The Grave Keeper Just Wants to Lay Low

The biggest problem I found in this book was that the protagonist had barely finished cleaning up the mess when four or five hundred corpses were buried in just one month. Does a small county town really have that many people? It felt like the population was being updated.

The details need improvement. Starting the game with no strength to even kill a chicken, daring to go out into the wild to find wolves is practically suicide. Let alone wolves, even wild dogs are a 50/50 chance for an ordinary person, and these animals live in groups!

Keep increasing your physique? How much have you increased it by? With so much physique, shouldn't you become a superhuman? Why are you still just like an ordinary person?

Um, just a suggestion: as someone who buries corpses, witnessing someone commit murder and then actually vomiting—that's a weird plot point. Please delete it.

Dozens of people die every day in a county town. How many people are there to sustain this? Demons, monsters, bandits, officials, natural disasters, and man-made calamities take turns killing and devouring people, yet the population hasn't been wiped out?

The plot is alright, but the writing style is rather poor; it's suitable for casual reading to kill time. 😁

It's a shame that such a subject matter could be wasted; the details could be improved.

I've read all your updates and I think they're pretty good 😃😃😃👍👍👍. Adding some color would be nice, but it's not essential. Just make sure your writing has some character, otherwise it'll get boring.

The analysis is complete; "dark" refers to a dark worldview.

Three and a half people buried in one day at the start? This kind of death in a county town? There's probably no one left in this world. How can a social system function without a grassroots level? And then there's the physical ghost? How the hell did you find out who buried you after you came out of the ground?