The King's Avatar: I Have a Guardian Spirit

Sorry, I just can't bear it anymore. Some of the characters in it are too one-sided. From the original characters of Zhongcaotang at the beginning to the original characters later, the evil of the negative characters is simply bad. I won't comment too much on the original characters for the time being. However, every character in the original book who has no dealings with Ye Xiu is also described in this way. He is unilaterally bad, as if he is pointing at them, and telling everyone "this is a bad person", "disgusting character", "everyone, come and scold him", it is very uncomfortable to watch. Liu Hao, Sun Xiang, and Jia Shiming did not just go in the direction of criticism in the original work. The description of them in the original work actually gives a feeling of tolerance, as if Butterfly Blue is looking at a group of children (they are indeed children), and you can also see the recognition of their professional players. But author, when you describe them, you have too much bias, obvious criticism, and too much psychological description, which vilifies and dwarfs them, which makes people uncomfortable. If such a one-sided character is allowed to force Ye Xiu out of Excellent Era according to the original plot, it will make Ye Xiu look ridiculous. I hope the author can consider that unilaterally belittling this supporting role does not necessarily make the protagonist more upright, but sometimes weakens the protagonist's character arc. Furthermore, in my personal opinion, both the protagonist and the supporting characters are children of the original work. You don't have to like it, but since you want to write a fanfic of the original work, especially a youthful and passionate novel about the love of e-sports and the pursuit of glory, then please be more tolerant of the characters in the article. The world of glory belongs to this group of players who are chasing the crown of the Goddess of Glory. Even Ye Xiu, Han Wenqing, Wei Chen and others who are at the level of ancient gods are only in their twenties. This is a group of teenagers who chase glory, dreams and victory. Only for myself, I read full-time fan fiction because I hope to see more possibilities in this glorious world. Excessive criticism will only dilute this passionate passion and make this glorious world stop shining. Okay, the rants are over, Balabala wrote a lot, and it also has something to do with the emotional output, but I don't really want to accuse anything, it's just... There's a bit of a gap... I really like the story you wrote, the author, of gathering ancient gods from all walks of life to chase glory together again. I like Ember very much, and thank you for the glorious world you described.

Do you think Zhou Zekai's writing is too invincible? Zhou Zekai is strong and ranks first among the five major titles, but a large part of the reason is because of his professional advantages. He is the proud son of a sharpshooter, capable of long range and close combat, as well as the two bug skills of Barrett sniping and dual control, which make Zhou Zekai's strength ranked first among the five titles. The other four major banned accounts in a single round are no weaker than Zhou Zekai, and even Wang Jiexi and Ye Xiu are stronger than Zhou Zekai. But you designed Zhou Zekai as if his operations are one level higher than the other four major banned accounts. And in the finals, he can still use random shots when he is hit by the Rain of Chaos? Are you dreaming during the day? It would be nice to be able to make effective displacements when all the buttons are pressed, and you can also perform the difficult skill of random shooting. What are you thinking?

To protect everyone, do not recycle garbage. Book friends who have read the novel full time should not insult their eyes

Da Sun, Lao Wei, Fang Shijing... A team that pioneered the first generation, this year's glory is very exciting.

Let me make a statement first! Yesterday was really a day off! Not a eunuch! I just woke up in a daze and still had a bit of a fever. When I opened Zuozhu, I saw a little cutie asking me to fix the basic settings. At that time, I was a little angry because I had just woken up. In addition, the cutie's first sentence was to suggest that I should fix the basic settings. I felt it was too arrogant, so I replied a little hastily. I took some medicine and thought about it, but I didn't feel good. What if the reader is angry and left, so I deleted it and replied again. First of all, there is the problem of the operator of the second Soxar. Xiao Kaitai insists that Yu Wenzhou is the operator of the second Soxar, saying that this is a problem with the basic settings. That involves a problem. Before Huang Shao made his debut with Yeyu Shengtuan in the fourth season, Soksar was the only god-level account of the Blue Rain team, and Fang Shijing was the second captain. According to what the cute little Lanyan 11 said, it means that Fang Shijing is serving as When he was the captain in the third season, he did not use Soxar. Fang Shijing was positioned as a golden free agent. He was a substitute when the players were in poor condition. He could play any profession. When the players were in poor condition, it meant that there were these professions in the team, right? Then after Lao Fang actually becomes the captain, will he still be a substitute? So who will be the operator of Soxar? In fact, I feel that this is just a simple logical problem... Secondly, it is about the attack speed of the rifle. This is indeed a mistake, but it does not mean that we don't know that the attack speed of the revolver is higher than that of the automatic pistol, higher than that of the rifle, and higher than that of the hand cannon. What I wanted to write at the time was that the recoil was greater than that of the automatic pistol, and the flying speed of the gun was faster. Then there was a clerical error, which has been corrected! There is also the issue of skill levels. It is true that Chongda did not indicate in the original text that we changed it ourselves... Phew, that's about it! I didn't feel aggrieved after saying that! I feel a little sleepy after taking the cold medicine, so go to sleep! In addition, if you have any suggestions for the book, or if you think there are any flaws, feel free to mention them below. If I have my own ideas, I will tell you. If there are really flaws, I will definitely change it! Good night! Um... It seems a little inappropriate, so good morning!

By the way, I want to ask how many brothers want to start a group. Please check in under this post. If there are more than ten, we will start a group!

It feels like the angle of entry for full-time fans is very strange

This book is the best one I have ever read, including non-full-time fans. Other full-time fans are either self-indulgent or unrealistic.

Let me tell you! This novel has a new name, which is "The Story of a Full-time Master with a Wry Smile"

I think it would be more solid if teammates bought their captain Li Wen a Millennium Brick to hang around his neck 😜