Electromagnetic Tyrant

Chapter 30: Death due to poison. I can accept Xiaobai's novel, but I can't accept that the male protagonist looks like a teddy when he sees a woman, and is always stunned.

If any buddies find out that he has opened a new book in his vest, remember to come here and shake people to directional blast him.

Let's take a closer look at his books. Throne of Violence, Star Age Martial God, Warhammer Wizard, Interstellar God of War, Sovereign of Heaven, and Electromagnetic Tyrant. There are 6 eunuch books in total, write one eunuch book and one eunuch book.

You're all cheating, why don't you think about what the next chapter 30 is about? I don't even dare to write fantasy like this, okay? Think about it with normal people's thinking. Most teams look down on you. Suddenly a beautiful woman tells you that she wants to check you out. Your first reaction is to go and take a look? Isn't this the same trick used to trick people into going to northern Myanmar?

Let's briefly talk about the character Ren Mian. The character and background are very well written, but the strength is quite mediocre. If you beat the Red Emperor believer, an elite among super monsters, you can't beat him with 2 high-level ones, and you still need the protagonist to explode. Take Zhao Manying who appears in the book as an example. Assuming that if they are the same age, have the same talent, and consume the same resources, Ren Mian will definitely not be able to beat Zhao Manying. There is a problem with the former's career matching. , The first professional assistant, the second professional defensive warrior, so it is typed like this The combination of professional skills is the highlight of this book. If it is poorly written, the book will lose a lot of luster. In addition, Ren Mian is a bit of a heroine or one of the heroines. If it is not written well in the early stage, there will be no sense of existence in the future. I hope the author will seriously consider it. Finally, I will add some refinement to the typography.

Because the name and introduction come in, and then the ranger plays bow and arrow at the beginning, and chooses compound bow for bow and arrow. The point is, did you shoot in the wrong area? What kind of science fiction is this? When entering the star realm, you cannot use technological weapons. You can only use your own abilities and cold weapons. What a cold joke. Science fiction novels cannot use technology to fight.

Electromagnetic tyrant? Electromagnetic Clown🤡 The author doesn't need to write a female character if he has never seen a woman before

There is nothing wrong with the writing, but comrades who are attracted to "electromagnetism" and "tyrants" like me should just recognize the reality. Pure title party. Let me put it simply, this (electromagnetic tyrant) is a profession, just like the warrior, mage, and priest in the game, and the protagonist finally chooses to be a jobless layman. It is not as imagined, the protagonist controls electromagnetism, destroys cities and strongholds with unparalleled power, and violently attacks others.

It's good-looking. I mean if you write the main character like this again, I want it to be good-looking. If the emotional scenes are not good, don't write them. Downplay them. Let me make a blind guess. Ren Mian's chapter will cost you at least 50,000 yuan in income.

Well written, another masterpiece of love stories. Chapter 30 is the highlight of this work. It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that makes people feel so comfortable. The author must have read "Boiling Sheep and Big Big Wolf" to write such a good novel. This is more than just fairy grass. I felt like I had entered a peach garden after reading it.