Rebirth Begins with Throwing Away Bai Yueguang

Although the heroine (should be Shen Wanning alone?) Has relatively few scenes so far, the author's description is still quite good. In the limited space, the image of a naughty and arrogant young lady comes to life on the page. Although the author is a newcomer, his writing skills should be very good. Although it is said that this kind of book is more enjoyable to read and the plot is more coherent, but in order to support the author, I still choose to follow up. I have some suggestions, not necessarily correct, just for reference: You can add more interactions between the male and female protagonists, especially the interactions during the ambiguous period are quite interesting. If you are really together, you will get bored if you give too much shit. Entrepreneurship is an important plot, but I feel that if the new book wants to attract people, the ratio between sugar-making and entrepreneurship needs to be adjusted, because the label of this book is also about campus love, and most of the readers it attracts must also want to read about love. Actually, I am not opposed to writing about entrepreneurship rigorously and describing the brotherhood in the dormitory. I feel that as a new writer who has just serialized a novel, if you want readers to keep up with it, it is best to give a little "sweetness" to each chapter so that readers are willing to keep reading. This is also determined by the genre of serialization. Finally, it is selfish, I hope there will be a single heroine. After all, bigamy is too unconventional in modern cities, but this title can at least guarantee that there will be no drama where Bai Yueguang pursues her. I hope the author can put it on the shelves soon!

Well written, don't be too supervisory

It's very interesting. I think this book is one of those that you can read carefully and slowly, and the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. I was immersed in it without realizing it, and before I knew it, I had finished watching it.

The author said that this book actually gives people a sense of picture. If the quality and quantity are maintained, this book should be able to make a good TV series.

The author will release it soon. I like the heroine and Daidai Feng of this book very much. I will order them all when they are released 😍

Author, my suggestion is that the commercial scenes can be appropriately reduced. In my opinion, the focus of rebirth novels is on emotions. Too many commercial scenes will affect the sense of reading. Readers who read rebirth novels like to watch the love between the male and female protagonists. Of course, this is just a personal suggestion.

When I first started reading this book, the character of the male protagonist was the most attractive to me. In terms of his attitude towards his ex-wife after rebirth, although he no longer liked it, he still maintained a peaceful attitude. This is already better than most of the peerless male protagonists in "brain-can" rebirth novels. After reading more than 40 chapters, I felt that the pace seemed to be too slow, the emotional line never appeared, the commercial line was obviously not exciting enough, and the whole plot seemed dragging. Later on, you can find that the author has obviously changed a lot, and the emotional lines have become more frequent. Generally speaking, the writing of this book is fresh and the character setting is quite good (my favorite thing), but the grasp of rhythm still has a lot of room for improvement. It's not that I'm a teacher, but when I see something I like, I always want to do my part to make it better. It can be felt that the author's performance may be a bit bleak, but talent itself does not need to be defined by others. I hope the author can stick to it. If this request is too selfish, not wanting to be a eunuch is also my last request.

I just like this kind of non-toxic and harmless plot. Only a free-spirited, dedicated, and able-bodied male protagonist will appeal to people and be a suitable male protagonist for urban romance novels. Rather than the male protagonist in some bad romance novels who can't express himself, has no ability to understand, has a weak ear, and falls into the same pit again after being reborn.

It's a rare urban novel. It's rare to find such a comfortable reading nowadays. Come on, the author. I hope you won't go to the palace. It's available for full subscription support 🙂🙂🙂

"Do you want it?" "I... Think" Looking at the watery desire in the author's eyes, I jokingly raised the two large monthly tickets higher. "What do you want?" "I want... I want... I want a big monthly ticket" Looking at the author's face gradually turning red, I couldn't help but be playful, "You said it too quietly, I couldn't hear you" The author couldn't help biting his lips, and his slightly trembling body showed his inner peace, as if he was I closed my eyes resolutely as if I were making a decision, trembling my eyelashes, and shouted loudly, "I want... I want more monthly tickets, please... Please give me all the monthly tickets." With a twisted pleasure in my heart, I filled the author's pocket with monthly tickets, injecting all my feelings for the book.

I first read this book that Feng Daidai discovered. After reading it, I think this one is better. I don't understand the business line, so I won't comment. At least the love line is more intense and attractive than that one. If the author writes a novel in an autobiographical style, the heroine of this book is indeed very attractive. I hope the author adjusts his mentality. All the past in reality are to encourage you to make more money in starting novels. Don't think about your ex-wife. Most people don't have the decisiveness of the characters in the novel, so lingering love will happen. Don't let yourself get caught up in your emotions. When I saw Gu's plot, I felt inexplicably heartbroken and sad. The similar plots I had experienced did not touch my memories, but they also made my body recall the feeling of love that never returns... This is the resonance between the characters and the readers, two people who have been heartbroken. Mr. Lu's mentality is right. When there is someone around me who I love and loves me abnormally, the pain in the past is not important. Even though I gave blindly in the past and could not love, I will still give to my current lover without any scruples, because she knows how to love me now and cannot hurt the current person because of past injuries. Overall, a 99-point masterpiece. The remaining one point will be automatically made up after the official confession.

This book is really well-written, unlike many rebirth novels that are just tool people except for pig's feet. The career is written with great care, and the feelings are also explained in a eloquent way. When it's time to express your feelings, you should run your career, run your career, and that's love👩‍❤️‍👨

Ask some of the heroines. I looked through it and couldn't find any place where it was explained clearly. Do you still want your ex-wife? I'm just telling you my personal opinion. If you don't want it, I'll leave first. Because I came to see my husband's crematorium.

So this book has a single female protagonist? Is anyone watching the rebirth single female protagonist male video?

What surprised me about this book was that the author was actually a man.

It seems that the background of the protagonist is not simple. His father was in politics, but he forgot about his deputy position. The uncle didn't say, but it should not be low. His brother-in-law is an executive in a state-owned oil company, and he is his nephew's father. Grandma and mother have the same profession, so their network of connections should be very wide. Grandpa didn't mention it, but I guess it's not simple. He is the only male in the third generation, let alone the protagonist. As long as he is not a dementia, with this background, he can live a life of no worries in doing business.

I think this book is better than the other one, and at least the logic is much better than that one. The author should work on the operation, look at how bleak the comment section is.

I have read a lot of rebirth articles and sweet articles. Recently, this one is really good. Which recommendation column did I get it from? It's not very clear. It's slow-paced but looks good. The characters are very real and sweet. The heroine is on the same level as Xinbao in my heart 😌, I hope the author will continue to persevere, come on.

It's a very good book, why doesn't anyone recommend it?

Ah! Are best friends popular now?

I finished it all at once. I haven't read such a comfortable love story in a long time. But I like to read a long paragraph. Now I have saved up. I will give you three monthly passes. Come on, the author.

It hasn't been updated in a year. It's the first time I've read a book and I've read it to death. 😭

If it's too short, add more precision

I just finished reading another book "The Rich Little Bankrupt" and I thought about why your book "The Rich Woman" hasn't been updated yet.

It's great. I've already given you all the recommended monthly tickets, so please give it a try~ If you subscribe elsewhere and get another monthly ticket, I'll give it to you. It's a pity that I saw you late. I've already voted one or two this month~

Don't overdo it