Participating in Insurance Comprehensive Insurance, This Little Fresh Meat Is Really Tough

I just want to say that for a scene about fighting a leopard, I have written so many chapters about the scenes of the supporting characters. I always skipped to see the protagonist. At the end of this chapter, I watched the protagonist fight the leopard, and the next chapter showed the supporting characters in danger. It was really uncomfortable to watch.

Why do system writers write so many supporting roles? You can still read it patiently during the free period. How can you read it after it is put on the shelves?

The whole chapter is a mess. Do you think it's well written? It's so poisonous.

I've always wanted to ask, most of the people in this genre end up being eunuchs. Is this written or coded by the studio?

I've read three or four chapters and it's pretty well written. But it's a bit poisonous to write that you have to send money home so that your younger siblings can go to school. In fact, children born in the 1990s and 2000s really don't have as many brothers and sisters. Those who really dare to have more than one child are rich people. Even if an ordinary person has three children, if the parents work hard, the children can live and go to school. There is really no need for the oldest child to make money for the family.

It's too watery. A four-legged snake wrote two chapters, and it's fifty chapters and I haven't walked a few miles

When I saw the episode about Wu Lin, I felt like this show couldn't exist in reality. The lives of the guests who participated were really in danger, especially the guests, in addition to the protagonists, were all celebrities, as well as the CEO of Qianyi Group.

Although the book is generally written, it can be seen that the author wrote it carefully. I can't say it's well written, but you can't set too high standards for survival novels. Some things become too real and become documentaries. There must be some exaggeration in the novel. The author has improved, at least the main and secondary lines are clearer. I hope I can go further and write better. I don't know if the author has an outline. If not, I suggest the author write one, otherwise it will be easy to collapse. Also, does the author just want to write about this adventure and finish it in a month, or is this just a preliminary stage? If it is a preliminary stage, the writing is a bit slow. After all, it is only the second day. When will it take a month to finish writing, and what about the middle and later stages? I hope the author can sort it out.

Isn't it too ridiculous to see a wild boar and a leopard walking through the forest... I really can't stand it anymore. A leopard can be kicked out of a tree and it can stay in the water for so long. The hunter is just watching the show? Can you really get close and shoot to save them? Can you be smarter 😥😥😥 Either show off and kick yourself to death or don't be so cool 😅😅😅

Wang Yanran's student days

Today I'm thinking about dark cuisine + instant noodles, and I'm a little worried about being beaten to death by readers o(╥╥)o

I was stunned at the beginning. Outdoor diving is completely different from a diving competition. You dive headfirst into the water because you are afraid that you will not die fast enough, right? You also turn around in the air. The turning is just to look good, which is completely meaningless You have to say that you are showing off, and diving here will not turn around and hit obstacles, so that's okay. But I really can't stand it if you dive into the water with your hands first and then your head.

What the hell is this introduction? Why go on an adventure with Mr. Bei because he is handsome? Discourage. .

It's so disgustingly written, and every chapter is accompanied by pictures. It's really enough.

I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing the leopard being beaten, so I said goodbye.

The group portrait is just a good number of words, keep cutting the scene

The one with Mr. Pei goes on an adventure. I quite like the original cast. Just copy the characters. They are all unknowns and lack a sense of empathy. Just replace Da Zhangwei with the protagonist. I started to hate him from that show. It was also from that show that I started to like Zhang Junning.

I have invested, I hope the investment will be successful and the capital will be completed.

When writing a book like this, I recommend reading The God of Food in the Wilderness for Entertainment!

If nothing else, the author has a good attitude and I invested in it.

Hey, there is a reason why the book is not popular. I mentioned the supporting characters in the previous post. In fact, there are so many of them. You don't have to worry so much. Homophones or nicknames are fine. A lot of entertainment novels are written like this. This can tell a certain degree of popularity and benefits. Then, it's too watery. One-third of the book is about the protagonist. There are all kinds of barrages and various group portraits. From that grouping on, my god, my favorability for this book started to drop. The further we go, the more impatient I become. The main character has no part to play. I just go crazy and click away. If these changes are made, we can make a lot of progress. But there is still one thing worthy of praise. This is a book by the author to practice writing. Good luck with the next one💪

This book is quite well written. It is very comfortable to read overall. The characters are vividly depicted and the overall logic is good. However, the plot could be more compact and the pace is a bit slow. I look forward to future plots and interactions with the characters.