Talent Show, This Magician Is Tortured!

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} [Content]: The male protagonist traveled through the beginning and went to prison, unlocked the [Versatility] system, and seemed to see a bright future. However, "card magic"? What skill is this? Can playing cards reduce your sentence? Wait, you call this magic? [Book title]: Talent show, this magician is tortured! [Author]: Cun BA [Tags]: Urban superpower, system, comedy, criminal investigation [Status]: 46,000 words in serialization [Recommendation index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Evaluation]: Judging from the plot, the author should have never been in prison (confident). The prison plot is a bit ridiculous (don't ask, I know if you ask🌞), but it does not affect the subsequent plot. Because the system requires the male protagonist to do good deeds in order to gain points, the male protagonist is relatively positive, not greedy, does not take credit, and will retire after being successful. The author's writing style is relatively concise, the language is a bit humorous, and the plot is suspenseful. It is worth reading. Book lovers who like criminal investigation, suspense, and are interested in urban supernatural powers can check it out. [Pictures]: Pictures and text have nothing to do with it

Does this book have too much common sense? Everything is wrong. I suspect it is a book written by artificial intelligence.

Where did the label of IQ Online come from?

After reading Chapter 20, I couldn't hold on. The person who had a fight with me earlier was not sentenced to 9 months. This is already ridiculous. He even went to jail in 3 days. . . . . If the efficiency was so high, there would be no need for detention centers. I don't know what the point of the subsequent skills is getting out faster and faster. The most ridiculous thing is that a self-taught outsider will really come into contact with something like a bomb, and think of a bomb as something else. Even if a public security officer wants to get involved in explosives, if you don't go through more than ten procedures, I'm stupid. Even more stupidly, the police ask citizens to defuse bombs. . . . . . It doesn't matter whether you can do it or not. The formalities alone will take you for 3 years, and you will be dismantled immediately. This is too much to think about. You know, blaming someone is something that normal people do. An expert dares to let you do it, and the director even agrees. The next day, everyone from top to bottom will be fired and imprisoned, with second-class merit. You think too much. If you really succeed in doing so, you will go to jail. The author writes a novel that is truly a romantic, divorced from all practical possibilities.

Is that IQ Online label serious? In order to reduce their sentence by a few months, they go undercover in a casino. Not to mention that this thing is not very dangerous. The officials here can't find anything. Unless they are trash, they go undercover without knowing what level of protection they have behind them and whether their hearts are evil or not. It's no different from the months they lost. Comparatively, the effort is not directly proportional to the benefit... Besides, the record cannot be cleared away. Regardless of whether it was set up by someone or not, the drunken fight is real... And the protagonist's performance of whether to be a coward or a tough one is really awkward for people watching... In other words, Golden Finger is relatively novel and a little interesting.

This book is no longer a question of IQ or not. Coming out of prison and lurking in an undercover casino, seriously? With a nine-month sentence, a bullshit captain can get a prisoner out of jail and let a man risk his life to go undercover? You want to come out and identify the other party, or talk to the other party on the phone under the protection of the police to deceive the other party into committing meritorious service and atonement. This is normal. Throwing the prisoner directly into the gang, is this something a human being can do? Is the prisoner's life not life? Are you, the captain, a Japanese leftist? You don't care about anything for your own meritorious service? What if the protagonist is exposed and dies inside, or is maimed? Who can take on this responsibility, just that bullshit captain?

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Just consider it for yourself and remove the label IQ Online.

The bombing was very serious. I have never seen a real bomb being defused, but have you seen a fake one? Will defusing bombs cost you so many people? There is also an unrelated person like Qian Xiuxiu, SB, right?

If you do a good job, think of it as a way to gain some virtue for yourself and remove the label "IQ Online"!

Is this book serious? Let's not talk about the American development of finding prisoners as undercover agents. Let's just say that the police want to investigate gambling dens. Do you think signal blocking and satellite phones are very high-end? Do you know about big data screening? There are signal jammers, and people who gamble will also have their mobile phone signals interrupted. Mobile phone signals often drop out here. Do you think there is no problem here? The secret is exposed as soon as they are compared.

I'm curious, 100 yuan principal, Texas. Win 880,000 in 3 minutes? Has the author developed a new gameplay?

It makes me feel so bad. All the law enforcement agencies, companies, and individuals in this world are the main character's lickers. No matter what happens, they should first put on the absolutely correct hat for the main character, and then use their imagination to make sure the hat is solid. Then wow~ the main character is so powerful, so great, and thinks so far and so comprehensively.

This book. . The best thing to think about is that if it is too real, it will be blocked. The author's writing is unrealistic, so it is unlikely to be blocked.

I know about the novel you wrote, brother, but your common sense is wrong. For intentional injury, you are sentenced to three months and then sent to prison. This is impossible. You go to the detention center, are detained, prosecuted by the procuratorate, and then sentenced by the court before being sent to prison. This process takes at least four or five months. Even if you are sentenced to half a year, you cannot go to prison. Generally, your sentence is completed in the detention center. Then outside police generally do not go into prisons, and they cannot find prisoners in prisons if something happens. It is even less possible for prisoners in prisons to plead guilty and meritorious service. Unless it is raised to the national level, it is impossible. It is recommended that the author first understand the judicial process before writing, otherwise it will look very dramatic.

The subject matter is quite good, it was slightly poisonous at first, but by chapter 28 I couldn't stand it anymore and it poisoned me to death. How cold and cold is it? A group of people who behaved awkwardly in various sex contests thought they were handsome and slipped away.

Some logic doesn't make sense. One moment, he said that he didn't have the memory of being a time traveler, and the next moment, he had the memory of a time traveler. Do you have it or not? Can you look at the first few chapters you wrote and try to figure it out?

It's so embarrassing to watch. It's just so brainless. Where did the IQ online label come from? Also curious about the author's age? I feel like I still need some experience before I can write better.

If you don't think it's toxic, just read two chapters yourself. He traveled through time like a retarded person. You would say that an 8-year-old child would tolerate it if he time-traveled into an adult. If the social experience was slightly less, you would reluctantly accept it. To say that the protagonist's mind is over 8 years old is an insult to the reader's IQ.

It's really a little bit poisonous. The police are too noobs. They are really just freeloaders of police officers.

Can you add more essence?

It is unlucky to add a label of "no system" even though the introduction has a system.