Spirit Dungeon Simulator

The protagonist's parents are definitely the biggest flaw of this book. The author may have a happy family, but the irresponsible parents are definitely one of the most annoying people. The annoying thing about them is that no matter how much you hate them, you can't deny it and can't sever the relationship.

The protagonist is quite persistent. He is an elite-qualified baby bear who doesn't have much money and just wants to find his parents. Let me not say whether it is possible or not. The protagonist's parents left when the protagonist was a few years old and went all the way to work. What will happen if such parents are brought back? Will they still be able to live peacefully after getting it back? You wrote about the extremely irresponsible parents of the protagonist, and I still can't forget it. The protagonist lacks love in his heart. If the protagonist's parents don't take the protagonist seriously, the protagonist is like a licking dog. Sorry, I really liked watching Baby Bear, but it turned out to be a tadpole looking for its mother plot.

It's too difficult, the dark side of the elf world doesn't even say that you will die as soon as you step out!! For thousands of years, elves have never been so hostile to humans. They fight whenever they meet. After the fight, they will definitely face hordes of evolved forms. . . It's a failure. Even someone like Xiaozhi can survive, but the protagonist dies every day. With this kind of mortality rate, no one will be a trainer. It's hard to go out, right?

The author forced a one-for-one exchange with Xiaomao. Let's not mention that it is a foul for Xiao Mao to make continuous substitutions. Even if you can make substitutions, don't you know that the Fiery Monkey can add the energy buff? Moreover, Mo Ru Mo and Sister Mi Lip are mutually restrained by insect super. Sister Mi Lip is driving a blizzard, while Mo Enter Moth not only confuses the opponent with ultrasonic waves, but can also use skills such as blood-sucking, signal beam, and insect resistance to deal damage. As a result, there was a collision and one was exchanged? Have you forgotten that there is another baton that can ignore the black eyes?

It doesn't feel very mature to yell at the battle. The time traveler has lived many years longer than others. I have simulated it so many times and I still can't see the progress of the protagonist.

Let me give you some suggestions First, since the Pokémon on the protagonist's side has a golden finger, you can cheat appropriately. Change the attributes and form of a certain Pokémon, such as the difference between Giant Claw Mantis and Ax Splitting Mantis. This will be more interesting. Don't always apply the official settings. Second, since the protagonist has a simulator and has experienced so much, he should not make a fuss. After all, with more experience, he must have more experience, and his ability to respond to emergencies will also become stronger accordingly. Third, the interaction, daily life, and training between the protagonist and Pokémon can be written appropriately, so that it will feel more like growing up and taking risks with Pokémon.

The author of "Liu Shui Wen" can't write battles. He can only simulate. There isn't much to watch. 80% Of the book ends in a hurry.

The protagonist's Circle Bear had long ago exposed its huge weakness of having no long-range attack methods, but it still remained like this until it reached level 50. There's just one more rigid beam of destruction. Wouldn't it be the most suitable ones for Big Sound and High-speed Star? Don't you want to learn both?

I watched it at the beginning, Pure Death Simulator, where you die wherever you go. I also read the dark Elf stories. You are really outrageous.

It would be better if your book was about the real world. The world in anime and games has no sense of immersion, and anime can't be so dark. At least we don't see much darkness in anime. When you write like this, it doesn't feel like a world.