A Pokémon from Paul: My Journey Begins

If the Scary-Antlered Deer really doesn't want to fight, release it or exchange it for one that has the same ambition as you. The protagonist doesn't have much money to begin with, yet he still has to raise such an elf who doesn't have the same heart. This kind of cheating is really a waste of the protagonist's money.

It's a bit like Tang San. Shinji gave you elves, but you crazily belittled Shinji.

The general system is quite good. I suggest you tame one with the picking-up attribute. Seeing as the protagonist you wrote is so short of money... And it is like the third and sixth-year-old Frighthorn Deer. It will not be simple to lead you to find something that can be exchanged for money in the psychedelic forest 🤫

If you don't mention the elves issue, you are not the author. Do you really think that the only people who can be the owner of the museum are those low-level elves?

I was listening to the book, and I first heard that Jingantulu was willing to start playing in the gym, even if it was a fake match later, but he was more or less willing to play. It doesn't matter if he likes to play in the downwind game. He just needs to be trained more in the future. Pokémon likes to be lazy, but he is still willing to practice his telekinesis, and he is still willing to become stronger Until I heard that he was hiding the skills he had learned, even if what he was thinking was that he did not want to dampen the enthusiasm of the earth dragon, but he also said in the next sentence that he did not want more training. I don't really like this deer at all. The protagonist is originally poor, and if he doesn't have enough money, he can only mine and catch thieves, just to make the three of them stronger. This deer is good. He only trains what he likes to practice. He doesn't tell the protagonist when he learns the skills. He just fakes the match when he sees a strong one. What a master Pokémon, his fists are already hard. (Of course I have only heard Chapter 38 now, the author will definitely handle the plot well)

If you have a difficult start, you shouldn't raise some insect elves. After the team speed is established, you can gradually replace the powerful elves. Forget about Muke Eagle. There is really no need to raise deer. If you want to become the king of kings, the most important thing is strength. No matter how old he is, it is useless 😅

To be honest, the writing in this book is really not that good. There are a lot of elves with personality problems, and they also cut off their hair. I think if you continue to write your first book, you will be better than him. You wrote the first book quite well, but the ending is a bit hasty. You can continue to write the following content. Anyway, your first book is not completely finished, so it is over.

My advice is "Everyone has a dream in life, and each one is wonderful." For those Pokémon that don't want to fight, ask them as soon as possible whether they want to release them or exchange them. After all, the protagonist is a poor guy and can't afford to raise them.

All I can say about this book is that I enjoyed reading it a few years ago

Give the author a suggestion for the chapter updated today. Regarding Team Galactic, do you think anonymous emails are useful? As long as you can send it out, the higher-ups will know who you are, okay. It is impossible to find the source of the email. And first, in the plot, you wrote that the group of poachers were abandoned by J. You can completely design the plot to say that hunter J doesn't care about a group of men who can't handle a small thing, and forgets about the protagonist or she doesn't pay attention to who you are. After all, they are just a group of minions, and they don't have any big grudge against Hunter J Secondly, even if Hunter J has a conflict with you, what does Team Galaxy have to do with you? One more thing is worse than one less thing. Chiri is free to help J fuck you Thirdly, the heat in my head makes me lose my understanding of the plot, the protagonist is still going crazy As for the nurturing period, you just do it like this. It doesn't mean that the protagonist is already very strong and doesn't care whether the plot follows the flow. You are still in the development period. I suggest you delete this part, or change to a more secure way to deal with it. Of course, it is best to ignore the plot. Since your strength can't participate, then what do you care about him? I don't understand. Don't be too hot-headed when writing the plot. Just think whatever you want~_~You write the protagonist in this way. It's stupid. How about the protagonist's caution???