Douluo Dalu: Ascension to God Archives

The third young master of the Tang family is so virtuous and capable that he asks you to help him write Douluo from the fantasy sewer to the advanced fantasy world.

Is this Douluo Continent? We are already wearing the skin of Douluo and running into the world of advanced fantasy. I wonder why it seems a little strange, but it turns out that it is not Douluo Continent. A reminder to those who follow, the author has a lot of secondary settings. In order to round up the secondary settings, he has begun to give various settings, which is already unreasonable. Remember, all foreshadowings are what they are before they are exposed. It does not mean that there are foreshadowings here. If they are revealed, it is a masterpiece, but what if they are not revealed? If it's shit, it's shit. Don't pay attention to his foreshadowing. What you think is unreasonable is unreasonable. In many places that are unreasonable, he is rounding it up instead of setting it up. If it is a setting, it is a secondary setting given by the round plot. I have seen through this kind of garbage. I spent so much money chasing books in vain. I thought the point of view was different. It turned out that I looked down on the original protagonist and finally returned to the original plot, but with myself The pre-plot conflict seemed extremely unreasonable and I didn't even realize it. I was still laying the groundwork, talking about love in Shrek. I found this part the most disgusting, because in my opinion, what he wrote was about romance, but in fact, it was about licking the dog to the end. I really laughed when I read the latest chapter on October 1. I saw it clearly. It turns out that this is what it is. It has caused so much trouble for myself, so I will deal with it like this, lick the dog to the end. I always thought it would be a reversal, and I would stop being such a dog-eat-dog. After writing for so long, my writing skills have improved a bit, but it has improved. The romance has become more sophisticated, and the main plot has been mixed in, making people feel like a piece of shit and a piece of cake. This is the feeling. It makes people feel that the emotional line is useless, and then it promotes the plot. I can't stand this, and I can't say it. Originally, the setting was awesome, and the main character was said to be a smart guy, but he kept doing money-losing business. Really, the books I have been chasing are disgusting. This is the longest I have chased. It used to be a day or two, but this one is good, two months.

The writing is very good, but there is no reason why it is like this. I even have to say that it is deserved. This is an author who can make sacrifices for the protagonist for the sake of the story, but he is also an author who fails to understand the essence of online writing. These two points happen to be two extremely important points for online articles. The sense of involvement of readers of online articles is very important. The author's writing style is very good and the readers have a strong sense of involvement. However, if you give in to the protagonist in some places for the sake of the plot, it will definitely make the readers unhappy. If you simply want to write a good story, that's right, but if you want to achieve good results, you have to consider the reader's mentality. The essence of Internet articles cannot escape the word "cool", no matter how it is, it must not be without it. There are many places in the book that can make readers excited. Readers are already looking forward to it but they skip it because of the author's indifferent attitude. Here we can see that the author's own exciting points are not on the same channel as the readers. To put it bluntly, the author is enjoying himself. Except for these two points, I personally think that this book is an excellent novel even if it breaks away from the scope of Douluo fandom. However, precisely because of these two points, this book can only be a good but not a popular book. It is a good story but not a good online article. This book makes people want to read it, and it keeps lingering on the pleasure point, so at first I was looking forward to the subsequent plot, but gradually I didn't have the patience to pay for it, because it kept lingering and never got into it. So I personally ran away to have sex for nothing after I booked it, because it was no longer worth it. People who read online novels are generally ordinary people who just want to read a good story and feel good to reward themselves. You have been lingering to seduce others. To put it bluntly, if you don't make readers happy, who will pay for it? It can also be seen from the back that there are fewer and fewer comments. After talking so much, I still want the author to pay attention to the readers' feelings. I like this book very much, but it keeps making me feel unhappy while reading. This is just a personal opinion, I look forward to the author's follow-up stories

😅The protagonist's IQ alternates between low and high, making it look like schizophrenia, and there are also those bad tastes. The author please set up the protagonist, one side looks like a scientific researcher, and the other side looks like a loser. Do you think this is reasonable?

Douluo Dalu was originally written in December 2008. It became popular in 11 and then Zhang Wei continued to write Peerless Tang Sect. If you traveled back in 20 or later, you would basically know who Tang San was because Douyin shared the beautiful life. . .

Why does Su Yuntao think that the eyes martial spirit is a useless martial spirit?

Very good, it is an almost fully enhanced version of Douluo, not a fantasy sewer. The author writes very well. Except for Tang San and the master who are relatively mentally retarded, the other characters have online IQs. He rationalizes the unreasonable content in the original work and brings the rigid characters of the original work to life 👍

It is a rare high-quality Douluo fanfic. The author added a lot of settings himself and changed the fantasy sewer into fantasy. The author added a lot of Machiavellian tactics to make those nonsense plots more reasonable. Great writing, support the author.

After reading too many cool articles, I feel like I'm growing again. The supplementary settings for each character feel very appropriate. Personally, I think the only flaw is probably the Chamber Douluo. Without Zhang Wei's official intelligence, Bibi Dong has no chance of counterattack, let alone ascending to the throne.

It is rare among Douluo fans to write supporting characters with brains. Ning Fengzhi is so sophisticated and Dugu Bo is powerful, which is eye-catching. The Douluo Continent with thousands of years of history in the background can only be seen in this book. In addition, this book is logically self-consistent and well written, but it is too slow.