The Swordsman in the Martial Arts World

You can write it well, boss, come on!

You always emphasize that you can only live for one year. Does it mean that after one year, your book will become a eunuch? Funny. It affects reading a lot.

Don't be a lecher if you can ride a horse. I'm annoyed by such lecherous people.

To tell a joke, the women in the protagonist are all bad, and have been prostitutes, but because they are very beautiful, the protagonist will not refuse her. Readers, do you still want to read such a novel? The protagonist still really likes these pieces of shit

Fu Hongxue's sword technique is very simple to draw the sword and put it away, but he has practiced it for seventeen years

Hands are poisonous, pens are even more poisonous. The work of practicing penmanship is imitated by the east. I focused on Gu Long's sentences, but didn't learn much about the core. It seems very streamlined.

The plot is not good. We like to watch time travel, but we don't like to watch aboriginals. What's more, it would be even more stupid to become aboriginal after time traveling.

Protagonist: My martial arts skills are the best in the world! Passerby: Your wife is a piece of shit. Protagonist: My sword skills are unique in the world! Passerby: Your wife is a piece of shit.

The resume is really discouraging. The original version is "Enemy Head", although it gives people the feeling that they have been frustrated for a long time and need to vent. After you change it to "Celebrity Head", it will be a kind of murder. In order to gain fame, you only pick famous people to kill. Even if it is changed to "Enemy Head", "Evil Head" and "Bad Head" are better than the name.

The story of Gu Long's novel is good! It would be good to make a TV series, but reading his book is a kind of torture!

After reading forty or fifty chapters, I just imitate the ancient dragon, but the tiger cannot be compared to the dog. People are not happy to watch it, and the protagonist is getting more and more annoyed.

First of all, the author studied Gu Long, but what he learned was neither fish nor fowl; Secondly, Fu Hongxue is a magic sword, not a sword god, and there is a difference between gods and demons.

How can I put it, using the most unflattering things to forcefully write to improve the style, some systematic efforts, etc., Anyway, it is quite embarrassing. Everyone tells me that I am going to die, and I want to imitate Gu Long's writing style, but the result is that the tiger turns into a dog.

Rubbish, a fan of Gu Long's novels, Gu Long's writing style, and those who want to pretend to be Gu Long Based on the above, I would like to ask if there is anything of your own internal and external things that you can show readers The plot, imagination, and writing style are all Gu Long's

Gu Long admitted that the eight words in the article were for the sake of royalties. It is true that good people should not learn from bad ones.

The charm of the protagonist's character has not been fully realized yet, and he keeps pretending to be sexy. The plot of pretending to be sexy is not good enough, and he keeps messing with women, like a fool.

I wanted to write the flavor of traditional martial arts, but unfortunately I imitated it too much. I explained everything clearly to the enemy before killing him. This kind of thing is no longer popular in this era. What is needed is to kill decisively.

Well, how should I put it? The author thinks that his own happiness is more important than the happiness of the readers. There is nothing to criticize. Brothers, if you can't read it, just withdraw it.

People who are lustful but have no self-control, I am tired of myself, and I am with others.

The author has offended people. I can't find the right person everywhere.

First of all, the author seems to attach great importance to women's rights. I see that there are many chapters where the author uses the protagonist's words to explain his appreciation and understanding of women's rights. It seems that he wants to imitate Gu Long, because Gu Long has also been promoting equality between men and women in his novels. Unfortunately, the author followed the example of a cat and turned equality into women's rights. It is very It's often unlikable, maybe xxn will like it very much, but it's unclear whether the author's protagonist promotes women's rights just to sleep with the characters in the book, or if this is the author's true thoughts. If it is the former, then the protagonist is too hypocritical, and if it is the latter, it will not be likable. Secondly, the author does not seem to know much about history. He only saw Zhao Kuangyin bullying orphans and widowers to seize the Chai family, and felt that the Zhao family and the Song Dynasty they established should be eliminated. It can only be said that the author's view of history is quite superficial and naive.

Update! You are not allowed to write ten or twenty chapters on a day off during the New Year holiday.

I have left so many insults to my friends from the previous world, leaving notes and so on. How can you, the author, come out? Did it stop making money or something? Why did it suddenly fail?

Really, the more you get to the back, the more boring you feel. It's always a routine, and even a bit like a nanny. In the end, your strength is compared with Kakashi Hatake's. Everyone you meet is 50-50, everyone you meet is surprised, and then they are shocked by your sword skills. To attract girls, you need to be approachable and average-looking. The main thing is respect for women to make girls like you.

Are there any extras? What kind of ending is this, neither good nor bad? Why do we have to go back to the previous world? Even if we go back to one world and have a clone, that would be a good ending. But the protagonist dies?

The writing is really good, and the plot of the first two chapters also includes Zhang Youchi. I personally think it is the most Gu Long fanfic I have seen on this site. Many readers can't stand the protagonist's association with the girls from the brothel. I can only say that there is nothing wrong with Gu Long in the brothel. Gu Long does not require all readers to like his book? If anything, I can only say that there is nothing wrong with Gu Long in the brothel, But the plot of the third chapter after Wen Ruian is completely messed up, and the main style of painting is completely different. Gu Long pays attention to the freedom of the rivers and lakes, gratification and grudges, and the world. Even the perverted bad guys mostly pursue style. I don't necessarily say which one is higher and which one is lower, but the style of painting doesn't match at all.

To be fair, there are flaws but there are also many outstanding aspects. It does have the wild and unrestrained attitude of a swordsman, which is different from the recent bastard protagonists who have too many swordsmen (the handsome appearance of the protagonist is too exaggerated). Whether you watch it or not is a matter of benevolence and wisdom.

I had to write about unpopular heroes, so I didn't read this section. Sure enough, when I came back, I was a eunuch!

Ah, it's over? I've been watching it for a long time and wanted to wait until The Third World was over. Why did it end?

Can I read this book? I read the comment section and it was so annoying that I didn't want to read it. Brothers who have read it, please tell me.