Starting from the Dragon Tiger Tiqi, Hunting Sins and Becoming a Saint

It would be great if Goldfinger couldn't answer the protagonist's question and slipped away.

There's something wrong with the introduction. It didn't describe the characteristics of the novel. I thought your writing was good and I went in to take a look. It's well written.

The writing is okay, the plot is the same as the introduction, it's a mess

I've really seen enough of the poisonous articles about panel properties.

It's a bad book, and the lives of people caught fishing don't matter. In their bones, they don't regard the common people as human beings. They just want to do big things when they open their mouths, and they mean nothing.

There is actually nothing wrong with the logic of the plot design, but the specific operation is really stupid. If the author hadn't said that he wrote it for his own happiness, I would have criticized him severely. Anyway, it's just fun without brains, and you can't see anything with brains. There are so many flaws that people don't know where to start.

It's a bad read, but Dragonrider Forbidden Army still reads well.

The first half of the first chapter was well written, but I'm still wondering why my grades were so bad. But after watching it, I realized that the protagonist appeared and killed two supporting characters, which was too much nonsense. To be honest, I think you did a good job of foreshadowing the two supporting characters. It must be to set off the protagonist's handsome appearance, but there is too much nonsense in the introduction (including descriptions of moves), and half of the character is lost, and the sense of immersion is instantly lost.

The writing is okay. Come on, invest.

In summary, this book is a fragmented description of the re-emergence of the dynasty, and the protagonist is a war reporter. Second, when answering the questions about spoken language and sense of substitution, I used modern vocabulary because I am a fun person myself. As for online novels, there is no need to be so rigorous, just like the Chinese spoken by the Japanese in the previous anti-Japanese TV series. To be more sincere, brother, I can only say sorry, this is difficult to change. Writing a book is something that requires positive feedback. If you cannot please the public, you must at least please yourself, otherwise you will not be able to type on the keyboard. Third. In the comments, as for why the 014 experience does not allow all illegal activities, this is because these guys have experienced the cramming education of information from extraterrestrial visitors. In the future, they will have to compete with all kinds of monsters and ghosts, and it is really impossible to get satisfactory answers. Moreover, I think hatred is stronger than all other motivations as the driving force. Therefore, the settings of these people in 014 are all suffering and hatred, and they must either make radical changes or die. Perfectly meshed with the radical information explosion from extraterrestrial visitors. Fourth, because it is the rise of a fragmented dynasty, there must be more than one protagonist as a war reporter. Although the perspective will definitely focus on the protagonist, there are also other visitors from outside the world. Now in the outline, one is a rebel with the golden finger of the previous dynasty, one is a bully in a theocratic country, and the other is a traitor, whose soul has penetrated the body of a demon, and spares no effort for his own safety. Fifth, some people say why people die every day in this book, and how to survive in such danger outside the city wall, because Gaoyang County is just an experimental field. And I have already written it in the first chapter. Generally speaking, in the absence of specific circumstances, Longhu Tiqi is capable of controlling the overall security of the area where it is located. Sixth, the achievements of this book are obvious to all. It is basically the same as dead. It ran naked for 200,000 words. Most people would have cut it off long ago. Even if someone doesn't cut it, they may say something about love, for the sake of the remaining readers, etc., It must be finished, and it cannot be eunuchs. I don't deal with the false ones. I don't cut them out because this is my rabbit hole. In the days when there is no Genting and no Douyin, it is to decorate me with garbage emotions. The second reason is that because of sunk costs, I won't necessarily sign a contract if I open the book again, and these 4,500 can at least replace me with a statue. Ji Ruxue's. Although the seventh season is as bad as anything, what does this have to do with my Cher in the sixth season? The statue was so expensive that I stayed there for eight months, reluctant to buy it. It's okay now. I can buy it after another three months. Maybe the price will be reduced by then, hahaha. OK, here I wish you all good morning, good afternoon and good night, good health, and thank you to the dozens of cavalrymen who have been with me. He paused.