This Weird Three Kingdoms Game Is Too Cruel

I think the theme setting is very good among the Three Kingdoms novels. People who like the Three Kingdoms and games will like to read it. However, the protagonist's performance is too little, but he has no personality charm and is not attractive enough. He feels like the protagonist controlled in the game, like a tool man. It would be much better if we wrote a little bit about the plot of the protagonist in the land of stars and established the character image. It is even better to learn from the super mechanics who have successfully made it out of the circle. One main line is to build the lord, collect resources to strengthen yourself, and the other main line is to write adventure stories, and use the life-saving ability and the natural disaster army to advance the plot.

The subject matter is undoubtedly attractive to others, but the author seems to have left many things unwritten in order to speed up the progress. The four major cities of the order lineup, the planet where the protagonist opens, the plot of the Three Kingdoms, the earth is discovered by the evil god, and everyone is at war. At the end, I felt invincible and could defeat the evil god. Apart from the protagonist's own territory, what about other people's territory? How did it develop, how was it invaded and transformed into evil? No, it just looks boring.

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I remember that the protagonist of this kind of holographic simulation game more than ten years ago was a person who played the game, and then there was a protagonist who was reborn ten years ago, covered with liver, and determined to be the first person in the game. Now there is the theme of the fourth natural disaster. Aliens package another world as a game, and the lord farming style uses Blue Star people as free labor cannon fodder. Because players can be resurrected infinitely, they have nothing to fear and just play. On the contrary, games like Infinite Horror and Horror Broadcast are terrible because players cannot be resurrected at will. What's horrifying to think about is that in these novels, including this one, how do you feel that the truth can be connected together? ? ? Horrible. The start was amazing, and then after Wancheng. . . The player's upgrade is in the traditional online game mode, and the building upgrade may be based on the web game mode. All strange and weird equipment are converted into standard units and then upgraded. 1 It is not easy to write such a text, so I personally feel that once a certain character (Jia Yi) is written as a wise and almost demon, it is easy to collapse or write other people as mentally retarded 2 The version of the protagonist is updated too fast, I wish I could open a picture every ten days, and the players are completely reduced to leek cannon fodder. If the drawing is slower and the player level rises, it should not be weak 3 Wancheng was really exciting before, and it can be seen that the author's idea before writing was quite amazing.

I haven't read it yet, so I've collected it first. You were obsessed with the last book. If you have nothing to do, read the book review section. Some of the bad points in the early stage can be corrected. If you want to get out of the quagmire of life, you have to be careful and interact more with readers. There will never be a way out by just writing blindly. Also, if it is behind the scenes, don't end up on your own. You can create a game ranking list and write about these great players from the perspective of God, or write from the perspective of the game boss. Everything is under control. In addition, there is an old problem with the previous book. You can write some Western fantasy, but you cannot have dozens or hundreds of chapters devoted to Western fantasy. The main content must be mainly Eastern fantasy. I think it is more reasonable to write it in 7/3.

The protagonist's golden finger presses too hard! The lord cannot open the map, the natural disaster cannot defeat the monsters, and the natural disaster group is destroyed at every turn. The lord or NPC can only solve it by taking action, and the natural disaster must be given a large amount of rewards. I feel like the protagonist is a nanny, caring for family members, NPCs, people, and natural disasters. The overall theme is good, but the skills and talents are repeatedly mentioned, there is no need to be so detailed! More than half of a chapter has to be crossed, and even skipping chapters later does not affect reading. Personally, I still like to see faster upgrades, more resources, more natural disasters, more lords, and more maps. (The progress is too slow now) The protagonist is too poor, too poor, too poor! ! ! You can't build buildings, recruit natural disaster soldiers, raise guards, level up, or open maps, but any lord can fight the protagonist. Compared with other natural disaster novels, the protagonist is a bit too kind. The commission is small and the tail sword is given a lot of rewards. As a result, you are so poor that you sell everything to outsiders. Aren't you afraid of capitalizing on the enemy? You can sell more to players, because even the players may not be able to afford the barracks props and medicines. The player's sub-profession is blank, and a large number of people have to be hired to train outsiders. Natural disasters are just external cannon fodder, and the main force of the territory is the lord, the lord's guard and the natives! Since it is called a natural disaster, quantity or quality should at least account for the same, right? After hundreds of chapters, there are only a few thousand natural disasters. If the number is not enough, can it be called a natural disaster? Natural Disaster was thrown into the street as soon as he was caught by the hostile lord. Then the plot progressed too slowly. Is it necessary to upgrade to the fourth level? ? ? Hundreds of chapters (including internal fighting in guilds, real-life writing, forum writing, details before and after talents, details about material division, lord competition, and map opening) are written intermittently. I want to write about anything, and I can write about anything. The further back I read, the more tired I became. The book I felt so good about collapsed~~~

I always feel that the players in this book have been brainwashed by the protagonist's cheats, and their respect for the protagonist is something I have never seen in a game. But if the players are all puppets, or contaminated, then this kind of respect is very reasonable.

I finished reading more than 70 chapters in three or four hours. Because I skipped through it, only about 20 chapters really pushed the plot. The rest of the text was about picking up drops, player deaths, player gossip, and the strategies between trolls on the Blue Star forum. If the author could simplify these texts and downplay the Blue Star side, it would be great unless the Blue Star pattern shocked the Three Kingdoms world before writing, to truly promote the Three Kingdoms plot you envisioned. If it continues to be like this after it is put on the shelves, it will not only cut players' leeks, but also cut readers' wallets the most. If you read these articles for 10 to 20 starting coins, you will be asked if you are afraid. A top-up of 1,000 yuan to read the plot is probably only half of the Three Kingdoms. But I think it's just a novel setting. I usually run away from this kind of novel as soon as it's on the shelves, and I can't hold it in my wallet. Do you know why many themes of the Fourth Natural Disaster are not popular? The themes are obviously very novel, and people still want to read it. However, they are all about cutting the leeks of the natural disaster from the players. One hundred chapters of text, and thirty or forty chapters are promoting the plot. This is not bad. Some are 20 chapters, and the others are just the leeks of the readers. Eighty or ninety percent of the readers ran away directly, and the rest ran away after reading scattered pieces.

I have finished reading it, but there are a few bad points. The management of the protagonist's territory is messy and there is no clear plan. It gives the impression that the territory is meant to capture a county in words. However, the buildings, planning, and military strength of the territory give the impression that they are just a few small shabby houses with more than ten or twenty soldiers. Does the author know what the concept of a county is? Are you the only one with a few ruined buildings in your territory? At the very least, you need to plan your territory first! Not only must the wall be upgraded to a city wall, but the city wall must be expanded, the territory area must be expanded, the town streets must be planned, and the buildings such as eating, drinking and drinking must be planned in an orderly manner. Planting areas, living areas, trading areas, and entertainment areas must also be planned. If you don't understand, you can refer to the real imperial city, which is the original old capital. There are still troops, just how many? If someone from the government or other capital forces enters the game, takes the lead in causing trouble, and directly brings people to your city lord's mansion to test you, how will you respond? You think players won't cause trouble, right? No way? With a territory as big as a county, and with so many abyss monsters, the city wall of your territory must be at least hundreds of miles wide. At the very least, the city wall must have alloy walls, bare city wall guards and city guards, as well as patrols and guards. The total number of troops required is at least 200,000, and there must be legions that can be drawn out to fight. And every time something happens, you are responsible for it. Do you think you are qualified as a lord? For the territory of a county, at least you have to plan several different types of legions, right? Not to mention too much, in addition to the 200,000 patrolling and guarding the city, at least five or six legions are needed. Each legion will first discover 100,000, and specially build military camps to provide soldiers with daily training. The training can be upgraded. Otherwise, the soldiers have to provide resources to upgrade, which is inherently unreasonable. Logistics soldiers are not needed. A warehouse can be set up with dedicated personnel to manage it and set a function. Each soldier has a backpack, which does not need to be large, as long as it can hold living supplies. After the death of soldiers, materials will automatically return to the warehouse. As for the unified distribution of weapons and armor. These are such a large territory foundation. Now the territory feels like a small shabby village with only a dozen buildings, dominating more shabby small villages. It is also a live broadcast function, and the pictures of other people playing with friends are displayed on the display screen! Your game not only cannot be displayed on the real-world display screen, but also does not have a live broadcast function. It can become popular, which is very speechless. It's like a friend told me that I played a game and that as long as I invest in it, I can multiply the return rate dozens of times. Then I let He showed me what kind of game it was, but he said to me, I'm sorry, you can't see it. Not only you, but no one can see what this game is like. After a while, he showed me a picture. You see, this is the picture in the game. It's awesome. I would sneer, the P-picture technique is okay. Then after a while he would show me a few seconds of the video. What do you think I would think? Oh, where did you find the production team? They spent a lot of money! Didn't the author carefully check the information before writing the book? Didn't you learn from other lords' writings on how to plan their territory? Have you never searched online to find out what ancient cities were planned and what their scale was? Very speechless.

On the player's side, there is no penalty or reward for death, there is no penalty for resurrection and no resurrection time, and there is no drop when killed. With this setting, even opponents who are equally matched don't know how to lose, so they have no expectations for the subsequent plot. As a conceptual god, he has already defeated his opponents on a level

If you update like this, book friends will start to support them. Once the subscriptions are maintained, the subscriptions will drop. Once the data is dropped, it will start to get messy. Then it will change to weekly updates, and book friends will start abandoning the books, and then it will change to monthly updates. Basically, it will be unfinished or eunuch is not far away, so you can tell the ending of a book from the updates.

Therefore, the strength of the Land of Stars is gone. The luck of the characters in the Three Kingdoms world can defeat all the races of the stars. I feel that the stars are not as good as the abyss. The world eroded by the abyss is not only the Three Kingdoms, but this book only has the Three Kingdoms. The result is that the characters of the Three Kingdoms are pulled out to register, and the luck of the entire city is defeated by the top 100...

Where did this habit come from, always praising the protagonist in a roundabout way, and moreover, the lord is the lord, sir, isn't it awkward to call him lord? Also, what is a player? Most of the time, the situation is to collapse and sell out. . .

How to write the player as if he regards the lord as his master?

It's a bit wet, the Scourge Army has always been the vanguard, and then the lord takes action again, and it keeps repeating

After reading 30+ chapters, please share your thoughts. This is a book, except for some flaws in the economic development mechanism😒 It feels like the author wants to ridicule capitalists, but he does not understand the concept of sustainable development, and there is a sense of deja vu. Beekeepers know how to keep 30% of the honey when they harvest it. As a player, you harvest too many resources in one death... If this mechanism is not changed, unless the game can actually improve the physical quality of the human body in reality or other tangible benefits, no matter how rich and colorful the content is, not many people will be left. This itself is not really a lawn mowing game for making money. This kind of harvesting idea is too ridiculous 😅😅😅 The creativity is quite good and the writing is okay, but the economic system is built like a rat in Jump Over the Wall💩

The author said that the work is almost finished. As a reader who has read the first chapter, I am really very sorry. Here is my emotion. The theme of the author's novel is actually very easy to create. After all, there are infinite space planes to conquer, so it should be serialized for a long time, just like the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms. It's a pity that the author's writing skills are not good enough. The first is the plot framework. Writing Hang Yu as invincible is not a problem, but writing his villain is too mentally retarded. Whether it is the abyss or other territories, basically seeing Hang Yu's territory, thinking that the human territory is a soft persimmon, and then kicking the iron plate. This kind of plot in the early stage is not bad, but the human race is relatively weak. But as time progresses, it will no longer work for the later villains to still be this mentally retarded. Everyone is at level seven, so why do you dare to underestimate Hang Yu. If he were a villain with normal intelligence and saw that a weak human race could reach the seventh level, he should be more cautious. Just like us humans look down on ants because we are stronger than ants, but one day when you see an ant as big as one meter, will you still think that this ant is weaker than humans? The narrative rhythm of the plot is also very problematic. Either the story advances too slowly or too fast, otherwise it ends hastily. For example, in the Star Competition, the game was clearly a breakthrough game in the early stage, and the chicken game was described as very game-like, but the game of occupying the territory suddenly ended hastily (because it was so bad that I forgot what the game was called). The progress of opening the map is also terrible. The rhythm was very good in the early stage (to Wancheng), but later the story suddenly went fast and slow, and then the map was hastily ended and the next chapter started. Then he suddenly accelerated and pushed horizontally (I remember that the author seemed to double-open at this time). Note: The speed of opening new maps is extremely fast, but there are almost no stories in them. They are all about recovering the natives, fighting into the abyss, and the cycle starts over and over again. Obviously, in the early stage, we will specifically describe how the Abyss Walkers struggled, how cunning the Abyss was, and how the natives struggled. Later, they suddenly turned into natives who accepted their heads and worshiped them, and the Abyss gave away their heads without any brains. There is another pity that the author forgot a lot of early settings, that is, eating the book and eating the settings. The description of the Scourge Army in the early stage was very good, but in the later stage, it suddenly became a stranger. Then it was always described that the Calamity Lord recruited worshipers, but the worshippers never appeared. The generals who appeared in the early stage almost did not appear in the later stage. I wonder if the author still remembers Cao Zhen, Wang Shuang, and Ma Jun? All in all, it's a good thing that it's over, but it's a pity for this subject matter.

As an old customer of this book, I would like to say a few words. Let's not mention the book. First, let me talk about the author. He wrote two chapters a day and only one chapter after it was put on the shelf. Secondly, the author does not care about the life and death of readers. He often updates at a certain point in the morning, which is okay. The key point is that sometimes he does not update and will not notify you. Then the author will not chat with readers and says that he will save comments for reading. Why don't you reply? ? Next, let's talk about the story. First of all, the subject matter is good and novel, but the author can't stand it. Real-life players are always pushing for it, and they always overturn their own settings. I don't think your player will resurrect the spirit and let him drop it all the time. Let's wait until you have collected enough. Moreover, every time the player is killed, he can't defeat the group leader and appears again. This routine has always been boring. There is almost very little useful information. Sometimes every time It's really boring to improve luck skills in just a few chapters. What we want to see is exciting battles. Every time the group leader is the last to be crushed, and the players are killed and the group leader reaps the rewards. It's so novel. I seriously doubt that the author is just here to cut leeks. There are more than 30 points in this chapter.

I watched Three O'clock in the Night last night, and the plot reached Wancheng. I thought it was quite interesting, the writing was good, the world view was grand, and the plot was interesting. But I just saw it today and the ending is less than a thousand chapters. This setting will definitely not be developed, it will definitely be unfinished, and such a good setting will be wasted.

It looked good at first, but the word count has been declining since it was released. There are countless planes in the abyss. You wrote more than 130 chapters in Wancheng. Do you plan to write 10 million words about the protagonist before he reaches level 8? I don't even know what you are thinking. With so many words, the reader's experience is reduced. Who will subscribe?

In fact, superpowers really shouldn't be brought into the real world. If there were no superpowers invading the real world, players would just treat it as a game. But when players gradually awaken to their superpowers, they may feel fearful, uneasy, or excited. They may no longer be able to play it as a normal game, and they may feel restrained.

What I think is the funniest part of this book is that it starts off by bragging about how expensive the high-ranking soldiers of the higher-ranking races are. The human race is poor but cheap but it turns out that the high-ranking soldiers of the highest-ranking races only have tens of thousands of magic crystals and a little bit of family flesh. Then it describes how much energy and resources it takes to cultivate the fourth-level Canglong Guard Then the value of magic crystals in the later period is directly inflated to tens or even millions It gives people the impression that the input and output of cultivating low-level soldiers is far lower than directly recruiting high-level soldiers. This seems to be a cheap feature of self-comfort at the beginning. Secondly, the price of each soldier is currently known and compared. Level 10 skeleton is 100 magic crystals, and level 11 is 500. As a result, the price of the highest level race in level 4 is tens of thousands of magic crystals plus flesh and blood materials. How is this price set? It was agreed that the upper-level race would have a high starting point but be extremely expensive, and the lower-level race would have a low starting point but be cheap?

I work full time and have two jobs, so I'm most afraid of this. If you work full time, you will expect higher grades and the pressure will increase. Double-player, it is easy to be distracted, and it will be easy to get lost in the plot, resulting in a drop in level and fewer updates. Once the update is discontinued, those who continue to read will keep reading, and newcomers will not come in. When I read a book, I first look at the ratio of the number of comments to the number of chapters. There are 100 chapters, and there are less than 10 comments, so I basically won't read it. Secondly, updates made 2 days ago will not be included.

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The novel is quite good, but it is annoying to read because it always boasts about the lords. Also, it is too fast. Author, don't you have any concept of time? The development is too fast, which makes the other lords of the stars all poor. And in the game, there is no time to rush.

I have been bragging about how handsome and godly the lord is. I have repeated this sentence so many times. To be honest, has the author ever encountered an NPC who asked me to brag about him in a game? Everything else is fine. Still watching slowly.

It sucks? The pace of the novel changes suddenly, and the plot of the story is accelerated directly by Thunder members. It feels like a good hand has been played badly. It's a pity. If the rhythm is stable, it can be said to be one of the best fourth natural disaster novels I have ever read. The protagonist's character is also good, not bad at all, and not too toxic. Alas, I hope the author learns his lesson in the next book.

I gritted my teeth and finished reading. Those who are not rich can just finish Shouyang Mountain I don't have the nerve to watch later. Why? Because the rest of the series is about to completely collapse, and I rush all the way to the end, and I lose all my strength, but if you only read the first four books, at least you can still have a pleasant reading experience 😒

Overall, it was okay at the beginning, but the pace became faster and faster at the end. It started to collapse.

How big is his territory? Will his territory be given to a city like those cities in the future? I'm just talking about his base camp, not his territory. It won't be the finale. He said that the base camp must be as big as a county seat.