The Immortal Kingdom Falls

I heard that there's a smart recommendation feature for books that reach 100,000 words. I hope someone will see my book. I never imagined that I could actually write down the story I had in mind, and that the story wouldn't fall apart too much.

#New Book Preview# [Content]: A will, a turbulent and unpredictable dispute. The sky was torn apart, the mountains and rivers were destroyed, and the male protagonist was the only survivor of the fall of the immortal kingdom, becoming the only cultivator of the old era.

Having followed the story to its current update, here are my brief thoughts. Firstly, I think the integration of the world-building and main plot is quite good, and the protagonist's personality is relatively well-developed. The plot progression doesn't feel like a mere assembly line, as some online novels do. Overall, it's good, but some details aren't handled very well.

Ugh, so boring. It's normal for the popularity to be so low. You write a world polluted by a Cthulhu, but then you give the protagonist a hesitant, indecisive, and somewhat kind-hearted character. How can that be popular? After ten chapters, the protagonist is still the same old idiot. I don't even know if he has any special abilities. The first few chapters were also completely confusing.

To be honest, the beginning of this book was really boring. The world-building is quite interesting now that it's been established, but the plot progression feels rather chaotic at the moment. Too many things happen abruptly without much foreshadowing. However, I'll still support it, as it promises to be a rather unique story.

There's an indescribable, eerie beauty to it. Although the content is cruel, it also seems quite ordinary. The entire text revolves around cannibalism, which is chilling.

A corrupt and bleak era, a madly obsessed ruler, rampant and terrifying demons and gods, the threat of invaders coveting the Eastern Lands, the fall of the Immortal Kingdom, and the last cultivator. The author's imaginative ideas add much brilliance to this book, but some things are too abstract; I hope it can be more realistic.

It's really well-written; it's rare to find a novel that doesn't follow the typical online novel formula. The death of the Smoker really moved me; the last time I felt this way on Qidian was several years ago. But no matter how you define it, it's science fiction, a sci-fi post-apocalyptic story. 😠

What is this? Fantasy, add a little. What is this? Strange fantasy, add a little. What is this? Weird, add a little. What is this? Science fiction, add a little.

To briefly summarize the story background In this world, when the "Great Qing" faced invasion from Western countries, the previous emperor (actually, I'm not entirely sure how many emperors and dynasties there were) used the power of the celestial realm to repel the invasion.