People Are Writing Diaries in Douluo, Something Is Wrong with Them

Did you write about him in the same plot twice? 70% Of the plot is a diary. He's really good at it.

I won't say anything else, but can the author of this harem novel not know how to write? You persuaded me to quit at the beginning, you are the one who accepts Ah Yin and Xiao Wu, so why is Xiao Wu looking for trouble for yourself by having a relationship with Wuhundian or Bibi Dong who killed his mother? The original book didn't say that Bibi Dong was the one who killed him. The legend of the God Realm is clear. If you want to accept both of them, isn't this going to cause trouble for yourself? And you were right to pursue Ah Yin and you want to take him back? Isn't it right that you can't write? All for survival?

It's best to travel around the world with this system. There's no need to write around plot characters. Besides, wouldn't traveling with this system be the best choice?

What's more suitable to keep a diary than recording the world's scenery and delicious food?

Have you noticed that today's diary novels always reveal that they are time travellers at the beginning, and then call so-and-so's wife in the diary, and the protagonist's IQ is worrying. I never doubt whether the heroines are different and have diaries, but they are still embarrassed to write diaries.

When writing a diary, why don't you write about it in a normal way? You have to expose time travel, call me wife, and smell like a loser. Why don't you just write about the psychological activities of a normal person who traveled through time in the past? But you have to write it so deliberately, as if you have never seen a woman before.

A children's play house series, with a draggy plot, low word count, and a weak protagonist, all three elements are present. It doesn't feel good, and it doesn't have the taste of ancient novels. It's neither good nor bad. The whole book felt very depressing and I couldn't put it down. After more than 300 chapters, there were still a lot of life-threatening dangers. It was like a child playing house all day long, and the rhythm was not very good. But it doesn't matter, just continue to focus on the protagonist. Anyway, the follow-up is still like this, so don't watch it. If I continue to suppress it and don't write something that everyone wants to read, I don't know if the author can last until the end of the book. Anyway, I felt that I had fully subscribed to this book when I wrote the review, but I didn't think it was worth it at all. It was just too depressing. It's really not exciting for children to play house and pretend to be pigs and noobs... But it can be regarded as the biggest poisonous point of diary flow or voice flow. After all, if a short plot can fool you twice, who doesn't love the author...

I have now read Chapter 56, and most of it is watery. I just have to endure it, and it is still acceptable. Now I have to go to Shrek, and with the plot, I can accept it, and I can tolerate it! But why does the system of the protagonist make me feel intelligent? It treats the protagonist as a pet, and the protagonist is just like a clown! Everything is clearly arranged! And the protagonist has no brain at all. With so many abnormalities, the protagonist never thought that someone could see the diary? And there can't be diary-type novels in the protagonist's original world, right?

He was too kind to Dugu Bo, and the system was so evil that the protagonist didn't even suspect it, and the protagonist didn't say anything when he knew that the system was acting behind the protagonist's back. I didn't notice that the protagonist was smart. As for the test, if he was really smart, he wouldn't find excuses for himself to talk about parallel worlds. . . And it's only women who have problems, while men are normal. I don't know how I kept watching it before. It's really boring to watch now. I feel like the main character is a bit like a virgin.

The protagonist never killed Tang San because he was worried about the divine world? Or is the author afraid that he will not know how to write after killing him?

It's really ridiculous. It's really pitiful for time travelers to play like this.

After identification, it is extremely poisonous. I will feed you a mouthful of shit at the beginning. Don't look at 😒, it will poison you to death in the first chapter.

Ning Rongrong is not a genius. In fact, Ning Rongrong doesn't need to think about it at all. She can reach level 79 at most without evolving her martial soul. What's the use of leveling up so quickly? The upper limit is there anyway, and are other people really that talented? We don't know whether Oscar is innately full of soul power. Even if he is, his level up rate is not faster than Ning Rongrong, so it is the same. Ma Hongjun has the disadvantage of evil fire, and the upper limit is not high. If Dai Mubai doesn't practice hard, the soul saint will be the best. He may not be able to reach Contra. Zhu Zhuqing estimates that he can reach Contra, mainly because he practices hard, but are these people really better than Ning Rongrong? Flanders in the original novel was just a fan of Ning Rongrong. Ning Rongrong didn't have a martial soul to evolve, so the upper limit was there. If he didn't practice hard, what would happen if he wasn't happy?

There is Yao Lao in the Endless Fire Realm, but Yu Xiaogang is not seen in the God Realm. The grudges are clearly scattered in the mist, and all five hundred soul masters have been slaughtered. A fire domain is established at the border, leading to an abyss. Can we be human? The kindness of a drop of water is repaid by a spring. Can we pay it back after a few years of care? Muchen has become a master, when will Yuhao be at ease? Xiao Mei and Xiao Yu will be at ease. Love, Chen Xiang's cousin Cheng Huifei never causes trouble and is not afraid of trouble. He does not dare to cause trouble because of Tang Cai's rise to the great Qianyuan Qi. For ten thousand years, the gods of the Tang Dynasty have protected the great thousand against evil tribes. How many people will die in the ten thousand years? Tang Sanshao has never claimed to be a good person, pure and pure.

There is a system to kill Tang San, Tang Hao, Yu Xiaogang, why is it so difficult? In the original book, Bibi Dong and her daughter were killed once without using the system, but the souls were not destroyed. If you insist on writing the difficulty like this, the protagonists of my diary system are so hard to play with people like Tangshan that they don't even think about it.

There are a lot of novels like this lately, all of which were published when I was 30 years old. They are probably written by the studio to make money.

Kaleidoscope is the title of strength, not blowing fire, but the strength of Douluo, which one except God can block Kaleidoscope's tube technique? 😟

Everything else is okay, but the content of the heroine's diary is really too obscene. It can't be said to be embarrassing, it can only be said to be greasy and excessive. It feels like there are ten Zhang Hans living in the protagonist's heart.

I don't know what to say, I just feel a bit baffled. I have been complaining for a long time and have already cut off Hu Xiaowu and Ah Yin. Unless I kill Tang Dachui to prevent Tang San from knowing, otherwise I will fight to death. But I just complain about Tang San and have no other actions at all. Xing Dou can obviously kill spiders along the way. I don't want to read it when I see Tang San successfully taking away the soul bones. I am really speechless...

Dou Er's ultimate attribute can defeat people who are ten or twenty levels higher than him. Although the ultimate wood is not as offensive, it should be about the same. Then the protagonist also has Thousand-Armed Wood Release, Immortal Mode, Eternal Kaleidoscope, high mental power, and so many soul ring enhancements, so his combat power should be at least level 30. However, the combat power he has shown now has been back and forth against five or six soul masters of the same realm or even a lower realm, and it already feels a bit broken.

Accepting a disciple, conflicting attributes, being strong once, being childless at fifty years old, a pope, a saint, a gentleman of a thousand ways, martial arts can affect the character. How did you come to know that Qian Xunji planned to take Bibi Dong as his wife?

And why not use Eight Gate Dunjia? It's great as a trump card. It's originally a life system. If you use Eight Gate Dunjia, the side effects will be much smaller.

It's almost written, that's it. Shura is nothing in front of the system. Summoning a black and yellow flame can send him away.

Can you delete some words? ? ? Delete the word "wife" after the heroine? ? Look at the comparison. It's completely impossible to watch. Give me a response! I dedicated a chapter to this book review.

I'll give you all the tickets, I'll update you soon

If this book had only 1 million to 1.2 Million words, it would be top-notch among the Douluo Diaries, but it has 1.48 Million words, so it's probably somewhere in the middle.

Author, I'll give you a monthly ticket to get more points.

Why just write Douluo 1 and how many are left?