Lich's Demiplane Development Log

Reading this book is very wasteful. It's hard to read quickly. If you slide faster, you won't be able to understand it anymore. It's a very traditional article about farming, grain, and edible food.

The main character's name really needs to be changed, it's too dramatic! It's a Western fantasy theme, so it's awkward to give it a Chinese name. Since you've traveled through time, you can either use your original name of Lambert, or you can give it a name like Lambert Mold or something like that! Mixing Chinese and Western is the biggest taboo. It's like reading a novel about Eastern fantasy and cultivating immortals. When you're enjoying yourself, the sentence "Dragon and Tiger True Monarch vs. Caterina Iselius" suddenly comes up. It's probably as disgusting as eating a fly. The same principle applies to Western fantasy themes. I hope the author can consider changing it. There are currently no major negative points.

Boring. Nothing like the Supreme Lich. Come here to see the lich's imagination, not the boring nanny of the Knights. The Knights are not yet their own property. It's outrageous for a lich to become a worker of destiny. It would be better for you to write a lich with orderly evil. Directly run the factory by hand, capture the undead and use them as farmers to mine resources. Processed in demiplanes and sold on various material planes. Isn't it good for the spirit to come to various planes, open dungeons, and become warmongers?

To be honest, half of the name is Western, which is very uncomfortable I think a fully Western name would be better You may not feel awkward, but the viewer may not necessarily feel it After all, a lot of Western names suddenly pop up with Eastern names, which is very inconsistent and inexplicable Second question: Vocabulary that should not be in another world Domestic vocabulary has evolved over thousands of years, and some words are exclusive and not suitable for all other worlds. After all, adding it will feel inconsistent. (It's like a native of the martial arts world saying words like: Fak Ula, etc. This is very inconsistent and inexplicable)

To be honest, in the Western fantasy world, a Chinese name

I don't know why, after entering the chapter on the plane of life, I felt that the protagonist was a bit like a virgin. I felt that the protagonist had been reincarnated into a lich, and the races were different. Then when he met humans, he still did this and that. Isn't it taking advantage, like selling you and counting the money for me? After eating the meat, the bones could be ground into powder and used to grow vegetables. Don't think that humans are compatriots just because you were human before reincarnation. To be honest, some people are a hundred times crueler to themselves than you think.

You can criticize a book because it doesn't look good, and I know it doesn't look good, but as the saying goes, only by writing can you know where the problems are, and then you can improve them. Thank you everyone, and I wish the bad guys a great sale.

I have read more than 30 chapters and rated it as food. My understanding of improving the land at the beginning was that it only took half a year to change my mind. In fact, force is of no use to lichs. How can lichs fight on their own? Therefore, changing soil cannot be regarded as a poisonous point. But I hope I can change my mind early, after all, no one wants to see the Lich engage in communism (I guess the author has this idea, he hasn't written it yet).

The writing is good, but the focus is wrong. What readers like to see is that the protagonist slowly improves his strength and develops. The novel "The Lich's Time is Infinite" will be read by everyone if you develop your own power, but there is no point in working for others if you can't stand it. There are too many paragraphs about the Undead Knight, and I basically skipped the reading. Finally, I couldn't hold on until Chapter 48. You are the password to capture readers. No matter how well you write, it is meaningless to write about others. This kind of writing is destined to be a niche and not outstanding. It would be better to grow slowly from a skeleton than this.

Thank you all for your follow-up reading. I will work hard to write this book. Follow-up reading is really important for newcomers to write new books. I hope everyone will read it until the last chapter first. Thank you. Pause and bow again.

Tucao Lou, everyone can express their opinions here, and I will respond to whatever I can.

I feel that this is not a lich, but should be called an alchemist. In my impression, the lich should be able to summon various summoning spells. It is normal to resurrect the dead and launch undead natural disasters. In this novel. I saw that the undead in front were all refined. Personally, I think the author should read more novels.

The protagonist of this book is a wizard who has lost his power. To be honest, after reading 50 to 60 chapters, I can only say that it is "boring". I don't understand the role of the protagonist, and I don't know what story the author wants to write. Whether it is exploring the mysteries of magic, developing a demiplane, invading the material plane, or even attracting players from the earth, there is something for everyone behind the scenes. The author asked the protagonist to join a certain undead force. He was said to be a collaborator, but he was just a wage earner. There were a lot of fights interspersed in the middle. The characters were all undead knights, and the protagonist only showed up a few times. It was really boring.

I feel that the author is too deliberately suppressing the protagonist's upgrade. After getting the support of a whole group of death knights, he is still a trainee mage. This cannot be justified. Both time travelers and aborigines have a strong desire for strength. The first priority must be to improve their own strength to ensure their own safety. As a result, the author does not want to upgrade.

It's like two people wrote it before and after it was put on the shelf. This is the first time I've seen this way of screening readers.

I just want to know when the protagonist will form his own legion. It's a bit uncomfortable to just watch the protagonist develop for others. He has no power at all.

I feel that the partners appear too frequently, and there are even several pictures where the partners fight and the protagonist disappears 😅. I don't object to giving more descriptions to the supporting characters, but is this description too much, or is the author planning to write group portraits?

Uh... Author. Are you sure you are writing about the underworld of the undead? Undead Knight. . .

At first, it felt good to watch the battle in the plane of the undead. But now that we are on the plane of living beings, I always feel like I was deceived by the title but found myself being tricked. Let's wait a little longer and see what happens in the plane of creatures. Do you want to run away?

After reading Chapter 38, I felt that Pig's Knuckle was that knightly order. Basically, it was all about them. The writing was so auspicious and detailed, and the label said about the lord's infrastructure management. But after reading Chapter 38, I felt that it had nothing to do with these words! It's not necessary to be so meticulous when managing interpersonal relationships, right? Fortunately, the undead don't need to eat or drink Lhasa! By the way, the undead knight here is alive and breathing!

The problem with this book is that there are too many battle details. Am I here to see you fight? I am here to see how to farm. Even if you skip various battles, it will not affect the plot. I am very dissatisfied. If you continue writing like this, you can only look at resources outside the site. It is impossible to subscribe.

Thank you guys

I deleted it for you before, but I didn't expect it to be revived.

Why don't the latest chapters have chapter names? Is it AI?

The devil is not spiritual power, nor is it the world of cultivating immortals.

It was a bit confusing in the early days, but after being promoted to an official mage, it feels like it's getting better. It's worth watching.

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and I don't know what to write. The more I read, the more confused I become.

It's very dull and boring, it's too confusing, it's written in an invincible style, and it keeps changing settings.