A Lich's Guide to Developing a Demiplane

The main character's name really needs to be changed, it's too dramatic! It's a Western fantasy theme, so it's awkward to give it a Chinese name. Since you've traveled through time, you can either use your original name of Lambert, or you can give it a name like Lambert Mold or something like that! Mixing Chinese and Western is the biggest taboo. It's like reading a novel about Eastern fantasy and cultivating immortals. When you're enjoying yourself, the sentence "Dragon and Tiger True Monarch vs. Caterina Iselius" suddenly comes up. It's probably as disgusting as eating a fly. The same principle applies to Western fantasy themes. I hope the author can consider changing it. There are currently no major negative points.

Boring. Nothing like the Supreme Lich. Come here to see the lich's imagination, not the boring nanny of the Knights. The Knights are not yet their own property. It's outrageous for a lich to become a worker of destiny. It would be better for you to write a lich with orderly evil. Directly run the factory by hand, capture the undead and use them as farmers to mine resources. Processed in demiplanes and sold on various material planes. Isn't it good for the spirit to come to various planes, open dungeons, and become warmongers?

To be honest, half of the name is Western, which is very uncomfortable I think a fully Western name would be better You may not feel awkward, but the viewer may not necessarily feel it After all, a lot of Western names suddenly pop up with Eastern names, which is very inconsistent and inexplicable Second question: Vocabulary that should not be in another world Domestic vocabulary has evolved over thousands of years, and some words are exclusive and not suitable for all other worlds. After all, adding it will feel inconsistent. (It's like a native of the martial arts world saying words like: Fak Ula, etc. This is very inconsistent and inexplicable)

To be honest, in the Western fantasy world, a Chinese name

I don't know why, after entering the chapter on the plane of life, I felt that the protagonist was a bit like a virgin. I felt that the protagonist had been reincarnated into a lich, and the races were different. Then when he met humans, he still did this and that. Isn't it taking advantage, like selling you and counting the money for me? After eating the meat, the bones could be ground into powder and used to grow vegetables. Don't think that humans are compatriots just because you were human before reincarnation. To be honest, some people are a hundred times crueler to themselves than you think.

You can criticize a book because it doesn't look good, and I know it doesn't look good, but as the saying goes, only by writing can you know where the problems are, and then you can improve them. Thank you everyone, and I wish the bad guys a great sale.

I have read more than 30 chapters and rated it as food. My understanding of improving the land at the beginning was that it only took half a year to change my mind. In fact, force is of no use to lichs. How can lichs fight on their own? Therefore, changing soil cannot be regarded as a poisonous point. But I hope I can change my mind early, after all, no one wants to see the Lich engage in communism (I guess the author has this idea, he hasn't written it yet).

The writing is good, but the focus is wrong. What readers like to see is that the protagonist slowly improves his strength and develops. The novel "The Lich's Time is Infinite" will be read by everyone if you develop your own power, but there is no point in working for others if you can't stand it. There are too many paragraphs about the Undead Knight, and I basically skipped the reading. Finally, I couldn't hold on until Chapter 48. You are the password to capture readers. No matter how well you write, it is meaningless to write about others. This kind of writing is destined to be a niche and not outstanding. It would be better to grow slowly from a skeleton than this.

Tucao Lou, everyone can express their opinions here, and I will respond to whatever I can.

Thank you all for your follow-up reading. I will work hard to write this book. Follow-up reading is really important for newcomers to write new books. I hope everyone will read it until the last chapter first. Thank you. Pause and bow again.