suitable for writing novels. Genshin Impact's worldview is incomplete. If you add settings yourself, you need to compare them with MiHoYo's future settings if you want to be popular. But this is obviously seeking death. Can you write a story better than MiHoYo?

Genshin Impact, but the Real World Second Week, Chapter 3 Fireworks can easily get cold, and people's hearts can change "Fireworks are very beautiful." (People are also very beautiful.) For the former Jiang Qing, no matter how beautiful the fireworks were, they were not worth the possibility of escaping from his wife. In fact, I didn't pay much attention to this fireworks. When a beautiful and passionate girl lends a helping hand when you are in a desperate situation, most people will have a good impression of her. After Jiang Qing became a member of General Raiden, his powerful position may have given Nagano Harayo Palace some invisible care, but that was all. It's more that a girl who originally lived a carefree life is under the threat of being arrested by fools at any time. Jiang Qing feels somewhat guilty. This can't be said to be repaying a favor, and repaying kindness with hatred is nothing more than that. Although he used some means to reach a fragile balance with the fools, making them give up their thoughts. Danger is always objective. Nagano Haraomiya, the five-star master in the game, is Inazuma's biggest fireworks shop owner in reality. From ordinary people's birthday celebrations to Inazuma's official festivals, they all need fireworks from the Naganohara Fireworks Shop, and their connections are spread all over the upper and lower levels of Inazuma. The girl dared to go to the wild to experiment with new fireworks late at night, so she naturally had something to rely on. As a holder of the Fire God's Eye, his personality is usually optimistic and enthusiastic, and Xiao Gong's current rank is the third level, about 40-50. As long as they are not surrounded, regular soldiers, even if they are organized, can fight a hundred. Of course, if it is a top-level first-level (level 20) member, or an elite second-level legion, that is a different matter, because there is a high probability that such a legion will also have the original god. If not, well, it's just a bunch of little monsters, do you really think she can only set off fireworks? The resources exchanged for wealth can often be converted into accelerated growth of force value. As it happens, Xiaogong has good qualifications, so it is not surprising that he has achieved this. "If it looks good, I have to record the recipe of this firework. Let me think about it..." "How about the name of this firework is "Encounter"?" The girl took out the pen and paper from the Eye of God while asking for his opinion. The recipe for fireworks is recorded on it. "Have we met? A very good name." Jiang Qing's eyes passed over the girl's happy smile, and she made some decisions in her heart. It is undoubtedly a happy thing to have made new friends and the newly made fireworks have been recognized, so Xiaogong is in a good mood now. Although she didn't even know his name, Xiao Gong had a feeling for some reason. It seems that they are already very good friends. "My name is Nagano Haraomiya, what about you?" "Jiang Qing, Liyue merchant, an unlucky guy." Jiang Qing joked to himself. Occasionally he would go to the village to exchange the wild beasts he hunted for daily necessities, but he would inevitably feel a little embarrassed when he often lived in the wild. At this time, he is undoubtedly much better than himself at the same time before. Although there may be more scars on the body than before, human beings can face all the misfortunes they encounter calmly as long as they have hope. Xiaogong walked to Jiang Qing, sat on the grass, and said naturally: "I don't know if you have heard of my name. I am the owner of the Naganohara Fireworks Shop. Recently, many people have come to me to make fireworks, and they are a bit busy." " "So," the girl paused, then turned to look at Jiang Qing nonchalantly: "Can you help me?" "The salary is not high, and food and accommodation are provided." Based on common rationality, accepting the girl's help at this time is the best choice. Whether it is through her to contact Beidou, purchase a ticket to escape from Inazuma, or the Kamisato brothers and sisters worshiped by the society, Xiao Gong is the best candidate. Jiang Qing is a rational person who knows what is good and what is good. That is why he hesitates. According to his plan, it is inevitable to conflict with the fools. The world is like this. Most of the time, if you want to obtain certain benefits, you will inevitably destroy the immediate benefits of some people. The more profitable the project, the more so. The reason is very simple. He is an "ordinary" Original God and grows at a normal rate. Even if there is knowledge cheating at the god level, and sufficient resources are supplied, it will not take more than a few decades to reach the level of the demon god's family. That is the level 81-90. At this level, a yellow-haired traveler only needs three versions to knock a lady who has lived for five hundred years and has the power of the Ice God to the ground. You can't catch up with these cheaters without cheating. Jiang Qing understands this very clearly. If you want to gain enough power to influence the pattern of Daozhu in the two countries of Mondstadt and Liyue, it is necessary to cause trouble. How can you obtain a large amount of resources without causing trouble? How can he cope with future disasters without being strong? Without a system, he can't even run away. Jiang Qing didn't know whether the Ice God collected the God's Heart to overthrow the universe or to cope with some kind of disaster that was bound to come in the future. He was just not used to placing his future on other people, even though this person was a good person. The Grass God Nasida allowed him to successfully restart this matter by erasing the records of the World Tree. From the side, Tianli may be much more powerful than everyone or gods imagine. Therefore, if the purpose of the Ice God is to overthrow Tianli. Jiang Qing, well, if he is still alive by then, there is a high probability that he will have the opportunity to offer him incense. Withdrawing her complicated thoughts, Jiang Qing chose to accept this kindness. If she chooses to escape because she is afraid of danger, it will only make people lose more. "So, little boss, when will I start working?" "Tomorrow, for now, let's watch the stars together. I'm actually a little worried that you will reject me." The girl actually doesn't need helpers, or in other words, she doesn't need a specific helper. If she wants to recruit people, she can do it at any time. Anyway, it's just some simple work. More specific things involve technology that needs to be kept secret, which is knowledge that has been passed down and improved from generation to generation. Xiao Gong looked at the starry sky. The stars were twinkling. If you keep looking at a certain star, you will find that it will move. "I had a feeling just now. If you refuse, we may not see each other again for a long time." There are many possibilities, but most of them are things that I don't know if I can say it out loud. He smiled and said: "Maybe we are more compatible. There is a word in my hometown called old friends at first sight, which probably means that two people are like friends when they meet." "Is that so?" The breeze was gentle, and the occasional chirping of insects did not seem noisy, adding a bit of life to the silent night sky. The two of them enjoyed this moment of tranquility in tacit understanding.

Genshin Impact, but the real world Second Weekly Episode 1 Chapter 1 "Hey, wake up" Someone patted his shoulder, "This foreign businessman won't be beaten to death by you, right?" To put it simply, Jiang Qing was reborn and successfully got rid of the control of the system. It's hard to say whether there was some secret move by God. In short, he was temporarily separated from the identity of a chess piece of the system. But the bad news is that without the help of the system, it will be difficult for him to do anything in this world. After all, this is Teyvat. What he can do as a person without the Eye of God is really lackluster. Although he has some knowledge of West Wind Swordsmanship and the use of elemental power, even the two fully armed soldiers who follow the decree in front of him. Jiang Qing was not sure of victory, so when he woke up and faced the shogunate soldiers, he did not say much. Seeing that Jiang Qing was still alive, the soldiers no longer paid attention to him. A foreign businessman who couldn't squeeze out any profit was really not worth investing too much energy, he said impatiently. "Get away if you're not dead." Jiang Qing began to reflect on whether the upper-class families who had only overthrown the Tianling Clan and the Appointment Clan before were too merciful. The lower-class soldiers should also be purged. But he was very self-aware and retracted his thoughts. Now he lacks the necessary force support. After coming out of prison, Jiang Qing returned to the place in his memory. Most of the valuable things had been taken away, and there was nothing left. This group of people have no idea about sustainable development, and even the shops have been closed down. There is nothing that belongs to Jiang Qing at all. Jiang Qing was silent. Faced with this situation again, his anger was much less. Now that we have a deeper understanding of the face of the greedy people, the question now is how to gain strength and escape from the island while the lockdown order is not strict. According to his guess, the system should be some kind of existence from outside the world, using him to invade Teyvat, or collect information about Teyvat, and finally whether to seize control of Teyvat or destroy it is unknown. In short, this battle ended with the victory of Tianli, but he was not destroyed. That means that Tianli or some other existence believes that its existence is valuable, and at least in a short period of time, it does not worry about the correction power of the world erasing it. Moreover, as long as they don't leave Teyvat, the laws of heaven don't care if someone comes to this world. Typical, you can come, but you can't leave! Jiang Qing organized his thoughts. What he has now is information about the future, some knowledge, a weak body, and the Eye of God. Yes, God's Eye, just when I saw the shop being sealed, I was thinking about how to escape from the island. A God's Eye of Thunder suddenly appeared in the lapel of his arms. This was undoubtedly good news, although it proved that he was probably noticed by Sky Island. However, the Eye of God undoubtedly provides a channel for becoming stronger, a channel that may lead to becoming a god. "Maybe some changes can be made to the plan." Originally, Jiang Qing's plan was to try to contact Xiao Palace after escaping from the island. Use Xiaogong's channel to contact Beidou, escape from Daozhi, and then go to Mondstadt to get the first initial capital to pay off his debt. But now, with the knowledge of the use of elemental power in memory, and the elemental power driver of the Eye of Thunder God, some things can be realized. After all, he had been a descendant of the God of Thunder for a period of time, and gained some knowledge through it. Regarding the advanced route of the Eye of Thunder God, I have some understanding in my mind. The first level is a stage of strengthening physical fitness. That is the level 1-20 in the game. Ordinary people undergo training and add some nutritional supplements. Even without the use of medicines containing elemental power, ordinary people can reach the top of this level, which is level 20, within a few years. After being fully armed and skilled, he can defeat ordinary people who have not been trained. At least ten can be beaten. He can already be called a qualified professional soldier, and he has no problem being a five-man squad leader. The combat power of the two previously determined soldiers was between level 10 and 20. After all, with the blessing of armor weapons, it was no problem to squeeze ordinary merchants. Jiang Qing waited silently under the deserted cherry blossom tree until dark, maybe it was God's blessing. The night was thick, and lightning suddenly flashed, and within seconds, thunder roared, and heavy rain followed. The soldiers guarding the passage from the island to Narukami Island also returned to the camp at this time. The lockdown order had just been implemented, and the guards were not strict. Jiang Qing did not intend to test his combat effectiveness, so he quietly passed through the defense line under the cover of night. Successfully escaped from the island. In this place where exploitation is becoming increasingly serious, it is difficult for him to develop. Even if he has the Eye of God, he still needs resources to become stronger. Although the islands in reality are many times larger than those in the game, they serve as port islands. The monster resources in the wild have been cleaned up countless times, leaving only some slimes, deceivers and other small monsters that are occasionally born with the nodes of the earth. Narukami Island is different. There are more leyline nodes. Not only are various monsters randomly refreshed, but there are also wandering warriors, treasure stealing groups, Qiuqiu people, and even fools. All kinds of monsters are everywhere. In other words, more resources can be obtained. Before the Eye Hunting Order was promulgated, every original god, that is, the holder of the Eye of God, was valuable. There are no more than two hundred people in Inazuma who have the eyes of God. How many people are there in Inazuma? Millions of people have it, and it is no exaggeration to say that it is only one in a million. However, everything has its buts. After the Eye Hunting Order was promulgated, the only value of the Eye of God was to please General Thunder. Therefore, the map of Inazuma is not suitable for novice development. Although many resources are suitable for the growth of the thunder-type original god, Jiang Qing does not intend to stay in Inazuma for too long. Before he has a certain level of strength, he does not intend to touch the copy of Inazuma. After arriving at Narukami Island, Jiang Qing temporarily lived in the wild near Konta Village. He needed some time to adapt to the changes brought about by the Eye of the Thunder God. As we all know, the Eye of God is an external elemental power organ and does not use the Eye of God. Jiang Qing's normal fighting ability, without armor and holding an iron sword, may be able to deal with a level 20 armored soldier with the help of West Wind swordsmanship. But this is the limit, and there is a high probability that you can't beat it, and you may not even be able to run. His Xifeng clan swordsmanship is not of a high level. Although he has practiced hard for a period of time, no matter how superb his swordsmanship is, there is no physical fitness or energy support. Otherwise, it will all be castles in the air. It's different with the Eye of God. In battle, just a moment of paralysis can mean the difference between life and death. This is the value of the Eye of God. Most of the adults in Kontian Village have gone to Daozuma City to make a living, leaving only a few old, weak, women, children and fishermen who rely on farming and fishing to maintain their basic livelihood.

Genshin Impact, but the Real World Two Weekly Episodes Chapter 2 The First Meeting at Nagano Haraiya Palace Having the Eye of God and not having the Eye of God are two different things. With the Eye of God filtering and purifying the elemental power, the growth rate of Genshin Impact is far faster than that of ordinary people. Of course, some unreasonable geniuses occasionally appear among ordinary people. Even without the Eye of God, their growth rate is far faster than that of ordinary original gods, but Jiang Qing is neither a genius among ordinary people nor an ordinary original god. During the time he was stationed outside Konta Village, relying on the Eye of Thunder God, he lived a pretty good life. Occasionally kill some thunder monsters such as thunder slimes and thunder swindlers, and obtain some resources. According to the knowledge in my memory, I use the Eye of God to filter the elemental power contained in them to strengthen my physical fitness. Without the Eye of God, you can only spend a long time polishing your body bit by bit. This time usually takes several years until the first level reaches the limit. After that, elemental power is required to intervene. Various means are used to remove the violent side of elemental power in the medicinal materials so that they can be accepted by the human body as much as possible. Thus breaking the limit and entering the second stage. This step requires a lot of resources, and therefore, most ordinary people stop at the first stage. Unless you join a certain force, or your family has accumulated it for several generations, it will be difficult for a single person to obtain enough resources, and this is not a problem for Jiang Qing. In just one month, Jiang Qing successfully reached the second level with the resources obtained from hunting monsters in the wild and looting the small Qiuqiu tribe. In some families, they can be called elites, which are basically mid-level combat capabilities. On the upper level is the third level of the boss level, which is the level 40-50. It requires more resources and also has certain requirements for talents. The shogunate Kujo Sora who discovered Inazuma was only at the top of the fourth level. And her combat power, without the interference of combat power of the same level or higher, can easily slaughter an army of a thousand people. Of course, there is another way of saying that the first level is only after completing the first breakthrough. In a sense, breaking the limit of the human body is the beginning of everything. Whether it is an ordinary person or the original god, after a breakthrough, there will be more or less elemental resistance. When the original god reaches the first level, the elemental resistance corresponding to the eye of god will be greatly improved, while ordinary people will depend on the medicinal materials used for breakthrough, or the properties of the elemental gem fragments. And the corresponding elemental force affinity. Jiang Qing broke through to the first level, and his life level was about level 21, in terms of combat power. Due to the knowledge of the use of thunder attribute elemental power in his mind, he can kill level 40 life forms in an instant when unexpected, and severely damage the existence of the second level Godless Eye. But this is not enough. Jiang Qing needs more resources, and it is too inefficient for him to collect them alone. There are many choices before Jiang Qing, but in summary, there are only two choices, one is to join a certain force, and the other is to create a force. If he had a system, or some kind of plug-in that could make him stronger by killing people. Joining the Kaiji Island resistance may be a good choice. After the Eye Hunting Order was issued, a large number of Genshins defected to the resistance. Coral Palace Xinhai probably also used some resources to win over people's hearts. Otherwise, if they can't be defeated, why can't they still run away? And the camp of General Thunder and Lightning, but there are many problems, how to see him and gain trust. …… Late at night, the stars are twinkling. Jiang Qing was lying on the grass thinking about the future. The breeze blew from time to time, bringing a bit of refreshment. At this moment, a "shooting star" took off into the sky, and then exploded into millions of streams of light, illuminating a night sky, followed by several more fireworks blooming in the sky. "Hello, I don't know if I disturbed you. I just found you resting here after setting off the fireworks." A girl with a nice voice came from not far away. She observed his expression and saw that he was not unhappy, and then started to ask: "Do you think the fireworks just now were good-looking?" The girl's eyes were as bright as stars, shining with a certain light. Looking at Jiang Qing expectantly, waiting for his answer. The girl has an eye-catching red bow knot on her back. She is wearing some revealing clothes and has a warm smile on her delicate little face. She is not tall, about 1.6 Meters tall, and is a very beautiful girl.

The protagonist has been trying to be smart. He doesn't have god-level military power, and he still wants to conquer the desert. Do you know why Daizuma Tianling Shizong dares to commit suicide like that? Because they knew that General Thunder and Lightning had the secret.

One or two chapters of general principles is enough. I was intimidated by the author's noble language at first, but a great person in the comment area woke me up. "You speak so noblely, but in the end you are still sitting in a small village playing boring political games." Outrageous! Are you writing a novel or a psychological description of the protagonist? It was already so watery before it was put on the shelves. I really can't imagine what you would be like if it was put on the shelves. The author is also very stubborn. People have been criticizing him but he still doesn't change his mind. Outrageous!

I sincerely hope that the author will stop talking about nonsense, he has said enough. Now it's really annoying to see the protagonist grow up. And the people around the protagonist are not well described. In one sentence, there is too much nonsense and too little action.

Expository writing is a very annoying style and is also a sign of the author's incompetence. It is similar to how an instruction manual is written.

There are too many narrations and explanations, the dialogue between the characters is too sparse, the accumulation of knowledge is too slow, the explanation of the forces between Xumi is too complicated, the huge ruins in the desert do not know how to use, the races left by various gods do not know how to use, the use of elements is too low, you actually only think of using them to create wars? And your timeline is wrong. The protagonist should have been born 300 to 400 years before the arrival of the travelers. It's a bit too late now, and you are too concerned about the gods. Everyone is recuperating now, and you are the only one causing trouble. The arrival of the travelers is obviously a huge storm, and the seven countries are preparing for it. I don't think the protagonist can hold on.

Why is Genshin Impact 12+? I said your writing was too dark. I laughed so hard that my fucking balls ached. The plot of MiHoYo is just like a stupid one. The family that has been resented for a thousand years, Liyue ruled by merchants, and the harmonious and friendly Dao Wife are so happy. That means MiHoYo is 12+.

The little grass god has a pair of feet and I have a mouth. What a coincidence.

Brother author, some comments can be deleted completely. You are just not normal in the comment area. Many people leave after seeing those few comments and do not read the book seriously at all. Like the one about the slow progress and the one about why so many people write about Genshin Impact, they can be deleted. This is outrageous for a group of trainees. How many chapters have they read in total?

50% Canon + 40% conspiracy theory + 10% main plot = this book. Personal feeling.

I always felt that this style was very familiar, so I started to take a look at the author's works. There were no two eunuchs. Keep reading, the more you look, the more something is wrong. Scroll down the homepage to see the real world. Got it

Alas, I can only give up the book, I really can't stand it. There are so many things about the main character's actions and not much eloquence, which is good. Recently, these chapters have basically done nothing and just kept talking. There is no basic summary of any action, it is just water, very water. I can only say it is slightly better than the previous book. Nowadays, the protagonist basically doesn't act very much, and basically relies on his mouth. There is no need to take any action, so the author can just mention Unified Sumeru and Unified Teyvat in one go. 😅😅😢😢😢

I have read more than 260 chapters in a row in the past few days. Let me talk about the problems with this book. 1. The biggest problem with this book is the "talking prose". Generally speaking, it is a story in which the protagonist relies on time travel to have a forward-looking understanding of the plot and uses his sharp tongue to persuade others. The plot of this book is simple and incoherent, lacks the depiction of battle scenes, has no climax, and is very boring. How can most of the plot be summarized: At location xx, the protagonist met an NPC and launched a verbal attack. After several rounds of verbal confrontation, the protagonist successfully achieved his goal. Then what to write about in the remaining chapters, the rationality of the protagonist's rhetoric, and why he can successfully convince his opponent. Basically 90% of the content is this model. It's not that the author's narration is unreasonable, but it doesn't stop you from reading each of the more than 200 chapters. The first 50 chapters were okay and refreshing, but the more you read later, the more impatient you become. Especially after Chapter 220, the plot has not advanced at all, and the protagonist is just on the verge of breaking out. He is still struggling, but he still has not become a demon in terms of strength.

It's surprising that this novel, which is as watery as the sea, is still alive. The author's writing is very logical and self-consistent, but he just can't change the problem of adding shit to the website. He still adds it repeatedly, which makes people feel sick. He who could have been a great master has to be a street boy.

I still want to watch the second episode of The Real World 🙂🙂🙂

It's finally finished. Thank you for your hard work 🙂

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The plot of Rice Wife is terrible. The conspiracy behind it is real history.

Normal book 123456, this one 136524 is correct, that's all 😢

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