The Mysterious Original Creator

One of the difficult meanings of the original work is that Researcher Maozi will never come back, and the giant who worked for the human race will never come back. It just so happens that the setting is so difficult for fans to save, so this book is really good for letting cheats break.

Mysterious fanfics that write about female protagonists are basically bad. After all, who is here for the female protagonist in a mysterious fanfic?

It can be seen that the author is a novice, and the creativity is good. However, the plot line and other aspects are not handled well enough, and the character design of the protagonist is a bit lacking. Come on, author.

The idea is very good, but there are too many flaws. I won't care about it and will just support it verbally.

After being eaten by several kings of angels, Xiaohong died without leaving even a single recipe to herself before she died. She knew the plot clearly, but nothing changed when she got to Klein. Her situation was worse than that of Adam. She just traveled through a lonely place.

First of all, according to the original text, the three pillars with Mystery and Mother Goddess are the original (original God), and the one who can tear apart the source of matter and gather everything is the original creator. Secondly, the aggregation of the pillars is not as strong as the original, so it is not as strong as the original when you wake up. It should be noted that the two must not be confused. The four generations of creators in the original work are respectively the first generation of the original (split to create the world), the second generation of the original (the original omniscient and omnipotent God), the third generation of the ancient sun god (brother Maozi, who is also the creator of Silver City), and the fourth generation of the true creator (the crazy human side) Come on, author, you have a good idea!

Keep in mind that the protagonist travels through the book and is a real time traveler. The advantage of writing this kind of protagonist's real role is not to be prophetic, but to symbolize the possibility from outside the original world view, and the possibility of breaking through the limitations of the world itself (since it is a time-travel outside the universe, it means that you can try to avoid risks and transcend limits through the knowledge and systems of other worlds)

Will there still be Amon in this book? If it were not for Amon, in whose hands would His false uniqueness lie.

This is even worse than the original work. It turns out that there are still two uniquenesses, but now you have lost both. Storm also got two Hanged Man Sequence Ones. If you don't set yourself up to be the original absorber of magic potions without rituals or performances, you may find it difficult to come back later.

The writing is pretty good, but it does have some flaws. The pace could be slowed down a bit, and things could be told as well as possible. The improvement of the protagonist's strength could be sped up a bit. I support it.

I feel that there are some problems with the character portrayal. Audrey does not have a unique sense of dignity and grandeur at all. I hope the author can adjust this aspect.

I feel like it would be right if Lovia said "I am self-existing" when she talks to the protagonist for the first time.

You can refer to Reinhard from "The Day of Wrath". The Golden Supreme Sky is quite nice.

Hurry up, hurry up, I can't wait to see the protagonist thrust into the dark night hehe🤤

Pursuing reading is very important. Please don't read too much. Turn to the last page of the last chapter and then turn over again. The data in the novel now values ​​this the most. Thank you all.

I would like to ask the author if he will add a female protagonist? Let me give you a suggestion, I think two female protagonists are best. If it is too much, it will easily turn into a stallion novel. Two girls can just do some Shura field. Emotional lines are also easier to write.

The heroine, the goddess of the night, is amazing! ! !

🙄 Next time you can make an outline first and then consider rebirth.

I can't remember the setting of the original work clearly. What paths do the First Creator and the Original Creator occupy?

Support me, the writing is really good, but it's too... 😰 to set up fan value comments at the beginning of this book, and it seems that there is no group yet.

The author must have written it incorrectly, right? You made the protagonist of your book die once for the sake of the original protagonist, and therefore lost all the conveniences brought by the previous identity. If you do this, people will not know who the protagonist is?

Take a bubble

I endured it and looked back. It was getting better. Not bad. Come on.

You Hongwen, do you want to have breakfast?

I really want to read a novel about a city god whose main character is the true god of destiny, but no one has written it like this in the starting point. Now that the author's book is about to be cut, can the next one write about the subject I want to read?

Fine, understand?