Wasteland: a Guide to Building a Paradise

This book has made many careful innovations on the basis of imitating Bone King. Therefore, as a ten-year-old Bone King fan, I will try to point out the shortcomings of this book from the perspective of comparison with Bone King (the original work). First of all, the basic character creation of Bone King is in place. You can say that he has a facial makeup, but with so many characters appearing, he has done a good job. Each one has its own characteristics and enough roles. However, the characters and creation in this book cannot be said to be completely absent, but it can only be said to be better than nothing. In terms of plot, most of the plot ideas of Bone King except for the early stage are quite good, at least it can make people not expect what will happen next. The plot of this book cannot be said to be very bad, but it can be said that it is generally mediocre. In addition to the above, Bone King cooperates with "Traversing the Fallen Empire". The final logic is: in the early stage, the soul travels through an extremely mysterious and powerful Fallen Empire to attract attention, and then in the follow-up, it develops with a large number of character creation and plot power. At the same time, because of the ability of the Fallen Empire, every situation encountered during the exploration has countless solutions, which can return to help the author develop unexpected plots for readers. And the beginning of this book cannot be said to be the Fallen Empire. It can only be said that those who hear it are sad and those who see it cry, let alone use all kinds of black technology to brutally torture the natives. My understanding of "Sidichua" is: "The protagonist is just a person with ordinary intelligence" to increase the distance with the readers and increase empathy, and then use Sidichua to cleverly bridge the gap between ordinary people and the supreme being who has no plans, and promote the plot to create exciting points. This book seems to be just for the sake of enlightenment. I can't say that my above understanding is necessarily the only correct one, but I don't feel in this book that the author has his own understanding of the success of the Bone King IP, but just applied some elements. The core is behind the scenes of farming. From this perspective, it can't be said to be bad. The performance is quite satisfactory.

Coming from the big eyes, they all say that if you don't have milk, it will be a masterpiece. Come on, writer!

Namo Jesus Flying Pasta Maya God, with great mercy and great compassion, saved me from the true scripture.

Success is not being sucked to death by eyeballs

I hope the author will not be influenced by the readers and write whatever he wants. Don't get caught up in a dispute about whether there is a heroine or not.

Recommended (updated from time to time): The comic "Guangmeng" (sci-fi), the American science fiction drama "The Vast Sky", the animation "Armored Cavalry: The Documents of Pelluge" " and its spin-off "Mecha Mecha Myrolink", the animation "Escaroni in the Sky" (especially the theatrical version) (fantasy science fiction), the game "The Outer Worlds" (science fiction), the comic "Black Lagoon" (shootout action), the comic "The Distance of the Moon" (science fiction), the ova "Knights of the Royal Ecclesiarchy" (fantasy gunfight), the animated film "Vampire Hunter D" (Science Fiction) fantasy), "Steam Boy" (science fiction), "Monster City" (fantasy action), "Guardians of the Ruins (1998 Edition)" (science fiction action), "Galaxy Island" (fantasy science fiction), "Atlantis: The Lost Empire" (science fiction), "Jubei Ninfu Tie" (action), "Venus Senki" (science fiction), the manga "Thunder Universe" (Gundam), "no life guns" (sci-fi), "Red-eyed Mecha Soldier" (sci-fi), "Wolf's Crest" (fantasy action)! Fantasy sci-fi action animated film: Highlanders: Revenge no guns life: Armored Cavalry:

The Chinese names in the first two pages are unexpectedly placed in the world view of the wasteland. Xuanniao Martial Soldier and Wuling Hongguang appear later. This is a typical example of the author's personal preference overriding the tone of the world. It's not that the wasteland of the Eastern Continent cannot be written, but that the writing power is not enough to perfectly integrate the two.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I thought about putting it on the bookshelf for the time being. The result was death. First of all, this book must be affirmed that the setting is very attractive, including the introduction. But the biggest problem is precisely this. The writing is so messy. I want to write about everything and touch on everything, but the end result is that the reader will be confused. Interest is slowly worn away. The result is naturally to give up studying or to keep it temporarily. You, the author, must know what everyone wants to see in the early stage, but you just don't write about the development of the base. You keep exploring and opening maps outside. If you lose a second-level special infection at home, you just keep it without research. Research does not mean dissection. What is most important in the wasteland environment is resources, but the base seems to have no shortage of resources. Except for going out to do a mission and changing a cooler at the beginning, there is no need for anything else. Are they all loop functions? No need for other resources? Are they all produced and sold by themselves? He is obviously the base controller, but he doesn't develop the base, restore the production line, or produce mechanical teams. Instead, he goes to a single robot and goes out to explore the map? ? And it seems that it is still transmitted completely, and it is gone when you die? ? Don't you think... It's a waste of time? ? Can't you rely on your team to explore the map? Can't consciousness come to one's own mechanical soldiers remotely? So what kind of mechanical ascension do you play? ? To make matters worse, another Taiyin appears, also in a base, similar to the role of a crazy scientific researcher, but it is also a data consciousness but has no entity, which completely reduces the special character of the protagonist. We also started to develop biochemical troops, the Zerg-like ones, which were very messy, especially messy. It's not that you can't cross over. The key is that if you cross over, you must be complementary or special to yourself. I would like to ask, do those violent biochemical soldiers have the combat power to crush the military soldiers? Chaos, the whole thing is very chaotic. What does the protagonist want to do? If he doesn't use a base, he will trigger plots everywhere in the wasteland. One moment it seemed that the remnants of the wasteland had received some help, and the next moment they suddenly had to go to the wasteland big city. The base, the base was really just a place of birth, gone. It doesn't match your profile at all, so people who are attracted to it will find it awkward and won't be able to read it.

Come on, don't let the big eyes suck you to death

The big eyes are full of milk, come and see the sacrificed works

The writing is very messy, to be honest, the various stitches are nondescript, and the wasteland construction has also made me feel lonely. I regret subscribing.

Look at the strength of big-eyed titties

Insert an eye, I recommend it for big eyes, keep it first, and then look at it later when you have time.

It's fun to make complaints about it appropriately, but don't go too far, it will make life very tiring.

I was sucked to death🤤🤤🤤

Be careful, you are being stared at by big eyes

The book may be a good book, but there are several common-sense errors related to my major in the first ten chapters that I can't stand to ignore 🥵 Abandoned

Friend, can the great Supreme Heaven explain it?

After reading the first few chapters, I personally find it a bit boring to write a map with clones. I still prefer the development base type.

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It smells like a hammer everywhere, so I might as well change it to an undiscovered golden age plant star of about 30k. It rose again after being invaded by aliens, and developed into the Forge World after being discovered by the Great Crusade.

You already have two eunuch books, I don't believe you anymore

The big eyes pushed me to read it. In the third chapter, all the intruders were dead and mutated. When cleaning the corpses, there was a petite beautiful girl with a strand of white hair. My heart started to pound. Sure enough, the girl who was said to be completely dead on the next page was inexplicably resurrected. What I'm saying is, can it not be so cliché? To take a step back, even if such a character is needed to advance the plot, can it not be a beautiful white-haired girl? It's really quite discouraging.

I suggest that you rewrite it. The author reads other people's novels, then changes them one by one, and then finishes the book. You can't always be a eunuch, right?

After it was put on the shelves, it felt like someone had replaced it, and it was obviously not as refreshing as it was.

Can the author not write about the golden toilet? He doesn't want to smell bad and wants to develop the base.

First subscribe and purchase + monthly pass. Currently I can't even read one chapter a day on QQ