Battle Through the Heavens: Become Stronger by Refining Pills

Well written, consider this your peak work, don't write it next time

The early stage was good, but as soon as they arrived at Wutan City, they took the initiative to lower their wits The plot in Snake City was a bit toxic in some places. For example, Yue Mei was hostile to the protagonist because her alchemy skills were better than hers. Although this was slightly toxic, it was generally acceptable. After all, it promoted the development of the plot, so it was not a big problem. When they arrived at Wutan City, they were inexplicably wise and advised Nalan Yanran not to break off the engagement. She could only say that breaking off the engagement was her freedom. If the protagonist is a mortal, a useless person, an ordinary person with no system, no plug-ins, and no different cultivation system, I can still understand doing this. It is equivalent to finding a good relationship among Xiao Yan's ambiguous partners to be her bitch, and eating something good that leaks from the fingertips of anti-inflammatory medicine. But the protagonist of this book has a system plug-in, and the plug-in is still available. It is considered a standard version, not the kind of high-end version that can give you training resources from different systems. You can completely ignore Nalan Yanran and let the plot develop. Even if you insist on increasing Nalan Yanran's favorability, you can completely cheat her. It felt like I had to replace someone else to write it when I was forced to do it in Wutan City. It feels like the protagonist has suddenly become cowardly, changing from the original protagonist template to a licking dog. Isn't it good to have an affair with the beautiful snake in Snake City? If you buy the plot in Wutan City, you need to gain Yafei's favor. After you gain favor, go directly to play with the beautiful snake. Before leaving, give Nalan Yanran some elixirs or secret books, say that you saw her, encourage her to have a free marriage, etc. Whether it is to guide Nalan Yanran or Yun Yun in the later stage, or to cook rice bowls between master and apprentice, you can get familiar with them in advance. You persuade others not to do so when someone else breaks off their engagement. This kind of familiarity makes you really want to vomit blood. This plot is like the Douluo fan Fei Shi Daguo camp, who robbed the grass jelly and gave Xiao Wu heartbroken red in order to let Xiao Wu cover up his breath and finish the game. The poisonous point is too poisonous. It is the first time I have seen the place in Wutan City, and it always gives me a feeling Two male protagonists + sending a girl These two points, in an environment where fighting and breaking fan fiction is dominated by cool stories, whoever touches them will die. Eat this poison first, and then try the poison later.

Very well written, don't write it next time

It's so well written, don't write it next time

I finally completed the contract signing. It took me a while to work on it. Thank you everyone for your support and companionship, even though my writing is not very good. I would like to express my gratitude to the following book friends. (There are too many names, so I cannot list them one by one. The following rankings are in no particular order.) ◎The world is known as Zhen Youdao ◎Xue Zhiqian's Guangxi Fenqian ◎Xuan Youming ◎The annoying newbie ◎Ghosts and monsters ◎The little thief bookworm ◎Tianyu Haikong ◎I am the little way boy ◎King Kong Calabash Baby who fights on the street ◎Guxue Chengshang ◎A Scholar on the Pillow ◎The Moon in the Heart GG ◎Old Captain 12 ◎Mu Yi Shikou ◎Die Wu O Book Fans ◎Book Friends 2020111422562334

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It's not that I look down on the Snake Tribe, they really can't get Transformation Pills, and the Snake Tribe are not Warcraft, so their demand for Transformation Pills is really low. Medusa should need the Beast Form Pill, not the Transformation Pill. You should first figure out what the Transformation Pill is. Now these authors dare to come out and write fan fiction when they don't even understand the original work?

My cultivation level is higher than others and I still have system burning skills but I am still afraid of others' revenge. This makes me speechless.

Is there anyone like me who likes Xiao Xun'er, a female dog licker?

I don't understand what's so good about that internet celebrity's face in 3D? (๑•.•๑)