This Supernatural Three Kingdoms Game Is Brutal

I haven't read it yet, so I've collected it first. You were obsessed with the last book. If you have nothing to do, read the book review section. Some of the bad points in the early stage can be corrected. If you want to get out of the quagmire of life, you have to be careful and interact more with readers. There will never be a way out by just writing blindly. Also, if it is behind the scenes, don't end up on your own. You can create a game ranking list and write about these great players from the perspective of God, or write from the perspective of the game boss. Everything is under control. In addition, there is an old problem with the previous book. You can write some Western fantasy, but you cannot have dozens or hundreds of chapters devoted to Western fantasy. The main content must be mainly Eastern fantasy. I think it is more reasonable to write it in 7/3.

The protagonist's golden finger presses too hard! The lord cannot open the map, the natural disaster cannot defeat the monsters, and the natural disaster group is destroyed at every turn. The lord or NPC can only solve it by taking action, and the natural disaster must be given a large amount of rewards. I feel like the protagonist is a nanny, caring for family members, NPCs, people, and natural disasters. The overall theme is good, but the skills and talents are repeatedly mentioned, there is no need to be so detailed! More than half of a chapter has to be crossed, and even skipping chapters later does not affect reading. Personally, I still like to see faster upgrades, more resources, more natural disasters, more lords, and more maps. (The progress is too slow now) The protagonist is too poor, too poor, too poor! ! ! You can't build buildings, recruit natural disaster soldiers, raise guards, level up, or open maps, but any lord can fight the protagonist. Compared with other natural disaster novels, the protagonist is a bit too kind. The commission is small and the tail sword is given a lot of rewards. As a result, you are so poor that you sell everything to outsiders. Aren't you afraid of capitalizing on the enemy? You can sell more to players, because even the players may not be able to afford the barracks props and medicines. The player's sub-profession is blank, and a large number of people have to be hired to train outsiders. Natural disasters are just external cannon fodder, and the main force of the territory is the lord, the lord's guard and the natives! Since it is called a natural disaster, quantity or quality should at least account for the same, right? After hundreds of chapters, there are only a few thousand natural disasters. If the number is not enough, can it be called a natural disaster? Natural Disaster was thrown into the street as soon as he was caught by the hostile lord. Then the plot progressed too slowly. Is it necessary to upgrade to the fourth level? ? ? Hundreds of chapters (including internal fighting in guilds, real-life writing, forum writing, details before and after talents, details about material division, lord competition, and map opening) are written intermittently. I want to write about anything, and I can write about anything. The further back I read, the more tired I became. The book I felt so good about collapsed

I always feel that the players in this book have been brainwashed by the protagonist's cheats, and their respect for the protagonist is something I have never seen in a game. But if the players are all puppets, or contaminated, then this kind of respect is very reasonable.

I finished reading more than 70 chapters in three or four hours. Because I skipped through it, only about 20 chapters really pushed the plot. The rest of the text was about picking up drops, player deaths, player gossip, and the strategies between trolls on the Blue Star forum. If the author could simplify these texts and downplay the Blue Star side, it would be great unless the Blue Star pattern shocked the Three Kingdoms world before writing, to truly promote the Three Kingdoms plot you envisioned. If it continues to be like this after it is put on the shelves, it will not only cut players' leeks, but also cut readers' wallets the most. If you read these articles for 10 to 20 starting coins, you will be asked if you are afraid. A top-up of 1,000 yuan to read the plot is probably only half of the Three Kingdoms. But I think it's just a novel setting. I usually run away from this kind of novel as soon as it's on the shelves, and I can't hold it in my wallet. Do you know why many themes of the Fourth Natural Disaster are not popular? The themes are obviously very novel, and people still want to read it. However, they are all about cutting the leeks of the natural disaster from the players. One hundred chapters of text, and thirty or forty chapters are promoting the plot. This is not bad. Some are 20 chapters, and the others are just the leeks of the readers. Eighty or ninety percent of the readers ran away directly, and the rest ran away after reading scattered pieces.

I have finished reading it, but there are a few bad points. The management of the protagonist's territory is messy and there is no clear plan. It gives the impression that the territory is meant to capture a county in words. However, the buildings, planning, and military strength of the territory give the impression that they are just a few small shabby houses with more than ten or twenty soldiers. Does the author know what the concept of a county is? Are you the only one with a few ruined buildings in your territory? At the very least, you need to plan your territory first! Not only must the wall be upgraded to a city wall, but the city wall must be expanded, the territory area must be expanded, the town streets must be planned, and the buildings such as eating, drinking and drinking must be planned in an orderly manner. Planting areas, living areas, trading areas, and entertainment areas must also be planned. If you don't understand, you can refer to the real imperial city, which is the original old capital. There are still troops, just how many? If someone from the government or other capital forces enters the game, takes the lead in causing trouble, and directly brings people to your city lord's mansion to test you, how will you respond? You think players won't cause trouble, right? No way? With a territory as big as a county, and with so many abyss monsters, the city wall of your territory must be at least hundreds of miles wide. At the very least, the city wall must have alloy walls, bare city wall guards and city guards, as well as patrols and guards. The total number of troops required is at least 200,000, and there must be legions that can be drawn out to fight. And every time something happens, you are responsible for it. Do you think you are qualified as a lord? For the territory of a county, at least you have to plan several different types of legions, right? Not to mention too much, in addition to the 200,000 patrolling and guarding the city, at least five or six legions are needed. Each legion will first discover 100,000, and specially build military camps to provide soldiers with daily training. The training can be upgraded. Otherwise, the soldiers have to provide resources to upgrade, which is inherently unreasonable. Logistics soldiers are not needed. A warehouse can be set up with dedicated personnel to manage it and set a function. Each soldier has a backpack, which does not need to be large, as long as it can hold living supplies. After the death of soldiers, materials will automatically return to the warehouse. As for the unified distribution of weapons and armor. These are such a large territory foundation. Now the territory feels like a small shabby village with only a dozen buildings, dominating more shabby small villages. It is also a live broadcast function, and the pictures of other people playing with friends are displayed on the display screen! Your game not only cannot be displayed on the real-world display screen, but also does not have a live broadcast function. It can become popular, which is very speechless. It's like a friend told me that I played a game and that as long as I invest in it, I can multiply the return rate dozens of times. Then I let He showed me what kind of game it was, but he said to me, I'm sorry, you can't see it. Not only you, but no one can see what this game is like. After a while, he showed me a picture. You see, this is the picture in the game. It's awesome. I would sneer, the P-picture technique is okay. Then after a while he would show me a few seconds of the video. What do you think I would think? Oh, where did you find the production team? They spent a lot of money! Didn't the author carefully check the information before writing the book? Didn't you learn from other lords' writings on how to plan their territory? Have you never searched online to find out what ancient cities were planned and what their scale was? Very speechless.

On the player's side, there is no penalty or reward for death, there is no penalty for resurrection and no resurrection time, and there is no drop when killed. With this setting, even opponents who are equally matched don't know how to lose, so they have no expectations for the subsequent plot. As a conceptual god, he has already defeated his opponents on a level

Therefore, the strength of the Land of Stars is gone. The luck of the characters in the Three Kingdoms world can defeat all the races of the stars. I feel that the stars are not as good as the abyss. The world eroded by the abyss is not only the Three Kingdoms, but this book only has the Three Kingdoms. The result is that the characters of the Three Kingdoms are pulled out to register, and the luck of the entire city is defeated by the top 100...

If you update like this, book friends will start to support them. Once the subscriptions are maintained, the subscriptions will drop. Once the data is dropped, it will start to get messy. Then it will change to weekly updates, and book friends will start abandoning the books, and then it will change to monthly updates. Basically, it will be unfinished or eunuch is not far away, so you can tell the ending of a book from the updates.

How to write the player as if he regards the lord as his master?

Where did this habit come from, always praising the protagonist in a roundabout way, and moreover, the lord is the lord, sir, isn't it awkward to call him lord? Also, what is a player? Most of the time, the situation is to collapse and sell out. . .