Fairyland Falls

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"} [Content]: A will, a treacherous dispute. The sky was torn apart and the mountains and rivers were destroyed. The male protagonist was the only one who survived the fall of the fairy kingdom and became the only immortal cultivator in the old era. The male protagonist accepted a commission in Crowloft to find a lost will and protect a little girl who was assassinated. [Book Title]: The Fall of Fairyland [Author]: A Wild Dog (which matches my ID quite well) [Tag]: Eastern Fantasy [Status]: 36,000 words in series [Recommendation Index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Evaluation]: The male protagonist has the aura of a knight-errant, very hot-blooded and amazing. Although it is a fairy tale, it has the flavor of martial arts It is a bit slow to pick up (not sure, let's check again). You need to read Chapter 4 to get a glimpse of this world and the hero's life experience. I also had to bite the bullet and read the first few chapters. What the author wants to write should be a very complicated story. The style is like some great authors, and the writing style is also very sophisticated and complicated, but he does not have the fan base of great authors. This should be the reason why no one has read this book. (I looked at it and there was only one follow-up reader, that is me.) But it does not mean that this book is not good. If you keep reading, the rest of it is worth looking forward to. Good cheers to the author. [Pictures]: Pictures and text have nothing to do with it

It has a dragon-like feel, which refers to the writing style. Of course, it may be that I haven't read enough novels.

Why not continue writing from the beginning? After reading about ten chapters, the story begins with a small character in the fairy world. He is still a decent person and has no characteristics. It is much different from the beginning.

I heard that there will be intelligent promotion for 100,000 words. I hope someone will read my book. I really didn't expect that I could actually write down the story I wanted, and the story didn't collapse too much. In general, I want to write a very strange story (the first version of the world view setting is at the bottom), but I am indeed a newcomer and do not have such strong abilities. But after a little stumbling, I finally learned how to write a story. Although I am a little slow in updating, it is indeed a very happy thing to watch the world slowly become complete. If you think the story is good, thank you for liking it. If there is anything you don't like, please mention it in the comment area and I will try my best to avoid and correct it. First Edition World View Setting More than thirty years ago, under the leadership of a group of pioneers, the countries of Middle-earth completed the first industrial revolution and used excess productivity to complete the first bloody accumulation. The conflicts between the countries of China and Turkey began to intensify in this golden age of rapid development, until the eastern sea route was brutally and completely opened. The risk of national bankruptcy was transferred to the Tianhua Kingdom in the east through sea routes. When Tianhua's national power was declining, a group of kingdoms with divine right to kingship, including the Supreme Evangelical Kingdom, started a war with the East under the leadership of the so-called gods in Middle-earth, hoping to seize the many heavenly ways entrenched in the East. Until Tianhua was about to die, several small countries even cut off their territories and raised the flag of rebellion with the support of China. So those cultivators who were bound by the rules in the fairyland came down the mountain and drove back the Middle-earth after paying a heavy price. Even the archangels who served the true God of the Middle-earth fell. Although those immortals disappeared after the incident, the people who suffered on this land will always remember those figures. So as the scientific and materialistic ideas from China poured into the East, scientific cultivation of immortality and the cultivation of immortality to save the country became a wave of thought. With the strong support of Emperor Tianhua, the movement to seek immortality based on heavy industry began vigorously. Although they did not know that many of the heavenly realms in the East were either broken or gone crazy with the end of that war. So the more those who seek immortality seek the way of heaven, the more they fall into the abyss. Until three years ago, on a night that no one knew about, the fairy kingdom standing on the clouds fell to the earth. But Lu Yunsheng walked out of the fire in the ruins, looking confusedly at the unknown world.

Following the current update, I would like to share my thoughts briefly. First of all, I think this book integrates the world background and the main plot quite well, and the protagonist's character is relatively three-dimensional. The promotion of the plot is not as streamlined as some online novels. Generally speaking, it is good, but some details are not handled very well. The plot moves too quickly, and there are a lot of things that need to be explained, which can easily cause difficulty in reading. The hints about the truth behind the events are not obvious enough (it is understandable after all, the background is so, but it is still recommended to let the readers know more). The transitions between several big scenes can be handled more delicately, sometimes making it difficult to understand where the protagonist is and what he is going to do. In addition, it may be my personal reason. I always feel that the portrayal of some supporting characters is not enough, and the death of Biting Ciyan and Lich is a bit too hasty. (The above are all my personal opinions, which may include omissions during my reading. I encourage the author to write according to his own wishes. I hope this book will get better and better)

Oh, it's so boring. It's normal to have such a low popularity. You write a character who pollutes the world, but you have a hesitant and somewhat kind-hearted protagonist. How can this be so popular? Seeing that the protagonist is still that bird-like in chapter 10, I don't know if Goldfinger has it or not. The first few chapters are also confusing. The background is explained but it feels like nothing has been said. It's boring. Author, you should change the subject next time, or change the protagonist. This character is not awesome. Goldfinger is still a native. I don't understand.

To be honest, the beginning of this book is really boring. The world view structure is really interesting now. The current plot development has a very chaotic feeling. Too many things are too sudden and there is no foreshadowing. But if you support it, it will be a relatively unique story after all.

There is an indescribable weird beauty. Although the content is cruel, it seems to be very ordinary. The whole text is full of cannibalism, which makes people's hair stand on end.

In the decadent and gloomy era, the crazy and persistent rulers, the wreaking terror of ghosts and gods, the threat of invaders coveting the Eastern Land, and the fall of the fairy kingdom, the last immortal cultivator. The author's wild ideas add a lot of brilliance to this book, but some things are too abstract and I wish it could be more realistic.

What is this, fantasy, add a little bit. What is this, fantasy, add a bit. What is this, weird, add a bit. What is this, science fiction, add a bit

The writing is really good. It is a rare novel that does not use the clichés of Internet novels to write stories. The death of the smoker touched me. The last time I felt this way at Qidian was several years ago. But this is all science fiction, science fiction wasteland style 😠

It's too boring, I have no desire to read more

Damn it, cyber cultivating immortality is still a technological civilization that can change history and modify time. It's just that it's out of control and cultivating immortality in the cyber wasteland.

Briefly summarize the background of the story When the "Qing Dynasty" in this world encountered the invasion of Western countries, the first emperor (actually I didn't figure out how many emperors and dynasties there were) used the power of the fairy world through some means to repel the invasion of Western countries. In order to reform and become stronger than foreign countries, the current emperor decided to turn the country into a fairyland at all costs. The protagonist is the last monk in the immortal world, and the only immortal generation born in the immortal world after the late emperor borrowed the power of the immortal world (which has some special significance). After a distortion occurred in the fairy world, it was decided to destroy the fairy road. The protagonist is the last tombkeeper to ensure the realization of the plan. When the current emperor decides to reopen the path to immortality, the protagonist has to stop the emperor. The fairy world does have stronger power than Western countries, but the fairy world has been distorted, and the protagonist decides to prevent the emperor from borrowing this distorted power. In the historical background, it should correspond to the magical version of 1860-1870, the stage when the Taiping Rebellion failed and the Westernization Movement began. It's just that the ruler of this plane took a fancy to the power of immortals, and the representatives of the Westernization Movement failed in the first plot of this article. The Westernization Movement in this plane became the Immortal Movement.

I understand the truth, but why does your novel, which is obviously a fantasy system of cultivating immortals (perhaps with some elements of resistance and mechanical ascension), have the element "knight" in the label, which is usually used in Western fantasy novels? !

Tao and reason have changed, but it always exists. As long as it is not contradictory and chaotic, it will bloom new flowers. Even if it is contradictory and chaotic, time will allow it to transform into a new form from death. These processes are the Tao of that time.

It's not like the way a novel is written, but more like the way a script is written, or the way a script is written. What is explained is more of a description that requires a sense of the picture, a bit similar to the way a space stage play is written. He is too niche and basically cannot become popular. A simple description of the world needs at least about 1 million words to have a relatively clear framework. If it is really necessary to follow the writing method he described, it will need at least 10 million words to be considered good Even if it is unfinished, it must be at least 3 million words or more, otherwise, it will basically be lost to the public Last point, his is not original, it is a standard second design. The Shredder Named Snake, the Abandoned Garden of Eden, I have read another perspective written by an author, the perspective of creating this place, but I remember when I asked the author where this came from, he said that he was not original, and he also used other people's designs, but it has been so long, I don't remember what it was, but I remember that the book was unfinished. Well, here, by the way, for some readers of this book, if you can read it, which master has the skill and ability to help find it, or if the author sees it, can he recall it, I want to know where this setting comes from?

This book is a bit interesting, and it gives me the feeling of reading Earthsea for the first time. It is considered a good Grammar novel. Some Grammar novels are just messy things with a new skin. They are far inferior to this one.

The first picture has a poor sense of immersion. You should at least introduce how the protagonist came to be and whether he is a time traveler. There's a fight right from the start, and the description of the fight scenes is rubbish.

Today is the day you stopped updating for who knows how many days. Brother, when will you come back to write?

I can't stand the first chapter, what a stupid writing style

I came in from the recommendation point on the homepage. Everything is good, except whether it can make the protagonist sleep well hahaha. It would be better if there were some changes in the overall rhythm. Now I am a little tired from reading the previous dozens of chapters. Come on, author! The current two monthly passes for this month are all given to you.

Cheers, author. Good writing. Update soon.

It's very interesting. I support it by voting monthly. I hope the author can persevere.

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!