
Mixing It Up in the World of Elves, Starting with Selling Candy
混在精灵世界,从卖糖果开始
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This introduction is huge! ! Candy with immune properties? This mass-produced mythical beast can be beaten casually, and it can also practice knitting skills and just eat candies.
What does this introduction say? The range of Pokémon food is so wide that it's all gone and only Pokémon food and energy cubes are left? It's like you said that in a world all human dishes have disappeared, and there are only compressed biscuits and steamed buns. That is very creative.
The Pokémon world written by the author, even the Pokémon has a class flavor😅
It's really disgusting to write plots all day long about pretending to be slapped in the face and being picked on by powerful people. What kind of break-up battle is there? You, a trainer, come to compete with the protagonist's pastry chef, a student researcher who has not graduated? The protagonist has a bunch of inventions that have been snatched up like crazy. Even the gangsters in this city can bully you, right? At worst, the protagonist will move his whole family back to Orange Academy to open a store and stop selling things to people in your area. We will see who is in a hurry then. It's really all a story about mentally retarded pretentiousness and slaps in the face, a cool writing routine that was popular eight hundred years ago.
It tastes wrong
Where did this come from? Is this still a Pokémon? Logically speaking, Pokémon is a pseudo-utopia. Pokémon's own world view is called a simple folk custom. Even the core goals of various villain organizations are to "purify the world". After half of reading, it turns out that some people have sinister hearts, gangsters, powerful people, and upper-class idiots. To be honest, is the Pokémon world view really suitable for urban fashion and slapstick stories? Brother, it always seems like we are not traveling into the Pokémon world, but the Pokémon world view has come to reality, and it is not the ordinary real world, but the world view of the short drama that you can click and watch in the music notes.
The new plot is not very good. The more I write, the less enjoyable it becomes.
Your dessert shop is being picked on by local gangsters every day, and people are smashing up the shop every day. It's no wonder that the elf is so powerful. He is so powerful when he comes out to work, and he obviously has such good resources, but he has not established contact with the upper management. He is being picked on by little thugs every day. Lillie's power is not small, but her mother didn't react at all when this happened.
Alas, there is a misunderstanding in Pokémon. All events revolve around famous NPCs. You see now that all the candies are either sold to champions or to gym owners. Passers-by have become backgrounds. They must be mythical beasts coming and going. In fact, it doesn't look good.
I feel like the author doesn't know how to write tough protagonists
A gangster looking for trouble is just a one-time pretense. If you still write it, you feel that the protagonist is useless. You have a fantasy beast in your hand, and you can fight against the mythical beast. In addition, these inventions, and you know the champion and have a good relationship. In other areas, you have to be sacrificed, and you have to write this to stay in Miarecheng. There are those who steal the formula, journalists and so on, and the local nobles are not happy with you, and the gangsters are even looking at you with their nostrils. What kind of gangster's face? It's good that my strength has not been exposed to your headquarters. I also have Mr. Karasuba's approval. I can fight against the beasts and know the champion. I need your approval? Given this situation and your strength, are you still suffering in Miare? I would have gone to Fengyuan with Daigo a long time ago. If you don't have the strength, it would be reasonable to write like this. If you don't have the strength, please bear with it in the early stage. You should understand that you will continue to chase and wait to see the revenge in the later stage. But if you have the strength, writing like this is a coward and it is not fun to read. So I read the author's other two books and their reviews to confirm that the author really can't write tough protagonists. One protagonist's champion strength was captured alive by Sanbao Ban, and the other one is almost as soft as this one.
I can't stand this introduction. Wild Pokémon grow up eating air, right?🥵
The character design has collapsed. The character of the protagonist of Pokémon does not require you to be a saint. At least it must be positive. If you make mistakes, correct them and love Pokémon. However, the behavior of the protagonist is increasingly deviating from this direction. He talks about it as if he is okay, but the description of his behavior does not show anything. When the plot advances, he forcefully pulls it back with one sentence. Zero stars for writing