Rebellious Contract Beast

There is no problem with Qiu Yu's death, but the author wrote it too lightly. This important supporting role is really like a casually discarded chess piece. The plot of the novel needs to be arranged and designed. As an important supporting role, Qiu Yu is also a supporting role with a lot of emphasis. Her death itself should play a major role in promoting the plot and push a cornerstone for the growth of the protagonist. I don't know if the author failed to write it or if it was to pave the way for the follow-up. But for now, it's still broken. I can't see the follow-up content now, so I can't comment on whether it is reasonable or not. But judging from the plot, this is a big poisonous point. First of all, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist has just experienced a reversal. Qiu Yu's death can be said to have torn the relationship apart again, and it is not an ordinary pull, it is the kind of direct confrontation, and it is a tear that is difficult to heal. If the male protagonist is forced to get entangled with the female protagonist because of his weakness at the beginning, then after this plot, unless the so-called hidden thread is revealed, which can be said to endanger the male protagonist's life, the male and female protagonists will be in a state of discord. It is difficult to advance the plot during this period, and they will inevitably continue to separate, but this will lead to digressions. (Although personally, this hidden line is really poorly written and affects the reading experience too much) Moreover, the death of Qiu Yu at this stage directly makes the relationship between the male and female protagonists lack of lubricant. Especially in the new chapter, a big crisis broke out. It is obvious that the author should have abandoned Qiu Yu as a lubricant and used the hidden line crisis as a rough adhesive. It's very uncomfortable for my personal senses. I don't know if the alchemist line will be activated. At present, the author has buried the plot lines in various ways, especially the insertion of dreams, or the watery plot, which is quite discouraging. These writing methods are not a problem when conceived in the mind and used in movies and TV dramas, but in terms of text expression, they greatly affect the smoothness and perception of the plot. As for many people's criticism of the male and female protagonists, I can only say that I have read too many fairy tale books. Although the male protagonist is a bit selfish and cowardly, as a protagonist, there are not many problems (it may also be the author's own portrayal). The female protagonist may have a low emotional intelligence and is arrogant and complacent. In other novels, she is probably a female villain, but she is also consistent with the size of a different world. The character of the sister. The book itself is about the struggle between the male and female protagonists, and the fun of the tsundere (arrogance) young lady. Of course, the tsundere in the Z era has been compromised to the point of being arrogant. Putting aside the harsh words, there is almost no so-called arrogance, for fear of dissuading the weak audience.

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial"} [Content]: During the wedding ceremony, the male protagonist became the female protagonist's contracted beast. Because the male protagonist is too weak, the female protagonist is ridiculed by everyone, abandoned by the sect, and despised by the family. However, she was shocked to find that he was actually a Grade A contract beast. But why is he so disobedient? 😡 [Book Title]: Rebellious Contract Beast [Author]: I am not Heshen [Tag]: Alien Beast Style, Easy, Different World [Status]: 43,000 words in serialization [Recommendation Index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Evaluation]: This is a very interesting novel. ★The anti-routine plot is very interesting. Unlike the usual beast-monitoring style where the protagonist summons a contracted beast, the male protagonist of this book becomes someone else's contracted beast. ★The fact that the male protagonist becomes the contracted beast of the female protagonist is also very interesting. They are not the master-servant relationship of a conventional contract beast, because the female protagonist initially thought that the male protagonist was weak and offended him. Later, she found out that the male protagonist was actually very powerful and had to carefully remedy the situation. I'm looking forward to the emotional line behind it. ★The characters of the male protagonist and female protagonist are also very interesting. Both of them have somewhat arrogant personalities. The female protagonist was a bit arrogant at first, and the male protagonist refused to give in. Both of them are types who refuse to admit defeat. Let's see how these two proud people get along! [Setting] ★In this world, everyone will awaken their contract spirit when they are sixteen years old, and the lives of the two are connected. Contracted beasts are usually divided into four levels: A, B, C and D. The stronger the contracted beast, the more helpful it is to its owner. ★The male protagonist's golden finger is that he can cause other contract beasts to fear him and use the "red energy" generated by this fear. It is precisely because of this that others think the male protagonist is a very powerful contracted beast. ［Crowd］ If you are tired of conventional routines and want to read anti-routine novels; If you like alien novels; If you like strong female protagonists, then you are welcome to read it. [Author] The author was an old lv5 author before. He has a complete novel of four million words and has many fans. This shows that the quality is guaranteed and you can read it with confidence. [Picture] Let me show you my contract beast, her name is Xiao Hei (the heroine originally wanted to name the hero Xiao Hei)

Judging from the current development of the plot, with Qiu Yu's death in the latest chapter, it is impossible that Tsurumi did not know what the Lu family was like, but he still let Qiu go back. Death may be inevitable, and he also threatened the male protagonist. For the male protagonist to be afraid of his "dragon" identity, and for the contract between humans and beasts in this world to restrict the male protagonist's behavior is already completely embarrassing. Indirectly, Qiu's death diverted the male protagonist's hatred, and after that, he took out himself to restrain the male protagonist. (To be honest, this reminds me of Ace. When a character's influence exceeds a certain limit, he will die, but his death cannot be in vain. It can divert the target of hatred, deepen the protagonist's desire for power, and deepen the bond of the protagonist group.) Combining the introduction and character tags of the book, it can be expected that the protagonist cannot be separated from Tsurumi, so I think it doesn't matter if more people die in the future, it is nothing more than an experience pack. I have also imagined the subsequent plot; 1) The protagonist finds or cannot find Qiu Yu's tomb, chooses to endure, improves his strength and enters the next stage, completely breaks with Tsurumi or uses it to the limit. When the time is right, he can pull out the red general and create a wave of characters before dying, paving the way for the next stage of the male protagonist. 2) The protagonist finds or cannot find Qiu Yu's tomb, chooses to explode emotionally (it is estimated to be difficult), and may burn the city or explode, setting up the setting for the evil dragon in the future, killing everyone except Tsurumi, completely breaking with Tsurumi or using it to the limit. At the appropriate time in the future, the red general can be pulled out to create a wave of characters and then die, paving the way for the next stage of the male protagonist. 3) Qiu Yu's death was a prank by Tsurumi. Tsurumi wanted to let the male protagonist know that his status as a breeder does not allow him to be provoked, paving the way for the subsequent plot. The above are all my personal conjectures. Maybe the author's ideas may be better later, but I still like the character Qiu Yu very much, and I hope he doesn't really die like this. If there are comments that have different opinions than mine, please be merciful!

Abstract: The heroine is just raising a white-eyed wolf. He won't remember the good things he does to the male protagonist. He will write it down immediately after being slapped. If anything happens, he will just step aside. I really have you.

I want to know when Tsurumi Hatsuun will die. If he doesn't die, it would be a bit inconsistent with the development of your current article.

Isn't this the kind of thing where I don't know how strong I am, but others know how strong you are! It's just a mutant beast. Ever since the protagonist slapped Class B with claw marks, he still didn't realize that he was really Class A or stronger. 🥵

Stopped at 56. The author's character creation is very successful, and the male and female protagonists are very three-dimensional; the female protagonist has no big problem, she is just a genius with smooth habits, and breaks through the defense after encountering a huge setback, so there is no problem so far; The male protagonist is simply the reincarnation of Gong Changwei, very disgusting🤢

The main character's attitude of being neither tough nor soft really made me laugh. He ate other people's food and didn't take care of his master's emotions, and was kicked out. He wanted to show off his face, but he didn't dare to leave his house. It really makes me happy to be cowardly and embarrassed at the same time. When I saw the food prepared by others for my contract beast being mocked, I wanted to lick my face and eat it. I think you should stop being a Godzilla dragon and be your maggot. It's really a pity to let Na jump and twist like that repeatedly.

In a sense, the author is actually very successful in shaping the characters. This pair of protagonists is really a match made in heaven. I could have defended the male protagonist earlier, but now I can only say that it is not unreasonable for this pair of protagonists to get together.

Although this heroine is annoying, her living environment is like this, and her values ​​are inherently abnormal. But the male protagonist is a pure disgusting person. The images I can think of include but are not limited to bullying, timidity, superciliousness, self-righteousness, going back on my words, others are wrong and I am right. I hate the heroine to death while relying on others to feed me. I stopped watching later and died from the poison. To be honest, if I write about a villain who does all the bad things, then at most I feel that my values ​​are inconsistent, I don't like it and I just don't watch it. But the male protagonist's attitude of being a bitch at the same time made me very angry. If I didn't say it out loud, I would be really angry.

Personal opinion The first 10 chapters are like a young couple quarreling and they can't stand each other; 11-25, the heroine loses her temper and coaxes the hero; 25-? (Only read more than 40 chapters), the hero loses his wits + insists on being a white-eyed wolf (only wants to ask for benefits, is unwilling to give anything, and has a condescending face)

Analyzing the plot so far, many people are debating whether the protagonist is a white-eyed wolf. My opinion is that from the perspective of the protagonist, although he is a contracted beast, he actually has human emotions. The heroine disliked the protagonist in every possible way and scolded and beat him in the early stage, and then she catered to and fawned over him in the later stage. This was entirely due to the change in the protagonist's identity - from a beast without a grade to a grade A beast. It's perfectly normal for the protagonist to have the mentality of "you ignored me when I was poor, but you couldn't reach me when I was prominent." Many people say that the protagonist is a white-eyed wolf, but it is obvious that the heroine's recovery of status is entirely due to the protagonist. The family resources are also used to train the protagonist, and there is no doubt that they are all spent on the protagonist. You saw that the protagonist was grateful when Qiu Yu only gave him half a pill, but the heroine fed him to countless protagonists who were still ungrateful. In fact, you didn't see that Qiu Yu was good to the protagonist because of the protagonist himself, and the heroine trained the protagonist just for herself. For the heroine, the protagonist is a rebellious and disobedient contracted beast. Compared with other contracted beasts who are submissive and obedient under the influence of the contract, the protagonist with human thinking obviously seems "rebellious". But it is undeniable that the heroine does not care about the protagonist. She does not know that the protagonist is injured, and she will cut off food and force her when she is upset.

Unbelievable, I was deceived by this popularity and fed a lot of history. To be honest, if you look at the character cards, derivatives, files, and tags, there is nothing. Just a like will tell you what the ingredients are. If you say it is good-looking, there is no doubt that the protagonist of the Navy has nothing to do with primates, except The name and settings don't show that he is a smart person. He looks like a dog but he is actually a dog. He is both arrogant and upright. He thinks he is aloof. He eats other people's food but does nothing. He wants to be a waste and weirdo and others don't know what he is doing. He is extremely disgusting. His writing is illogical and unreasonable. Is there anyone in the comment section who says they don't want to read the same article? Please, can this still be washed? Shit is shit, and it's still highly toxic shit

It's extremely toxic. The introduction gives the impression that the male protagonist is arrogant and bullies (flirts with) the weak or young female protagonist. It's a sweet story. As a result, the heroine, at the beginning, was considered useless by the people around her because the protagonist was classless, and then she became so angry that she almost threw the protagonist to death. Later, the protagonist was considered a mythical beast, his attitude improved, and he was treated as a useful "dog". I couldn't find any emotional development with the protagonist in the early stages. Even though I knew the protagonist could understand human speech, I still treated him as a "dog" and expected him to be loyal and obedient to his master for no reason. The only maid who was good to the protagonist is dead. 6

Originally, my eyes lit up when the heroine appeared. It's been a long time since I've seen such a non-whitewashed and pretentious heroine. As a result, the character of the male protagonist is completely rotten. You can be stupid but kind, or bad but smart. You can even start out stupid and bad but learn lessons and keep growing. I appreciate that, but you can't be so stupid and bad. You can be smug, tender, and ruthless. It's very fragmented.

Why should Qiu Yu be the protagonist? The one who eats, drinks, and wipes the protagonist's butt is Tsurumi Chuyun. If a person who can't make the decision himself and doesn't understand anything is the protagonist, then he might as well suggest watching the overbearing director of the female channel. It's not the era of Long Aotian, so he won't think of the protagonist. You can still rise up without resources or power. According to the inference of the plot, people in this world obviously know about dragons. In such a world, people can still make decisions. It is obvious that there are existences that can threaten dragons. Under such circumstances, Tsurumi Hatsuun, who has a family and a sect, is not chosen. Choosing Qiu Yu is simply asking for death. The character of Qiu Yu exists purely to promote the emotional line between the protagonist and Tsurumi Hatsuun. The difference between the protagonist and Tsurumi Hatsuun is that they are humans and beasts, and they are destined not to have a silly love relationship. A young lady or a maid, even a fool knows the choice. Miss, in this world where human life is like nothing, Qiu Yu, a silly person with no background, has no chance at all. Besides, the little help Qiu Yu gave to the protagonist in the early stage has long been paid off. What's more, isn't it natural for a maid to take care of her master's pet?

What do you want to do, author? I read novels to feel uncomfortable? Write Qiu Yu to death, right? It's okay. I'm not free now. I'll report you every day when I'm free.

I should have abandoned the book two days ago, but I feel unhappy. Now in the story, Qiu Yu's great revenge has to be avenged. Although the revenge is very sloppy, now I completely abandon the book, I will report you.

The more I watch it, the more rubbish it becomes. The main character, like a sb, thinks he is noble but is actually rubbish.

I was deceived by this introduction and popularity. The content and introduction are almost the same as that of the main character who is not involved in human affairs and is worthy of the relationship. What you think is the plot, the male protagonist relies on bluffing to gain a good identity, eats and waits for death, surrounded by imaginary monsters. Perhaps the male protagonist is being kept, usually does nothing, but shows off his power at critical moments to intimidate the beasts. Actual content: The male and female protagonists mix together and torture each other. The male protagonist has no intelligence and the female protagonist is indifferent.

When Tsurumi Hatsuun became the heroine, I couldn't stand it anymore. It really doesn't matter how you clean her up in the future, but what she did to the protagonist before can't be smoothed out, so I can't accept it. Gone

According to the world view set by the author, because the contracted beast pulls the crotch, it can pull a proud man off the altar, directly engage in business, intermarry, and drive him out of the family. From the point of view, people are more valuable than beasts. Such a large family said that it is giving resources to her, but it is actually tilted to the contracted beast. This woman abuses the contracted beast and does not fully feed the contracted beast. From the perspective of such a cold-blooded family, it is hindering the progress of the family. The family just locked the woman up and sealed it, just to keep her alive, and sent another genius with a similar personality to take over. In my opinion, it is in line with the author's reasonable and cold-blooded approach of a cold-blooded family in a cold-blooded world where strength is respected. If your contract beast is ordinary, forget it. A-level contract beasts can suppress an era. This is not only a matter for you, a girl, but also the most important and worthy of attention of a family. Why should I let you mess around?

If this book were written normally the minimum guarantee would be 200,000

There are so few that it's hard to get monthly tickets, so I can only buy other books for you. Please squeeze in more. However, quality must be guaranteed.

It hasn't been updated yet, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this

I have read many well-recognized online works before, but I have never subscribed to a book. They were all pirated copies. This is the only book I subscribed to. I know that this little money cannot prove my love for this book, but I only have 3,046 yuan, and I will have to live on this money for a long time. I still have a tooth to treat. When I get rich in the future, I will definitely reward the author. Author, please, come back soon. I don't know why, but this book gave me a feeling that I didn't feel when reading those cool articles. Compared with those cool articles, it directly tore my heart apart. There is a girl in my heart that I have liked for nine years, starting from the second grade of junior high school. I like her very much and she looks down on me. I was unable to bridge the gap between us, and I felt that catching up with her was a delusion. When I was still thinking about watching Ninjago and playing with pirated Lego bricks all day long, she had already dated four boyfriends. I was unable to be on the same level as her socially, let alone reach the level she liked in all aspects. I just said it bluntly that I am a waste now. This book clearly resonates with all my deep desires for girls. I want her to recognize me, I want to protect her in her most difficult time, I want the most perfect way to die, the most perfect ending is to die for her, and then after I die for her, she can live a life of eternal happiness, safety, and no hardship. Thanks to this book for allowing me to enter and experience the kind of life I long for most. Of course, I don't dare to bully her like Shen Yi bullied Tsurumi Chuyun, what if she completely leaves me, haha. Author, you can even come back and write an ending. However, even if you don't come back, I will reward you heavily when I have money in the future. Thank you for your book.

Please update again soon, it's been three chapters, I'm already upset when I stopped updating at the end, I've been thinking about this novel for the past two days, I like to read this kind of ancient and daily novels, and after reading this, I started to feel that I can't stand the harem novel at all 😭 I've been forced to prepare a self-study AI deployment to write a sequel 😭, but I guess it won't taste like what you wrote. I've been waiting for you for a year, so come back soon.

He talks about "", but he doesn't do anything "" Speaking of grievances, it just depends on personal mood. Qiu is good to him, but he dares to risk his life to save people after giving him a level 1 elixir From the heroine's perspective, I started with a garbage contract beast, and then I beat him up for being irresponsible. After I found out that he was awesome, I fed him resources, and then I found out that this guy was an unfamiliar white-eyed wolf. He felt justified in giving so many resources to him. As it should be, there is no help when you are busy, you have to eat, and you can even go against your will and risk your own future to save a maid In this world, the weak and the strong can eat the strong. The male protagonist also realizes it, but he has to confront the female protagonist. The Lord also claims to be a civilized person, and he can clearly distinguish between grudges and grievances, which is simply funny For the kindness of a pill, he gambles with his own life For a grudge, he risks the future of the other party and the lives of the whole family It is uncomfortable to watch, especially when he says he wants to teach the heroine a lesson, but almost everything he does pushes the heroine to the end. Even though his main life is bound, he still wanders around. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, he would have died hundreds of times Just thinking about it makes me angry, especially seeing him grabbing pills everywhere, not only in his own yard, but also in other places This protagonist It makes people uncomfortable to watch. When he didn't save the maid, I thought he was a snobbish villain, and he was the protagonist of the villain. But when he risked his life to save the maid, I was speechless. He was both cool and arrogant, and he was trash

I really like Tsurumi Izumo after the genocide 😭😭, but it's a pity that the author doesn't update anymore

It's okay, it's a web novel after all, so even if the protagonist's character sometimes collapses and the plot is unreasonable, we can't be too demanding. This subject matter is still very good. This question might be more interesting if the purpose was to write well rather than cater to the audience and make money.