Battle Through the Heavens: This Alchemist Is Far Too Fierce

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There are only two female protagonists in Battle Through the Heavens that cannot be overlooked: Qing Lin and the Little Doctor. Both of them are free from burdens, living alone, and their personalities are interdependent. Other female protagonists all have family members or sects.

Damn, the opening scene is about the Burning Technique again. You already have a system, why are you still cultivating the Burning Technique? That's ridiculous. Does the author not know how to write about different flames if he leaves the main storyline of Doupo?

So far, the writing is alright; there are some flaws, but not many. The main issue is the protagonist's mentality—he seems like a child, easily bullied and trampled upon. The main questions are: how will the protagonist handle the Burning Blade? How will he deal with the Strange Flame? Since he's supposed to maintain a good relationship with the anti-inflammatory medicine, I don't believe the author won't take action against him if this is brought up.

The most vicious part was after the Alchemist Competition, when the protagonist's identity was exposed. A peak Dou Huang (plus Xing Tian), a Dou Huang (Gu He), and several Dou Wangs attacked the protagonist, while the protagonist's side had two Dou Zongs and three Dou Huangs. They only used Hai Po Dong (two-star Dou Huang) and the Purple Crystal Winged Lion King (five-star Dou Huang) to beat the protagonist badly and almost get him captured.

Yun Yun is not worthy of being the female lead. There are plenty of incompetent women like her in the Dou Qi Continent.

New topic, my friend 🚪, will you be taking Medusa and Elder Hai to Zhongzhou later? Let's see some corresponding attribute-based combat techniques! 😍 Let me give you a little hint about what I'm thinking later... 1. Medusa will not be a tool in the Flame Alliance as in the original story, but will instead fight her way to Zhongzhou with the main characters, constantly growing stronger and…

I need a really awesome, self-created fighting skill, guys! I'm at my wit's end and can't think of anything!

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Speechless, what an idiot, no, I mean, he loves the Queen that much. Look at the clown with one eye.