A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Slay Monsters and Level Up While Enjoying Eternal Life!

There is a saying that this book is really good. You are calling it reckless for Killing Decisively. You can sleep in Nangong for free and she will ascend to the fairy world on her own. There is a high probability that the character will help the male protagonist and you say it is unreliable. Please recommend some good mortal books. , Mortal: The First Body Cultivation in Tiannan, Mortal starts from immortality, I can enter the spirit world at the beginning of Mortal, Mortal starts from Huang Maple Valley as a calamity cultivator, starts from mortal to achieve immortality, and this book, Mortal: Fight monsters and upgrade, I enjoy immortality! I'm following all of these, and they are all very good. I just want to say that there are too many people nitpicking about this book. I can't stand it, so I'll just say what's on my mind. Come on, author, you write well!

The protagonist's IQ is not good. He opened a cave before buying the formation. It's not like he didn't know the value of the spiritual eye spring. Sure enough, the cave was discovered and occupied by Senior Brother Wang. Although he killed him in the end, the protagonist in this writing is really stupid and brainless.

On the twelfth and third levels of Qi training, I came out of the forbidden area and brought back ten beads of elixir. Is that a lot? Are you being targeted? Let's force a plot

Is this temperament worthy of competing with Han Li for a woman? If you want to enjoy yourself, create your own creation.

I hope the author has his own view of mortals, instead of Wang Yu's view of mortals. Mortals themselves have many bugs, and fans will add more bugs. 1. Yu Zitong, a master of Qi training. His Qi training soul is so powerful that it is comparable to the God of Dayan. Fans should give up the scenes between Mo Juren and Yu Zitong. How to treat the so-called conflict with the plot after giving up the body in Qi training? 2. Low realms can clearly see the cultivation level of high realms. The digitization is the same as in games. It feels like an NPC has a level health bar on its head. A low realm cannot analyze the level of a high realm at all, let alone what level it is... In addition to the author's inertia, readers can see this problem awkwardly. 3. Low-level alchemy, weapon training and talisman monks cannot produce what high-level monks need. Why? My own cultivation and magic power cannot support it, let alone high-level materials. More importantly, the knowledge is not enough. Just like the Formation Master, how can a monk who cannot build a foundation know the combat power of a Golden Core cultivator, and how can he know the strength of a Golden Core cultivator's spiritual consciousness? Four. Waste material matching system, all starting in hell mode. Why didn't you consider seizing the body when you knew it was useless? It all relied on system enhancement. So why didn't the system choose a Tianling root instead of a useless material to increase the difficulty? Knowing that cultivating immortals depends on their background and strength, they want the protagonist to suffer the most miserable fate and take the worst path. In the later stage, you have to suppress your combat power and cultivation... Why? It's all driven by the system. The focus is on the system, so is the system cultivating immortality or the protagonist is cultivating immortality? Is it because the system has snatched away the protagonist~ 5 The desire to collect is basically the same in fan fiction. I have whatever the original work has, and I do whatever Han Li does. Regardless of whether it is reasonable or not, the protagonist must cut off the character. Would anyone say that if you don't snatch it, you are still a fan? So it's all about fanfic. Whether it's a good original or a good fanfic, they will have their own ideas and plots, rather than copying or plagiarizing. 6 The combat power and skills are not clear. The biggest problem in distinguishing between original works and fan fiction is that the skills are not clear, because the fans basically refer to the original work. The original work can make detours, but the fan fiction cannot, especially in the early stage. Readers all know what the original work's combat power is in the later stage, and the stuff in the early stage is simply not enough. There is no need to review the past with others to learn the new. Choose one that is intuitive and can be progressively enhanced, with a clear style that will naturally attract resonant readers, rather than complicated and colorful ones. Seven old ladies, should you cultivate immortality or a century-old marriage~ The best choice for a heroine is her qualifications and combat power, not her difficulty in settling down. On the long road to immortality, loneliness is the only thing that accompanies the protagonist. Regardless of whether men and women are immortal, the relationship between Taoist couples is basically just passers-by on the road. It depends on who has the best qualifications and who can survive to the end. Therefore, there are no cute girls in cultivating immortals, and there is no love brain in cultivating immortals. Therefore, when authors do not clarify the relationship between primary and secondary, the further they go, the harder it becomes to write, especially those who cannot write emotional dramas. They knew that they could benefit from each other, but they had to tie her up for life and put shackles on her. He couldn't bear to see her become a pink skeleton. In the end, I still don't understand why. In fact, what readers want is the process rather than the result... (If I were to time travel, I would not consider Yellow Maple Valley at all, but go to the Hehuan Sect of the Hidden Moon Sect. Each realm has a girl, a set of skills and a love. If I want to live my whole life, it depends on whether the girl can reach the end on her own).

You don't have to worry about snatching the opportunity from Han Laomo, but the old demon from the fairy world who robs someone else's double cultivator will definitely take action and collapse.

The protagonist is pretending to be cautious

No, the plot is okay, the protagonist is very strange. The first time the reader saw Chen Qiaoqian and Nangong Wan's "hey hey hey eroticism", the reader's first feeling was that it was vulgar. There is also a protagonist who laughs and laughs when he meets a senior who can crush him to death. He is startled and talks to himself about nothing. My 12-year-old brother, who is in the sixth grade, does not change his expression even if the mountain collapses in front of him. At least he is relatively stable and behaves appropriately. This is the mortal world. If you are not careful, you will die. The protagonist is really getting more and more uncomfortable as I watch it. After all, he is in his 30s at the beginning, but his temperament is not as good as that of a junior high school student in our country. How do you survive in this world?

It's understandable that you have the opportunity to snatch the protagonist, but you also snatch the protagonist's woman. This pattern is really difficult to evaluate. There are too many women in mortals, so you have to do this. Nausea

Let me tell you a joke, the speed of a strong Nascent Soul master can be measured by a few feet or tens of meters 😥😥😥